OS: Precap.Epilogue *COMPLETE*

Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Hello peeps...
So,ur wait has come to an end.
The all awaited story which I am going to write based on the precap that was aired on the 17th March episode of Arjun-Har Yug Mein Aayega Ek,is here.
So,in the next post,will be the first part of the story.
I dont know whether I will keep it as an OS or a SS,but,on the basis of response,i will change the OS into a SS.
Or,maybe,it will remain an OS.

Wokay...
So,as we all know,that,due to a reason,the ACPs' fight in the office,leaving Shree,Ayesha and Chotu,scared to the core.
But,we dont know the reason behind their fight.
So,I will include myself and Miss.Unishaz in this story as additional charecters.
And,we wont be able to know the actual nd main reason behind their fight,(all thanks to the Nach Baliye finale and Star Guild Awards.)
but but but...
To entertain our saddened minds,I have decided to write the story on the basis of the precap with a slightly new storyline.
I hope everyone will like it and wont bash me.
Agar jutiya,ande,tamatar marne hai,toh fresh ande aur tamatar marna aur branded jute,samjhhe ya samjhhau?? *wink*

so,let me stop my bhashan and enjoy the story in the Next Post.


index:








Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

76

Views

15.8k

Users

12

Likes

150

Frequent Posters

Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Ch 1.

The whole ETF were sighing in relief after they solved the Terrorist Bomb Blast attack case.
Shree,Chotu and Ayesha were sitting in the conference room,and were talking just casually,infront of their two seniors,who were lost in their own world.
Suddenly,Shree's phone buzzed.Shree smiled after looking at the caller ID.It was Zebbie,the Lady Hitler aka Bubbly sister of ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.
Shree: Rathod sir,Zebbie ka phone hai.
Rathod smiled.
Chotu and Ayesha were staring at Rathod,open mouthedly.
Chotu spoke up.
Chotu: Aiga... Ayesha... Tune dekha abhi kya hua?
Ayesha: Haan,Yaar,Chotu.Mujhe zara pinch toh karo.
Chotu pinches Ayesha.
Chotu: Yaar... Aaj kya suraj paschim se nikla hai? Humare Rathod sir hase... Wow!! Duniya ka aathva chamatkar hai yeh.
Ayesha: Haan,Chotu. I also cant believe this.Mana woh thore gussewale hai,par,unhe haaste dekh accha laga.Kam se kam,humare ilava koi toh haasta hai.
The last lineAyesha said,was for Arjun.
Rathod: Shree,phone ko loudspeaker pe lagao.
Shree: Sir.
Shree puts the phone on the loudspeaker.
Shree: Hi,Zee... How r u? Tabiyat kaisi hai teri?
Zebbie(in an angry tone): Where is ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD?
Shree(in mind): Leh... Lady Hitler mode pe aagayi.
Rathod: Kya hua,baccha?
Zebbie(in an angry tone): Aapka baccha gayi tel lene... Waise,who told you to leave me at home? Main thik ho chuki hu aur rest kar kar ke ghar pe pak chuki hu.Mujhe office aana hai.
Rathod: Zee... Kal se aajana...
Zebbie(bit irritated): Kyun?? Aapko mujhse problem hai,bhaiya?
Rathod: Nahi,Zee... Bas aise hi kaha.Thik hai,tum aajao.Waise,humein kuch case ki discussion karni hai.
Zebbie(in a happy tone): Thank You,bhaiya. You are the best brother in the whole world.Waise,Shree,Chotu and Ayesha,I am COMING... Chalo,bye.Office pe milte hai.
Shree cuts the phone.
Shree,Rathod,Aayesha and Chotu were really excited,because,the life of ETF,Zebbie aka Zee is coming back after 2 weeks.
Shree: Rathod sir,kya main aapse ek baat puchu?
Rathod: Haan,pucho?
Shree: Sir... Kya Zee ghar pe bhi aisi Lady Hitler mode pe rehti hai?
Rathod: Nahi,Shree. Not always,But,jab usko kisi pe ya mere upar gussa aata hai,toh,she switches into Lady Hitler mode.
Ayesha: Great... Sir,main jaake puja ki thali taiyaar karke aati hu.
Arjun(least interested): Koi VVIP nahi aarahi hai,jo tumlog uski aarti utaroge.Sirf aur sirf ETF ki Research Specialist aur Ammunition expert aarahi hai.
Rathod hears this,but,Shree held his hand,and whispered to him,not to show off his anger.
Ayesha: Excuse me,ACP Arjun sir.. Zee hogi ETF ki research specialist aur ammunition expert,but,she is OUR FRIEND and Rathod sir's SISTER.Aab aap samjhhe ya main aapko samjhhau?
With this,Ayesha left the conference room to prepare the thali kept in the Office's mandir.

After 15 mins,Zebbie arrives in the office.
The receptionist informs Shree and all.
Everybody follows Ayesha,except Arjun.
Zebbie stands obediently infront of the main door.
Ayesha does the aarti and tells her to come inside.
As soon as she comes inside,she pulls Ayesha,Shree and Chotu for a bear hug. Then she moves to her brother.
She bents down and touches his feet and seek blessings.
Rathod: Mera aur teri bhabi ka aashirwad humesha tere saath hai,Zee... And,welcome back to ETF.
Zebbie: Thank you,Bhaiya.aur waise,phone pe aise chillane keliye,kaan pakarke I am Sorry.
Rathod: Its Ok,Zee... Chalo sab,kaam pe lag jao.
Suddenly,Rathod's phone buzzes.
It means the arrival of a new case.
He talks on the phone.
After a while,he disconnects the phone.
Rathod: Team,we have a new case.Mumbai ke mashoor ek museum mein ek larki ki laash mili hai.Lets go.Shree,Rawte ko bula lo.
Chotu,Ayesha and Zebbie: SIR...
Shree goes to Arjun to call him and inform him about the arrival of a new case.
Arjun comes with Shree...
Zebbie takes her gun holster and puts her gun in it.
Ayesha,Shree and Chotu observe this.
Chotu: Shree,humari Zee officer mode pe aagayi.Bappa,always keep her happy like this.
Ayesha: Ekdum sahi.Chale,sab?
Shree,Chotu and Zebbie: Yes sure.
Lets go.

Precap: The most awaited part... THE FIGHT BETWEEN THE ACPs,and,the reason behind their fight is revealed.
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#3

thank u,Di...
Hope u like it.
alee001 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
superrr zebbieee!!!

eagerly waitng for nxt update
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: alee001

superrr zebbieee!!!




































eagerly waitng for nxt update



thank u,Alee...
Hope u like it.
ll_piya_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Awesome starttt sweeti...
main to concept pad ker he mar gaye...
thanks dr for updating this..
update soon dr..
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Piyarani

Awesome starttt sweeti...
main to concept pad ker he mar gaye...
thanks dr for updating this..
update soon dr..



welcome,Piya Di.
Ur comments are important for me.
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Note:
in the precap,they show that Rathod and Rawte are fighting with each other for some reason,which we dnt know.

In my story,the fighting scene will be there,but,the reason of their fight will be different to the main one.
The reason behind their fight in this story is completely written by me and it wont have any similarities with the main fight which will be aired on the coming week.
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Itni preparation lene ke baad,itni acchi tareeke se yeh story likkha hai just to console our saddened minds and hearts,but there is no comment.
That is really very saddening.
BitterBerry thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Awesome story di.
I won't be boar this week.

Lady hitler
its so good..
Rathod is a good bro.

Arjun as always akdu..

Loved bond betn shree ,zee,aisha,liza

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".