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Hi guys!!!!!!! I am new here and this is my first OS.Hope you'll lyk this :)
❤️ AN UNUSUAL DAY ❤️
As the rays of the sun hit on the beauty of the story JEEVIKA,the clock struck to 6:00.She turned to switch off the alarm,but she could'nt ,because the love of her life,her husband,VIREN,never wanted to let her go.They did'nt want to separate even in their sleep :) But she managed to come out of his grip and went to take a shower.She returned with her hair dripping and stood in front of the mirror.Meanwhile viren who was half awake rolled on the bed searching for his beauty.Jeevika smiled at her husband's innocent gestures.Then she looked the calendar and had a smile on her face,because this was a special day to her .Sorry,sorry to THEM :)
She thought of waking her husband in a different way!!.In a gap of 10 mins viren's phone tringed.He was surprised to see a message from jeevika.It was written "Good morning Mr.Vadhera.If u wanna see ur wife then cum near the mirror".Viren hurried himself from the bed and went near the mirror.He saw the wordings "Today is a special day in our life.If u find it then u can see me in this mirror or else no".These words were written on the mirror with a red lip-stick and in the end there was a cute lip mark of hers.
Viren was confused totally as it was neither his or her birthday nor their anniversary.He saw the calendar and figured out the SPECIAL DAY.Smile crept in his face and he hit his head with his hands thinking how could he forget this day.He looked in the mirror and said "I 'm sorry jeevika.I don't know how i forgot this day.I am really sorry my dear!!".He made a puppy face.Just then his face lit up when he saw his beauty in the mirror.She was at the back of him hearing every word.She hugged him tightly at the back and said "It's ok virenji".He smiled and said "Two years back the same day changed my life.I felt the true meaning of love by seeing you jeevika.The way you fell down to me like an angel from heaven and i like a little boy staring at you,how could i forget our FIRST MEETING ? I am sorry dear".Jeevika said it does'nt matter because she knows that he loves her more than anything.
He broke the hug and turned her.They both looked each other and shared a solid eye lock.He whispered in her ears "I LOVE YOU".She blushed and replied the same "I LOVE YOU TOO VIRENJI!!".Then he cupped her face and was about to kiss her but she stopped him saying that she has one more surprise for him.She asked him to get ready soon and come to the dining table.He shooked his head and went in for a shower.
The vadhera's were assembled at the dining table.Viren sat next to jeevika and asked about her surprise.She said "later".After breakfast everybody left for their respective work.Viren was confused about jeevika's plan and was waiting eagerly.
IN VIRIKA'S ROOM: Jeevika handed him his wallet,keys and files and bid him good bye.But viren enquired about her surprise but she replied the same.They hugged each other and viren gave her a light kiss and left for office.
IN VIREN'S OFFICE: As viren reached the office his secretary told him that a client is waiting for him in his cabin.As he was walking into his room he saw a lady seated in his chair but turned back.Viren was unable to see the lady's face and asked her to move so that he can have his seat.But the lady gave a NO sign with her ands.Frustrated viren went to face the lady and was taken aback.He was dumbstruck to see the lady of his life seated in his chair,his JEEVIKA.At first he thought it to be a dream and squeezed his eyes.But jeevika got up and hugged him saying "it's not a dream virenji".
Viren held her tightly by her waist and asked her whether this is her surprise.She smiled and took him to the nearby sofa and made him sit there.She asked him to close his eyes and stretch his hands.He did so.She handed him a bouquet with a letter in it.
Viren opened his eyes and took the letter and started to read it "Virenji,i know that u are the one who surprises me everyday but today the surprise i'm gonna give u,i'm sure that nobody can give it.Till now i had the feeling that i'm a good sister but not a good wife,but now i'm proud to say that i'm ur wife because now our love,our life,our souls have got a meaning.Yes virenji,i got u the present for which u have been waiting so long.CONGRATULATIONS!!!!Mr.VIREN PAPA!!!!!!!!".
Viren who had teary-filled eyes looked at jeevika, hugged her tightly and gave her a soft kiss."THANK YOU ",were the only words coming from his lips.He lifted her and swayed and said "Mrs.Vadhera,i think u are the best in giving surprises than me.Please take me as ur student mam!!".She hit him lightly on the chest.They both hugged each other and shared their happiness!!!!!!.
Guys, i know this is a bit boring but pls forgive me since this is my first try 😭 .Pls don't forget to post ur comments 😊😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!

#unres!

Wow! Wow! WOw!
This is so briliiant!
I totally loved it...
Is this your first attempt?
If yes, then I welcome you in the Virikians section of writing and after reading this I can say that you have a long way to go buddy! 😊

Write something more soon! 😉

and at last my victory dance as I am the first!...
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
Enigmatic_Charm thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Since i'm new can u explain wat does res mean?pls!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutevirika

Since i'm new can u explain wat does res mean?pls!!!!!!



RES means that I have reserved my place to comment as first and not after I read the story I'll edit it and tell you hows it! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very nicely written as a first attempt...
everything was amazingly written...
virika were cute, their romance, jeevika's surprise everything was very nice...
welcome to this forum...

Edited by sweetdollashita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwie...
Thats such a sweet one!!
I had a smile on my face while reading this!!

Its your first attempt... and you rocked dear..!!

It was really very cute sweet Adorable..!!

Awwie!! Virika were completely lovely..!!

The way she told him about the baby... aww...
how could it get better..?

Viren Papa...n Jeevs Mama...
eeekksss... lovely lovely lovely..!!

Now m gonna go in the Virikaland... thnks to you.. :P lol...

Loved it so much dear!!

Do write more stories... n welcome to the forum!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really a huge tnk u for everyone!!!!!!!Really i feel so happy!!!!!!and i'm sure that i shall continue my work bcos u guys support me a lot in my first attempt itself.THANK U !!!!!!!! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a really good OS,
Update more stories...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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a very sweet os..
loved it
doesnt seem like your first time..
long way to go haan
awesome
do keep writing:)
love
aaliya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing dear😊😊
And I don't think so that it was your first try.😊😊

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