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This is after the basketball match and TaaRey did not confess. Sharon is back and she does not have any asthma problem and SwaRon are in a secret relationship.

Swayam wants to talk to Rey because he sees Rey is very down nowdays and decides to talk to Sharon so both of them can talk to him about his problems
Sharon decides to call Rey to her house so that they can talk and Swayam is also there
Sh- Hey Rey, Mujhe tumse milna hai ABHI!
R- Okay meri maa but hua kya hai?
Sh- Tum bas abhi aa jaao phir main batati hun ki kya hua Okay
R- Okay aa raha hu bas 10 minutes mein bye
Sh- Bye
10 minutes later Rey reaches Sharon's house
R- Yeh lo aa gaya main
Sharon pulls Rey inside and he sees Swayam
R- Hey Swayam tum bhi yaha … look main tum dono love birds ke beech nahi aana chahta Okay
Sw- Oiye hum yaha apne baare mein nahi tumhare baare mein baat karne aaye hai
R- Mere baare mein?
Sh- Haa aajkal jis tarah se tum behave kar rahe ho Swayam ne mujhe sab bata diya hai
Rey starts to remember Taani and looks down
Sw- Rey please batana kya baat hai … This is the best time to tell us
R- Okay main batata hun par tum dono promise kar ki tum kisiko bhi nahi bataoge
SwaRon- Promise!
R- Guys, Im in love with a girl
SwaRon- WHAT?
Sh- Tum ab bata rahe ho hume
Sw- Kaun hai voh?
R- Guys, pehle puri baat toh sunlo. Yes main kisise pyaarkata hun but we are always fighting and aajkal toh voh mujhe avoid kar rahi hai isliye main pareshaan hun
Sh- Oh aisi baat hai but tum Reyaansh Singhania ho … I don't think voh tujhse zyada tak dur reh paayegi
R- But Sharon, ab toh mujhe lagne laga hai ki voh mujhse nafrat karti hai
Sh- Swayam tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho?
Swayam was thinking – Main toh almost everyday Rey se milta hun and I've never seen him fighting with any girl except … TAANI
Sw- NOOO … Aisa nahi ho sakta!!
ShaRey- Kya Hua Swayam?
R- Tu aisa kyun chillaya
Sw- Rey sach sach bata
R- Ha bol
Sw- Voh ladki jisse tu pyaar karta hai, Kahin voh Taani toh nahi hai?
Rey lowers his head down- Haa, I love Taani
SwaRon- WHAT!
Sh- Tum aur Taani … Yeh kab hua? I mean Taani toh … HOW … Swayam tum teek toh na
Swayam was in a state of shock … How could his best friend love his sister?
Sw- Rey yeh sab kaise hua! Tum aur Taani se pyaar !
R- Bahut lambi kahani hai
Sh- Toh short mein batao
R- Agar short mein batana hai toh I have been in love with Taani for a very long … I think even jab voh Shivam ko date kar rahi thi but it just took me time to realise how deeply and madly I have fallen in love with her
Sw- Toh ab yeh pata lagana parega ki kya voh bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai
R- Matlab tu teek hai with me loving Taani
Sw- Ya I mean thoda weird hai but since you love her so much main kya kar sakta hun
R- Thanks yaar
ReYam Hug
Sh- Ab main kuch bolu?
ReYam- Ha bolo
Sh- Taani is duniya ki sabse lucky girl hai
ReYam- Voh Kyu?
Sh- Pehle toh Swayam ,jo ki intna caring aur loving hai voh uska bhai hai aur upar se Reyaansh Singhania, jis par ladkiyaan marti hai voh uss par laatu hai
ReYam- Hmm
Sw- But ab yeh pata lagana hai ki kya Taani bhi tumse pyaar karti hai bhi ya nahi
R- Kaise?
Sw- Main usse baat karti hun … I'm her bhai I'm sure she will tell me
Sh- No ways. I will talk to Taani you know girls can talk eaiser and even if she doesn't tell me I will be able to tell if she likes you or not.
R- Thanks a lot for supporting me guys aajkal I've only been in tension because of her but I didn't want to tell Swayam because I didn't know how he would react.
Sh- Hey Rey isme thanks bolne ki kya baat hai … We are always there to support you
Sw- Ha Rey Sharon is right … we are always there for you and any problems related to you and Taani we are always there to help
R- Thanks guys you are the best
ShaReYam Hug
Next Day
Taani comes back to college as she had a meeting with AVP.
In the meeting AVP tells Taani to call all the dancers as she wants to give them back their rehearsal hall.
Taani tells Swayam to call everyone to the rehearsal hall
Gang reach Rehearsal Hall to find Taani
Si- OMG Taani tum itne dino baad
Ne- Ha itne dino kaha thi tum?
Taani was looking at Rey the whole time and SwaRon noticed that and smiled
T- Haa voh meri tabiyat kharab thi isliye aa nahi paayi
Sh- Okay toh yaha kyun bulaya?
T- Voh AVP ma'am ki orders thi
Just then VP and AVP enter the rehearsal hall
VP- Humne hi bulaya hai. Since you guys have won the basketball match we have decided to give you back your rehearsal hall personally
