My Mother (do check guys)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello peeps😃😃,
hws everyone????
well i knw my exams r goin...
but m still here...😳😳

I want to share a Poem wid u guys...
i had read it once n it instantly touched my heart..
so thought of sharing it here wid u peeps...

its By Narayan Surve...

Title :- MY MOTHER...

When the stars go off
Tall chimney-sirens sound
Daily with fast steps
Marching to the mill
Who looked backwards
And told us so lovingly
"Do not fight with anyone"
Gave us two pice
On the day before Dasara
She went with five of us
To see the festival
We bantered in the lanes
What a great pleasure
Beyond words
We returned with balloons
And whistles and pipes
We became birds

What happened of one day
They brought her in a cart
Her eyes were open
Blood gushed from her mouth
Her partner saluted
Came near, caressed us and said 'Balu'
We saw mutely everything
We searched our umbrella
Our roof, our mother.

That night we five
Stuck closer and
Wrapped up to the coverlet
Taking it to be mother's affection
Already we had nothing
Now there was even no mother
We awake all night
letting tears
Now we became fully unattached.
By
NARAYAN SURVE...

Translated by Prabhakar Machwe
originally posted in Marathi with the title :- " Majhi Aai"


Sorry if i wasted ur tym...😭
but felt like its worth sharing...
so shared it...

Thanks for reading.😃

Sonia...ā¤ļø

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rockingal09 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really amazing..!! šŸ‘šŸ¼
LadySosostris thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Soni its damn heart touching...Tfs rey😃
princessSonia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ swetu :- thanks sweety...😃

@ Tani partner :- thanks partner...šŸ˜‰

@ Priyu ;- Thanks dear..😃

m glad u all liked it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice poem sonia realy heart toching... Thanx fr shareing
Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very touchy poem 😳 so nice...thanks for sharing 😊
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Shruts Di :- Thnks m glad u liked it...😃

@ Vibhu :- m glad u loved it dear...šŸ¤—

@ Krishy Jiji :- Thnks 4 liking it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice poem !
Loved it !
It was heart touching ...
Thanks for sharing !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was lovely! TFS Sonia😊

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