Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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ankii543

@ankii543

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Do we get an update today...or else ill start my threats...of u know what...lol

update
update
update...jaldi

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Res!

I'm first !

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My absolute favorite part first: The poolside is the room of requirement? 😆

There were so many things going on here, a jealous Khushi, a scheming Arnav, a smug Sheetal...

Not to mention the Rabba Ve-ing Buaji and morning after-waale Payash!

I loved all of it , and I really liked the way you ended that update !

Ab kya kar rahi hai Khushi?

Great job, Zehra!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

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Firstly, someone to ride me... ☺️

The entire Bedi Bua rabba veying was very funny. 😆 You took everything quintessential ArHi and moulded it to them 😛. Chalo with DiR, one love story got a closure 😉

I was looking for ArHi romance you gave me PayAsh??? 😡 So, much for being Payal's Harry Potterji Aakash doesnt know what is Room of Requirement 😃. Well it IS the poolside... And well Payal all of us would want to live in Shantivan than anywhere else 😊

Yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti... Coz it has already happened... Par ab kya...

Eagerly waiting for the next update ⭐️

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Res 😊

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Zehra, I adore this update! You added everything here, some romance, flirting, comedy, and of course harry potter references!!!

What had me laughing the most was Bedji and Buaji, absolutely hilarious...the tucking her hair behind her ear and the gust of wind 🤣

Room of requirement is the poolside? Well of course it is!😆 Poor Payal, she will have to go to Shantivan for that!

A jealous Khushi is more attractive! I love how he made her jealous, he's just...

And someone to ride me? LOL!

Dying to know what our bold Khushi has in store for Arnav...

So finally, our Payalia's secret is out in the open. Can't wait to see the reactions of everyone! Awesome job Zehra, and your update is just as good as the previous ones! Have no clue what you're talking about😊

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Lazyleaves , I'll give u an 8 out of 10 for the update as I thoughtbitbwas lacking something..But jo kuch be present tha and the effort you put in is worth the Wait...could have a more humor element but I am not disappointed 😊

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punyashree

@punya25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Loved it!! 😃

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Okay I just realised (Thanks to my stupid exams that kept me off IF for a month !) I have a LOT of catching up to do This one's gonna be AMAZING. I know. Don't consider this as a res I'll read ALL of it during the weekend and then comment (new comment 😆)

Cheers,

Shaili

P.S. Zehra, I LOVE you for the PM 🤗 Does this mean I'm on Late's PM list too ? 😲 🤪🥳

Edited by Monu_Deewani - 12 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

superb and very hilarious update:)

loved the fact that included all the other characters as well!

lol buaji and bedi ji! wat to say rab ne bana di jodi! truly a match made in heaven!

OMG buaji is going to be so furious and if she comes to know that khushi already knew about the wedding then poor khushi she should really watch her back and stuff her ears with wool because im sure buaji is going to give it to her. lol

arnav is trying to make khushi jealous! but does he know that its almost like playing with fire and he might end up burning himself!

cant wait to see if khushi bites on the bait and flirts back with him:)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Awesome update !!

Madhu and Bedi Ji ... wow the latest gutur gutur birds in town !!🤣

Pool side and the Harry potter ref was Bang on !!😆

Actually the entire update was hilarious from Arnav , Sheetal and Khushi interaction , to khushi's awesome msg to Arnav ,to the cute morning after of payal and akash !!! Never have i heard this ...no suhagrat lekin morning after happening !!!😳🤣

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