AVP- Yes aaj se yeh rehearsal hall is officially for dance
VP and AVP leave
After hearing this everyone gets happy and starts dancing … except two people. Taani was happy but whatever has happened these few days between Rey and her as made her lost her real smile and now as much as she was trying to be happy she could not and this did not go unnoticed by Sharon and Rey. Rey was having mixed emotions he was so elated that the rehearsal hall was back for dance but his love, his Taani was not with him then how could he be happy. Swayam noticed this and decided that it was the best time for Sharon to talk to Taani about her feelings. Swayam went up to Sharon to talk to her.
Sw- Sharon mujhe tumse baaat karni hai
Sh- Kya hua?
Sw- Yaha nahi akele mein
Sh- Teek hai bahar baat karte hai
Swayam and Sharon went outside
Sh- Ab toh batao ki kya baat hai
Sw- I think ab best time hai … tum Taani se baat karo
Sh- Okay abhi usse baat karti hun
Sw- Tum kar paogi na
Sh- Don't worry I know how to do this
Sw- Love you
Sh- and I like you a lot too … main abhi jaati hun
Sharon goes inside and calls Taani. She tells Taani to meet her in the locker room
T- Loh main aa gayi ab batao ki hua kya hai
Sh- Pehle baito phir main batati hun
T- Ab bait bhi gayi … bata bhi do
Sh- Taani I know main aaj hi aayi hun par joh bhi yaha ho raha hai mujhe sab pata hai aur jaise tum behave kar rahi ho I can tell something is wrong
Taani was surprised to hear Sharon saying this … Only one thing was going around her head whether she should tell Sharon about her and Rey
Sh- Taani you know that you can share anything with me … even boy problems
T- Teek hai main aapko batati hun par aapko promise karna padega ki aap KISKO bhi nahi bataenge
Sh- I promise now tell me
T- I love Rey (Sharon is happily shocked) but I know he can never love me because he has already fallen in love (Now Sharon is confused)
Sh- Who?
T- Kriya (Sharon bangs her hand on her forehead)
Sh- Are Taani, Kriya toh sirf ek attraction thi … Rey never loved her
T- Toh phir mujhe kya karna hai … ab toh Rey mujhse nafrat karte hai
Sh- (murmuring) Dono same sochte hai … Made for each other
T- Aapne kuch kaha?
Sh- Ha main keh rahi thi tum aisa kyun sochti ho ki Rey hates you
T-(Lost in her own world) Humare beech jo kuch bhi hua uske aur maine jo kuch bhi kaha uske baad toh … (Covers her mouth with her hand realising what she was about to say)
Sh- (Curiously) Aisa kya hua tum dono ke beech?
T- *smiling nervously* Umm … voh k … kuch nahi … k … kya ho s … sakta hai mere aur R … Rey ke beech
Sh- Kya chuppa rahi ho? Come on Taani … Hum dost hai … please batado.
T-(in her head) Kaha phasa diya bhabhi ne … Yeh baat toh aisi hai ki kisi ko bata dungi phir zindagi bhar uska saamna nahi kar panugi.
Sh- Taani nahi batana chahti hot oh It's okay par apne Pyaar ko ek chance zaroor dena aur Lady-Devdas mat banna Okay
T- Okay main aapki baat manugi
Sh- Abhi lets go varna sab ko shak ho jaaega
T- Ha lets go back
They went back to the rehearsal hall and everyone was surprised looking at them together
Si- Kaha the tum dono?
Ni- Exactly
T-*looking here and there* Voh hum …
Sh- Main CS hun aur Taani GS hai toh obviously kaam ke liye gaye honge
T- Ha vahi
Sh- Guys main soch rahi thi ki kyun na ek party ho jaaye … I mean main itne dino baad vaapis aayi hun aur hume rehearsal hall vaapis milne ki khushi mein ek party mere ghar par … 8 o'clock sharp … I don't want anyone late
Vi&Ni – Party, party, party …
Ri- Mere paas koi acchi dress nahi hai
Si,Aa,Ne – Mere paas bhi nahi
Ri- Lets go shopping
Ne- Ha, ha chalo
Girls leave and Boys also go out to do masti
Only SwaRon and TaaRey left
Sh(Whispers to Swayam) – Taani also loves Rey
Sw – WHAT! SACH
TaaRey were confused why Swayam was shouting and Sharon got shocked by his reaction
T- Kya hua Bhai
R- Ha tu aise kyun chillaya
Sw- *smiling awkwardly* Nahi voh bas aise hi
Sh- Taani hum dono bhi shopping par chalte hai
T- Teek hai … Bhai main aapko ghar par milti hun
Sw- Huh … Haa okay bye
TaSha left
Sw- REY MERE JIJA!!
R- KYA??
Sw- Tu meri behn se shaadi karega yaa nahi?
R- Huh … *sudden realisation* Wait … Matlab Taani bhi …
Sw- Ha Taani bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai …
R- SWAYAM MERA SAALA Im sooo happy
*Rey starts jumping around and hugs Swayam*
Sw- Ab tu yeh soch ki tu usse confess kaise karega
R- Aaj raat ki party mein karunga !
Sw- Kya ?? Itni Jaldi??
R- Don't worry mere yaar I will handle everything … Chal I'll see you later … Bahut saari Tayariyaan karni hai … Aaj raat ki party will be the best for me and Taani
*Rey leaves*

