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revti21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Love triangle????is it d same guy in rk's dream...whu s tryin to snatch madhu frm rk...?

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

32b:amazing update.da song was beautiful.thanx a lot for pm.

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

awesome.im loving da way da story is moving.thanx for pm and continue soon

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geetrana45

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Awesome update really very nice.waiting for next part.thanks for PM

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indira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

sorry friends i am busy on my studies.definitely i will try to update tomorrow.sorry for delay.but i will update tomorrow definitely😊

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indira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

first of all i want to say sorry for delay...as i am busy on my project.i hope all of u will understand.

chapter 34(a):

abhay and piya went to hotel and they reached their respective rooms.

abhay: piya...
piya: ha,abhay...
abhay wants to say sorry.he knew that he behaved rudely with piya all this 5 years.but he did it for his brother.he too knew that piya revealed truth to save abhay.but it affected on rk's life.he left them for his(abhay) sake.he also felt bad by staying away from piya all this years.he missed her alot.he missed her talkative nature lot.what he can do?he given a big punishment to piya no infact he given a big punishment to himself by stayng away from piya.she luvs him alot.he knew it.he too luvs her alot more than his life.his eyes filled with tears.he can't stay away even a minute from piya.all he wants to hug her once.
he is so scared "what if piya refused him?"
he is in his own thoughts while piya is waiting for his response.
piya: abhay...abhay wat happened?why u called me?do u want to say anything?
abhay still in his own thoughts.piya got pissed of with this.
she moved his hand with her hand to get him in to the present world from thoughts.

piya: abhay r u alright?wat r u thinking?
abhay now on present..
abhay: no...nothing.nothing.just i want to say u that i have some more work.so we have to stay here more days.

piya: wat?but our project deal was done well...na...

abhay: ha but i have extra work.so...plz...if u don't want to stay u can go back to INDIA.

piya: no problem.i will stay.

abhay: thank u so much...

they entered in to their rooms.after shuting the door.
abhay(to himself): wat happened to u?go and just say sorry to piya.why r u waiting?and for wat r u waiting?saying a small sorry is not going to kill ur ego.and between u and piya there is no place for ego's.don't u know that?go abhay say sorry.i know one sorry cannot enough what had u done to her?but it will reduce her pain somewhat...go say sorry...

abhay closd his eyes

piya in her room with full of teary eyes.

piya(to herself): i know abhay still u r angry on me.i am really so sorry what had i done is really wrong?but trust i don't know about it.i don't know circumstances will change our lifes like this.i can accept u in any shade.i accepted u as vampire also.i have no problem with it.but all i wanted is ur happiness.i wanted u to stay happy with ur family.after so many years u got ur real family back.i don't want u to miss it.so i revealed everything to rk.if i got to know about rk's deal with haseena aunty and chand uncle..."mein kabhi yeh nahi kehna chahtha tha.par kehna pada...😭😭😭"
i am sorry abhay.i know i hurted u so much.but staying away from u is a hell for me.i stayed infront of u but our hearts had been seperated all this years because of my one mistake.

abhay knocked room door of piya...

piya wiped her tears and opened door.
when she opened door within seconds abhay hugged her tightly with full of passion.
piya was stunned with abhay's hug.she doen't expected it now.

abhay : sorry piya...i am so...so sorry.i missed u badly.i missed u all this years so badly.
piya eyes r filled with tears.she was so happy that her abhay is talking with her.

abhay: i am really so sorry for hurting u by staying away from u all this 5 years.trust me piya i punished myself by staying away from u.it killed me.thought of staying away from u was a hell for me.i don't know how i stayed this 5 years away from u.

piya also hugged him back happily.

abhay now broken their hug.he cupped her face with his hands.

piya and abhay eyes r filled with tears.after a long break they met.
their souls met after a long time.

abhay: no one can seperate u from me piya.no one.
by saying this he kissed on her forehead.
piya face turned in to red colour with shy😳

piya: i want to say sorry for wat i did?
abhay wiping her tears.
abhay: no piya no need to say sorry.i can understand u done all for me.but i felt bad when my brother left us.i am angry on myself.so i kept u away from me.but i can't seperated my heart from u .i belongs to u piya just to u...

he hugged her again this time more tightly.

after a few minutes he broken their hug.

Lamhe..velle lamhe
Velle pal yeh
Idhar udhar tehal rahe
Sehmein..sehmein dil bhi
Keh rahein hai
Bina tere
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..

abhay caressing piya face carefully.after so many days abhay and piya smiled luking at each other.they r hapy now nt just happy very very happy...

