virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update i m liking kabir very much don't turn him in -ve 😊 manvi new nickname mani is also gud n cute nd virat will realise his feelings towards manvi just waiting 4 d next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

nice update i m liking kabir very much don't turn him in -ve 😊 manvi new nickname mani is also gud n cute nd virat will realise his feelings towards manvi just waiting 4 d next update

thanks dear n dnt wrry i wont turn kabir negative... 😊
will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. .but feeling bad 4 virat. .cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh... viru boy.. third angle...😭
but still i will wait for story to unfold... 😉
i m loving the way story is moving... the two friends who cant see each other in pain.. and now their past loves are back in their lives... it will definately change their life... and thats how will they realise their love for each other...😳😳😳
awesome work dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏
thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpa09

oh... viru boy.. third angle...😭

but still i will wait for story to unfold... 😉
i m loving the way story is moving... the two friends who cant see each other in pain.. and now their past loves are back in their lives... it will definately change their life... and thats how will they realise their love for each other...😳😳😳
awesome work dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏
thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗

thank u soo much shilpa... 😊 😊 i love that u wait for the story to unfold as u urself understand how impt is for the readers to be patient... 😊 anyways u toh gave a gist of my ff... good job... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz plz pm me for this ff too...i love this story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it continue soon...😊 and PM me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Extremely sorry 4 the late comment & 4 not commenting on the last few updates!!!
The updates were awesome as usual!!!
Feel sorry 4 virat!!!
Kabir & manvi's convo was so cute, but I still want virman to be together!!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Plz continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 10
few days passed by n manvi tried her level best to unite virat n maya but nothing gave the desired result...
manvi : i have to do something... as soon as i unite may n virat, the sooner i will be able to leave n go back to kabir... i have to do it for us - for me n kabir...
manvi called maya n asked her to meet for the last tym... maya wrote the letter which manvi distated her obviously...
maya sent that letter for virat n he read it... while reading it, all the words touched his heart so much that he could understand the hidden pain of separation n read between the lines... in the meanwhile manvi came n convinced virat that maya has actually changed n she is leaving...
manvi : virat if u love her... go n stop her... dont lose your love for she may never return... pyaar khonke jaan bahut mushkil hota hao... bahut mushkil...
virat : we need to stop her partner... we need to...
manvi : yes partner... lets go...
virat n manvi reached the airport n virat stopped maya from returning back n accepted maya full heartedly...
virat : i love you... dnt hurt me again maya... i wont be able to survive after that...
maya : no virat... i wont hurt u again... i promise...
manvi saw them hugging each other and smiled...

virat brought maya to manvi and thanked manvi for making me unite with maya again...
virat took maya on dinner n asked manvi to go back home...
manvi went home n told evrybody that virat ha accepted maya back and evrybody was extremely happy except viren who thought that virat had feelings for manvi... swamini praised manvi and appreciated whatever she did. seeing this jeevika felt proud of manvi and manvi was happy beyond limit as the lady hitler herself praised her n that too in front of the whole vadera family...

later that night
manvi : di...
jeevika : haan mannu...
manvi : di woh... i want to go back... i missing rishikesh, ganga ghat, mama papa, everybody there...
jeevika : par mannu... main bhi toh tjhe...
manvi : please di... samjha karo... main kab tak apke sasural mein padhi rahungi...
jeevika : ok then i will help u in packing your stuff...
viren : what...??? you are leaving manvi... no u can stay saali sahiba... this is your house also...
manvi : jiju... i want to go one day na... so why not today... oops tomorrow...
viren : but virat needs you...
manvi : no he have maya now... he doesnt need me anymore...
viren (in his mind): he needs you manvi... he needs u the most right now... he still have to realise that u are the one for him...
manvi : jiju... say something na...???
viren : stay for me mannu...

manvi : jiju... i will come back soon... may be on virat's engagement... n i am damn sure that it would be very soon...
viren : hmmm... okk if u wanna go... its okkk... just be happy...
manvi : thank u jiju... love you...
viren : love you too...
manvi sideways hugged virat n took jeevika with her to complete her packing...
viren saw manvi moving out of the room, he sighed n sat on the bed...
viren : dont go manvi... my virat needs you... he is dumb that he doesnt realise that he loves you... he needs you with him to realise that he wants you from life n not that maya who once broke his heart... i know u have convinced virat to take maya back but why dnt you realise manvi that u are the one made for my kid brother... he can only love you... only you would be able to give him all that he wants from life... you are his happiness... mere bhai... realise it before its too late... virat apni feelings ko samajh kahin der naa ho jae... kahin aisa naa ho jaye ke tu manvi ko kho de... tu toot jayega mere bhai... tu nahin payega... apni aankhein khol aur dekh ke tu jo maya mein dhoond raha hai woh sab manvi mein hai... please god, dnt let me kido fail in love this tym... if he fails this tym, he would be broken beyond repair... please god... do something... please help virat n manvi... virat needs the light of your guidance now...
there manvi n jeevika completed the packing and jeevika made manvi sleep while she carreseed her forehead. jeevika kissed her forehead n came back to her room...
jeevika : viren ji...
viren : hmmm...
jeevika : mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai... i donno why but i dont want manvi to leave... i am scared...
viren : i can understand... may be we are now used to her being here...
jeevika : viren ji... i can feel that manvi is hiding something from me... something very big...
viren : nahi jeevika... may be she is really missing back everything...
jeevika : but she wouldnt herself agree to go away from me...
viren : you are thinking too much jeevika... remember we want only one thing n that is manvi to be happy... right...???
jeevika : right viren ji...
viren : so thats it... now lets sleep...
jeevika : but virat is not back home yet...
viren : may be he will get late...
jeevika : should i call him...???
viren (happily) : yes.. yes... i mean call him n ask...
jeevika : okkk...
jeevika called virat n he picked up the call...
virat : hello...
jeevika : virat... when are you coming back...???
virat : thank god u called me up... i am outside only... will u pls open the door bhabhi...??
jeevika : why not devar ji... i am coming...
virat : thanks...
they ended the call n jeevika went to poen the door.
virat n jeevika were coming back to their room when virat asked jeevika " bhabhi... woh manvi... so gayi kya...?? "
jeevika : hmm... she have to get up early tomorrow na...
virat : matlab...?? (what do u mean...??)
viren : oops... tujhe nahi pta...
virat : what bhai...???
viren : arrey manvi is going back tomorrow...
virat : what...?????
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ps : i know i have updated this after long tym but trust me now its gonna be fun... begining of love triangle... to be honest virat will get to know about kabir in the coming 3 to 4 updates... stay tuned... love all u...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes im very happy that virats gonna find out about kabir bt wat he is gonna do then htough thats a mystery ... get ready for a fun filled ride filled with surprises n drama right naina??well even though u updated this after a long tym u still update ur other stories n thats the best thing that everyday we get to read sumthin written by the most talented naina 😉

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