At night at the party
Rey had told Sharon everything about his plan to confess to Taani today
It was mid-way through the party and everyone was having a lot of fun though Taani was pretending to be happy although she was sad.
Suddenly Taani had got a message from Rey

From Prince Charming:
Meet me at the terrace ABHI … Its important and don't tell anyone … please

Taani was confused … There were so many fights between Rey and her suddenly he was calling her and moreover he used the words PLEASE … That was much unexpected … nevertheless Taani went up to the terrace to find out what's wrong with Rey.

When she reached the terrace, she was astonished to find the terrace decorated with roses and white colour lighting all over the place and Taani was facing his back. She really could not understand what was happening
T- Rey … Yeh sab kya hai?
Rey turned around to face Taani … From when she entered the party his eyes was on her … She was looking so beautiful that he just could not take his eyes off her … and now his Taani was right infront of him which made him smile
Taani saw Rey smiling and could not help but smile too … she was waiting for that smile of his but she felt she was the reason that smile left
R- Taani *Takes a deep breath* you know aaj kal humare beech jo bhi kuch ho raha hai voh pata nahi kyun ho raha hai … uss din tumne sahi kaha tha, humne ek dusre ko misunderstand kiya hai aur aaj main iss misunderstanding ko dur karna chahta hu … Taani main yeh baat tumhe bahut pehle kehna chahta tha par you know … misunderstandings but aaj nahi, aaj sirf tum,main aur kuch nahi.
Taani was utterly confused by Rey's words but it sounded so loving that she could not help but nod her head allowing him to move on
R- Jab tum Shivam ke saath thi … I know main bahut rude tha and I am really sorry for that but kya karta tumhe uss Shivam ke saath dekhkar main jealous tha aur jab tum GS bani I felt ki tumne mujhe dokha diya, tumne mujhe thukrakar power aur position ko choose kiya *Taani is crying by his sentence* and I only behaved like how I behaved because I am deeply, madly, crazily in love with you and I really don't know since how long but all I know is that you are the only one who I want to spend the rest of my life with and I think tum bhi yahi chahti ho *looking into her eyes for her answer*
Taani was astounded … her love, her prince just said those 3 magical words to her … It was a dream, a fairytale which was coming true all she that was going on in her mind was those magical words which had filled up her heart … that immense love which he is feeling for her and she immediately pulled him into a passionate hug filled with satisfaction and belonging.
T *While hugging Rey* - Yes, Main bhi yahi chahti hun … I love you Rey … I love you
Those words had brought tears into Rey's eyes … they both were crying. They had got their true love and now no one could separate them … They pulled away from the hug and started wiping each other's tears, smiling at each other now knowing that they will be together now as one.
R- Happy New Year Taani!
T- New Year? But voh toh nikal chukka hai naa?
R- Mera matlab hai humara happy new year … aaj se we are a couple
T- Forever?
R- Humesha, humesha ke liye
They started their new year remembering all the hurdles they faced to be one but in the end succeded and now are very happy together
Okay guys I wrote this a looong time back but after putting in a lot of courage I decided to post this … I hope you enjoy … Maan lo aaj ki episode ki khushi mein

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS IS LIKE OH SO FREAKIN WOW!!!! I have seriously NO WORDS to describe how I feel!! Wow wow wow wow wow wow!! ReYam part.. Rey mere JIJA and Swayam mera SALA was hilarious!! TaaRon talk.. Shareyam talk.. PERFECT!! Loved loved loved! I seriously dont know how do you manage to write so well!! I mean like seriously.. The confession was way too good!! Muah!! Loved it!! Please please keep writing more and do pm me about them! N yeah.. Do update ur SS soon too!! Waiting for the next part of ur SS!! Muah again! Simply love u for this!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just loved it dear..Awesome..You should have posted this earlier..but as dey say it.."better late than Never" ! Awesome..I enjoyed reading each nd every bit of it..why don't you just expand it into a FF or something..you write really well!! Thanks for d PM nd do PM me on your next posts! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg, it was absolutely beautiful,!!! Please please please write more on them, u r an amazing writer, really, this was soo amazing, I can't tell u!!! Absolutely lovely!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 super duper awesome , 😃👏⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.. Shoo sho cute!!
Amazing os!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its a beautifully OS I love it, u did a superb job love Taarey confession it was so romantic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear wonderful fabulous os it just awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update yaar
loved it aise he likhte rhaina
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS...jus loved it soo muchh =D

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