Dil mein..koi rug yoon
Dhadakti hai
Ki jaise bijli si daude
Saansein..teri saansein
Jagaati hai bina tere

Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian
Mar jayian
Tere bin mar jayian re..

abhay and piya r staring at each other.abhay can't control himself staying away from her even a second.he wants to express his luv in a different style.their lips r just inches away.piya intoxicating smell was encouraging abhay to touch her once to feel her once.

abhay's hot breath is touching piya lips.his lips was just a inches away from her lips.her heart is skipping with a new thought of kissing abhay.

within few seconds abhay lips touched piyas with full of passion.at first piya confused how to respond?but after few seconds she given response equaly to abhay's passion.they kissed each other with full of luv.they continued it untill they got breath problem.they broken their kiss.but within seconds again piya lips touched abhay.abhay was shocked luking at piya response.he was so happy with her response.again they broken when they got problem with their breath.

Girhon ko suljhaao
Tere bin kya jeena
Bata mujhe..bata mujhe
Girhon ko suljhaao
Tere bin kya jeena
Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa
Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa

again abhay and piya hugged happily.

in INDIA:

on studio:

madhu was on fully drunken state.rk was surprised that how madhu gotten drunk.he searched surroundings.he got a bottle.he smelled it.he understoods that someone filled the bottle with drink.

rk lifted her in his arms.

madhu: rk leave me.i can walk.do u understand?leave me...

rk: madhu u r not in the position to stand.

madhu: who r u to say that i am not in position to stand?i can ...leave me.

she is beating rk on his chest.

rk shouted on madhu to stop her.

rk: shut up..madhu...

madhu (with teary eyes): why rk?why?why u left me?i know u want to save ur brother's life.but that is not a right way to leave me.how can u do that to me?

rk was hell shocked by listenng madhu's words.when he left her.and who is his brother?he was totally confused.then he thought that madhu is on drunk state.so she is talking nonsense.

rk taken her to her house and he dropped her near her house.

rk: i will drop u on ur home.

madhu: no need.i can go.

rk: r u sure madhu?

madhu: ya,ofcourse i am sure.i am so strong.i can manage myself.so u get it?

madhu walking towards her house.rk stayed their until madhu entred in to her house.he was observing her from far.

purvi opened door and she quiet shocked by seeing madhu in drunk state.

she taken madhu in to her room.

purvi tried to wake up madhu.but madhu slept.

purvi(with teary eyes): wat happened to my madhu?why is she behaving differently?is she got to know about rk bro?no,how can she???????i want to discuss with arjun about madhu.

in hotel:

rk getting refresh by taking shower.while he was taking shower.he is just thinking about madhu.

rk: wat happened to me?why i am thinking about her?do i luv her?no,how can i?she is just my co actor.that's it.

he went out from bathroom.he is on towel.

suddenly when he went out from bathroom he saw madhu on his bed.

rk(with shocked expression): wat r u doing here madhu?just now i dropped u near ur home na.then wat r u doing on my bed?

madhu: i just came here to see u whether u r okay or not.

rk: ofcourse i am okay and there is no need to show concern on me.plz leave my room.if anybody noticed u here on my room.they will think badly.

madhu: i don't care.

rk: but i care.

madhu: why??????

rk: bcoz i luv u.i can't bear anyone talking about u badly.(he shouted with full of rage.suddenly he noticed that he accepted his luv.he luvs her.)

rk luked on bed but there was no madhu.rk luked at surrounding for madhu.he saw her on a corner.when he is trying to go near to her.she disappeared.again he saw her at another corner.when he is about to do her image disappeared.

rk runed his hands on his hair.

rk(to himself): i luv madhu...yes,i luv her.yes i luv her alot.

he went near his window by luking at sky.he shouted "YES,I AM IN LUV.i luv madhu."

madhu: rk...

next part is coming soon...

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indira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

chapter 34(b):

madhu: rk...
rk turned towards madhu.
rk: madhu.
he is stepping towards madhu.when he touched her.she disappeared.

[lage re lage re lage re naianwa
lage re lage re]2

rk closed his eyes to feel his madhu.her eyes her beuty made him crazy.

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re
Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Sab se begaana hua
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye
Rab bhi deewana lage re ho hohhohho

rk with madhu photo.by touching her face he felt her infront of him really.he caressed her face carefully.madhu just stood their like statue.

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Sab se begaana hua
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye
Rab bhi deewana lage re ho hohhohho

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

[Dhin tak dhin tak dhin tak dhin
awesome]

rk remembering their meeting and going a long drive.and their kiss on beach.

