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Knock-Knock could i sneak in? 😳
first of all apologies to be accepted for such a stupid behavior of mines! i should have reported here first and what i am doing for now is absolutely contrary.
Heya Ruts 🤗
first of all i loved the title! and the way the OS started was adorable. i would have loved reading the whole poem if you included it too because it played a dominant role. the little Tulia was really cute. She is just like Sharon,i would say the lil Sharon and this time it is Shikhawat. Sharon is really hard as a mother,the time she asked Tulia to gulp down the milk was just like my mother,Truly.i loved the thought behind the OS. it was a meticulous journey all way through the read. Swayam here is diligent and amiable too.the canniness which Swayam presented with the matter of being stuck in traffic was cool. this the rain brought a cataclysm this time in a good manner. Tulia here was more of a motif as she somehow bound the story,though in the initial.
the rain dance that they shared were like a cherry on the top.
P.S:thank the almighty now! i commented that too without much adieu(kidding).😆
Anupamaa
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