Kagaz Ki Kashthi-Luv tht Sacrifices life#7(Link#8) - Page 42

wow dear :) awesum
loved it to d core :)
superB:)

Loved all the Maaneet moments but you also gave a hint that Maan's possesiveness for Maahi may cause rift between Maaneet.
The Maan-Maahi-Geet part in Geet's room is fantastic.Like mother like daughter,holding dada's collar.

And the last part where nobody can calm a wailing Maahi and Maan comes and makes his princess sleep,its my favourite.

Loved d update.

both the updates r superb 😊love maahii a lot 😊wating 4 next part😊

A beautiful long update...Love you for it.

Hi,
I would like to read this story once complete and add to my recommendation list here:
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Can you please PM me when this finishes?

Thanks.

Do you know how many more pars are you planning to write on this?

She pressed herself on his back tightly, He closed his eyes feeling her rapid heartbeat. He knew his effect on her very well but does she know her effect on him? the thin material of her saree wasn't enough to stop his burning skin to reacting, he just wanted to rip her dress and make wild love now, But he can't. he have to stop these thoughts from his pervert mind knowing how fragile she is. And he wanted there SR to be special, he want to erase the scare forever. that's the reason why he has controlled himself for so many days'

Maan: leave me geet, I have to go right now before I loose myself.

Geet: I m really sorry, I know Our angel needs u more, and I neglected her need for u.. Please maan maaf kar do apni geet ko.

How can he be stay angry on his innocent fragile seductress.. he just spinned around and hugged her'

Maan: Geet I m not angry on u jaan, but try to understand its better to stay away now.. he broke the hug and tried to take few step backward but his hand collide with maahi's cradle.. he moved passed her but couldn't go further as he felt slight tug in his finger. Turning his face he saw his baby angel holding his finger' he came close to her, geet too held his arm then touched maahi's hand'

Geet: see Princess Need her dada, now what will u do huh??

Maan shook his head smiling on his 2 angels.

Small teaser, that's all I have for u guys. Will be back soon with update' but when I don't know yet. Need a small break to solve my messed up life. This Teaser is for my tanu as she insisted me for this'Actually this particular scene i wanted to write from so long more than 1 month, but u know my imagination, its stretched so much...