virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update is getting more interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update. .so finaly kabir came. . waiting for his entry. .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma030195

yeh to hona hi hai
after all its u who's writing 101% its gonna be mind blowing 😊

hey thanks again... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shabsem

Awesme update. .so finaly kabir came. . waiting for his entry. .

thanks shabsem... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma030195

i was jus thinking that manvi will leave vadhera house nw bt ab virat ko ehsaas hoga wat is going away from him!!! plz update as soon as u can naina 😊

lets see what will come up next... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princesshelen

Amazing update naina
Yay...finally kabir entry
Was waiting fr it...
Luved the scene between virman
Its so cute...
Will b waiting fr virat reaction after noeing about kabir...
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

thanks... 😃
honestly realisation has a long way to go...
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OKKK WILL TRY
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CHAPTER 9
virat : ye sab kya ho raha hai...??? manvi... aur ye phone... i think wo kisise baat kar rahi thi... i think i should check the call logs...
virat was about to open the call logs when something stopped him.
virat : no... i shouldnt... if there is something, i will wait for manvi to come to me n tell me... yes... i should give her sometime... let me go n return her mobile...
scene shifts
manvi was sitting on the bed in tears and exhausted... not physically but mentally.
she heard a knock on the door, so she controlled her emotions and calmed herself down. virat entered the room and felt a little strange for the first time ever. being close to manvi always gave him a pleasure but today it was feeling something different altogether.
manvi wiped her tears and waited for virat to say something. it didnt took her even a minute to recognise that it was virat who knocked at the door.

virat : partner... woh your mobile... u forgot it there...
manvi got up and took the mobile and turned her back towards him.
virat (thinking to himself) : talk to me manvi... please talk to me... plaese say something... your silence is torturing me... i am going mad... please ask me to stay... please...
manvi (thinking to herself) : virat please go... i know u want me to say something or for that matter stop you.. but please understand partner... please leave for now... i am not in the state of my mind...
virat : manvi... take care...
manvi : hmmm...
virat came back to his room and punched the wall in frustation...
virat : kya main koi nahi hoon tumhara...?? kyun apna dard mere saath nahi baant sakti tum manvi... kyun...?? kya tumhe mujhpe vishwaas nahi hai...?? kya main iss layak bhi nahi hoon ke tumhare dard mein tumhare saath de saku...?? main toh tumhe apna sabse acha dost maanta tha but i guess i failed in this also... i failed in being your friend as well... i am a failure... i failed in love n now i failed in friendship also... (am i nothing to u...?? why cant u share your pain with me... why...?? dont you trust me...?? why cant i be with you n share your pain...?? i thought you are my best friend but i guess i failed in this also... i failed in being your friend as well... i am a failure... i failed in love n now i failed in friendship also...)
scene shifts...
manvi : i am sorry virat... i cant show this weak side of mine to you... because if i will, then i will have to tell you everything about me n kabir... and now i cant afford to tell you anything... infact i cant tell anybody about kabir right now... n if by chance beeji or chachu got to know that kabir is back, they would again separate me from kabir and i cant take this risk... i know i must have hurted you but i cant lose my love... kabir... i have to go back soon... i want to be with kabir, only kabir...
manvi dialled the number again and no one picked the call... she dialled again n got no response... she dialled it over 20 times and then someone picked the call...
kabir : mani...
manvi : why did u disconnect the call...?? i am dying here kabir... i need to talk to you...
kabir : what do u think i am happy being away from you...?? no... i am dying from long 3 years... i want you back as soon as possible.. i stayed away from you for long 3 years and now i just cant wait for a day... but i know i have to... thats why its better we dont talk unless you are back... because talking to each other would make us more weak...
manvi : kabir... tum theek ho na... khana waqt pe rahe ho na... (kabir... are you fine...?? hope u eating at time...)
kabir : hmm... but i want to eat from your hands...
manvi : i also want to make u eat from my hands... kabir...??
kabir : hmmm...
manvi : why didnt... why didnt u call me even once...?? kya tumhe ek baar bhi meri yaad nahi aayi...???
kabir : i miss you evrytime my heart beats and everytime i breathe... i missed oyu every second of my life mani... but i didnt want to break the promise i gave to beeji n chachu...
manvi : i can understand... but now everything would be fine...
kabir : hmm... no one can separate us... no one... now we will belong to each other like we always dreamnt of...
manvi : i was always yours, i am yours and i will be yours kabir... no one can have right on me other than you... not in this lifetime and not after this lifetime... manvi belongs to kabir and kabir belongs to manvi...
kabir : mani... i really love you... i wonder how did i sustain for these 3 years... i wasnt even breathing because the reason of my existence was here, in rishikesh and i... i was there in london... far away from you... but still i could feel you, your tears, your happiness... its only because of your prayers that i succeeded in life... the faith that u have on me made me wake up every morning and work even harder...

