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..Amrita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one dear...lovely surprise...do update more stories

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Wara082007

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Posted: 12 years ago

VERY NICE, CUTE and ADORABLE

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Neetu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aaawww such a cute Os
It is not looking like Ur first os bcoz it was really nice.
Gud job done n waiting for more n do pm me 😊

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Ayesha A

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Posted: 12 years ago

Woah! First of all let me praise you on your first attempt! I was shocked hearing that! It was superb, you should be proud of yourself! What an amazing concept! Loved how Jeevika gave two amazing surprizes! Also loved how in the morning Jeevika didn't want to let go of viren! Awe😳.. Just fantastic.. Great job! Write more and pm me! Oh and welcome to the forum!

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girl97

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow this piece of writing is awesome

u r brilliant wirter

do write more stuffcoz its awesome

i loved it

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow..this is ur first attempt..really it was amazing...loved it

nicely written

aww...virika were so cute n adorable

n love hw jeevika told viren abt being pregnant

plz continue writing more stories

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Shicksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

mind blowing

pm me any virika story u write

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kas

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was amazing.. i loved it

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