Deewana yeh to deewana lage re

Hooo Jab se mila tera ishaara
Tab se jagi hai bechainiya
Jab se hui sargoshiyan
Tab se badhi hai Madhossiyan

rk touching madhu's forehead with his forehead.he closed his eyes.

Jab se jude yaara
Tere mere maan ke dhaage
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Sab se begaana hua
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye
Rab bhi deewana lage re

Ho jab re hui hai tujhse shararat
Tab se gaya karar ho hoo
Jab se tera achal dhala
Tab se koi jaadoo chala

Jab se tujhe paaya
Yeh Jiya dhak dhak bhaage re
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa
Sab se begaana hua
Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye
Rab bhi deewana lage re ho hohhohho

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

rk gone to sleep happily.he is waiting for morning eagerly to met his madhu.he is too excited to meet his madhu.

morning:

madhu woken up.her head is aching so much.she forgotten wat happened yesterday?now she is worrying that she revealed everything to rk?she felt bad...
suddenly khushi opened her door and given a tea to her.she started taunting her.
khushi: madhu r u mad?wat happened to u?yesterday bhaabi cried for u.noticing u in a druken state.her heart was broken.wat happened to u madhu?r u alright?now-a-days u r hiding so many things from me...from ur sister,ur best friend.why r u staying away from us?madhu plz share ur feelings atleast with me" kya mein itna paraaya hogaya huun tujhko..."

madhu felt bad with her last words.her heart melted with pain.

khushi 😭😭: plz madhu share ur feelings.

madhu now wants to say everything to kushi.

madhu: khushi i never hidden anything with u.now also i don't want to hide anything.but i am scared to say that rk was alive.
kushi was shocked totally...

madhu: khushi noone will trust me.i know but it's true kushi rk is alive.
she narrated whole story to kushi.kushi was totally shocked.she listened whole story with teary eyes.she felt sad for her sister.she felt sad that madhu suffered lonely.she fighted lonely.but noe she is with her.
khushi: madhu i trust u and i promise u that i am there with u.i will help u.and i will inform this gud news to our family.
madhu interrupted her in middle.
madhu: no,khushi plz don't say about rk to anyone.first of all i want to know the reason behind rk's strange behaviour.
khushi: ok,but remind i am there with u.and if u need any help plz call me.i will be there to help u.
madhu😊: ofcourse,my dear sister.
khushi: ok,now go and get ready to ur shoot.
madhu: ya,ya ofcourse.
madhu gotten ready.she dressed in a imple salwar suit.she is luking gorgeous.

in hotel:
rk is getting ready.he is waiting for time to run fast.he wants to meet his madhu.
when he was about to go to studio.he got a call.
rk was totaly surprised luking at his phone.rk lifted call.

in phone from other side.

x: how r u my buddy?
k eyes r filled with tears.
x: plz don't cry rohan.u r not a girl.
rk: i am not crying.and ha i don't know u?who r u ?why u called me now after so many days ?

x: sorry baba.i am busy in work.
rk: ur work is important than me,am i right?
x: not like that rk.plz try to understand.
rk: no maan.no more excuses.i don't want any explanations from u.
maan: plz rk u knw about my work.then how can u talk like that?
rk: ha,yes.i know the great mr.maan singh khurana is busy in his work.his work is his life than his best friend.
maan: rk okay i am so sorry.to make u happy what can i do for u?
rk: nothing.
maan: plz rk."ab bas bi karona yeh naatak.mujhe patha hai tum mujhse naaraj jyaada der nahi reh saktha."
rk: not now.i am really angry on u.
maan: agar mein waha aa gaya tho bi tum mujhse naaraj hi honge.

rk: ha.
suddenly he realised wat he said?he said that he will come here.
rk: wat u said?
maan: i said if i came there...
rk opened his door with anxiety.he got a big surprise that his friend.maan singh khurana was infront of him right now.
rk forgotten his angry on maan.he hugged him.he missed him a lot.
rk: i mssed u maan.
maan: i too my dear rohan.
rk; don't tak with me.
maan: now what i done?i came here to meet u na.then again why r u angry on me.

precap: rk introducing maan to madhu.
at first sight maan attracted to madhu.
rk noticed it.

hope all of u enjoyed it.sorry if i made any mistakes.i know there r so many mistakes on my update.kindly forgive me.

plz do comments.😊

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revti21

@revti21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

i hope u wont make rk mahaan nd sacrifice his luv fr maan...i wnt rk to b mre possesive abt madhu...he had already done so mny sacrifices in ur story... 😊...ndpls make rk remebr his past soon so he will fyt fr his luv...

Edited by revti21 - 12 years ago