manvi : hmm...
kabir : mani... no.. now you will not cry... you will not cry even for a second... because its not the time for crying... now its time for happiness... now you will smile because i am back...
manvi : ok baba no more crying now... only a big smile...
kabir : thats like my mani... acche tell me how is everybody...?? is jeevika happy...???
manvi : everybody is fine... di is happy... jiju is just perfect for di like you are perfect for me...
kabir : then i can understand it even more...
manvi : kabir thanks for loving me... u made my life beautiful as a fairy tale... thanks for treating me like a princess... and thanks for being my prince charming...
kabir : ye kya kar diya hai inn logon ne tumhe...??? u are being sweet n humble mani... (whta have they done to you...??)
manvi : yeah i forgot you just cannot stand me being very sweet sweet...
kabir : but i remember everything mani... now its my turn... thank you mani... thank u for still loving me...
manvi : copy cat.. you havent changed even a bit...
kabir : i will not change mani... and you will have to handle this piece for the rest of your life...
manvi : i would love to you... i can handle you till eternity...
kabir : mani... just came back now... talking to you like this is making me even more restless...
manvi : i am coming soon mere shona... just let me go n talk to beeji...
kabir : go my princess... bye...
manvi : bye... love you...
kabir : love u too...
manvi was now extremely happy and went to beeji... she talked to beeji and told her that she is missing rishikesh like hell and wants to go back asap... beeji also agreed and said taht she will talk to swamini about it...
beeji went to swamini and told her that they would leave soon for rishikesh...
swamini : beeji... u all just came few days back only... if u can stay, it would be great...
beeji : nahi swamini ji... we should leave... manvi too wants to go back home...
swamini : dont take manvi with you... let her stay with jeevika... jeevika would also feel good...
beeji : i will talk to manvi if she wants to stay or not...
virat was passing by when he heard this conversation and he felt... he felt as if evrything that he ahd has been snatched away from him. he stormed into manvi's room and held her shoulders tightly...
virat : ye main kya sunn raha hoon...??? tum jaa rahi ho...??? (what am i listening...?? you are going...???)
manvi : haan main jaa rahi ho... (yes i am going...)
virat : par kyun...??? (but why...???)
manvi : kyunki... (because...)
virat : kyunki kya manvi...???? (bcoz what manvi...)
manvi : because i am missing rishikesh n my punters...
virat : and u want me to believe it...
manvi : yes...
virat : u are not going...
manvi : u are no one to order me... i am going...
virat : manvi... listen to me... stay for some for time na... it would be fun... please...
manvi : only few days... okkk...??
virat : okk...
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update it was good :D
Bt am feeling so bad for virat bechare ko kitna bura laga aur manvi ko uss kabir ki padi hai..:(
Is kabir really a positive character ya drama karraha hai??
Pm ke liye thanx alott :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_vish


nice update it was good :D
Bt am feeling so bad for virat bechare ko kitna bura laga aur manvi ko uss kabir ki padi hai..:(
Is kabir really a positive character ya drama karraha hai??
Pm ke liye thanx alott :)

kabir is a very positive character... he really loves manvi...
n ryt now virat is the third angle... 😳
anyways thanks 😊

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