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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome nania i am so sorry for late comment but i am sick so i don't come everyday so couldn't comment but its great and can you please add me to your pm list

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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 11
virat : what...?? manvi is going back... no this isnt possible... she never told me about this...
jeevika : she didnt even tell me virat... she came home n said that she wants to go back as she is missing everybody very much...
virat : she promised me that she would stay some more days... this is not done bhabhi...
viren : she had to go one day virat... why not tomorrow...???
virat : bhai...???
viren : what...?? cmon i am just being practical... manvi yahan kyun rahegi... ye uska ghar nahi hai... uska ghar toh rishikesh mein hai... by the way goodnight virat and jeevika lets go... its already late...
jeevika : ji viren ji... goodnight virat...
virat : goodnight bhai bhabhi...
viren smirked on seeing the pale face of virat which was clearly showing that manvi affected him in a way nothing did.
virat stood there for sometime and made way to his room. he sat on his bed and held his head in his hands.

virat : you cant go like this... you just cannot manvi... why are you bent on leaving from here...?? why...??? why do u want to leave me all alone...?? partner... main tumse door nahin reh sakta... mujhe aadat ho gayi hai tumhari... aur abhi abhi toh main aur maya ek hue hain, i need you...
virat sttod near the window and gazed at the moon.

virat : chanda mama... thats what manvi calls you.. .right...??? ask her to stay na... ask her to not leave from here... she would listen to you... please stop her... i need my best friend beside me in this new phase of life... i want her support... i will not let you go manvi... your di is here, i am here... no you are not going... no you arent...
virat turned around and thought of going to manvi's room.
scene shifts
manvi was comfortably lying in her bed and talking to kabir on the phone.
manvi : kabir i am so happy...
kabir : same here mani... i dont think i wont be able to sleep tonight... i am feeling like...
manvi : like the king of the world...
kabir : bingo but u know what the king is waiting for his queen to return...
manvi : queen...?? but u know i love being called a princess...
kabir : princess will be our daughter... so get used to be called as my queen...
manvi (blushed) : hmm... kabir's queen in...
kabir : in...??
manvi : in...??
kabir : in manir world...
manvi : manir...??? but whats this shona...??
kabir : manvi + kabir = manir...
manvi : awww... thats so sweet...
kabir : mani... you would never leave me, right...???
manvi : right... i would never leave you kabir... if i had to leave you, i would have moved on in life long back... but i waited for you without losing hope... kabir... i will call u back... (manvi heard the sound of the door being opened so she disconnected the call and pretended as she was fast asleep...)
virat slowly entered her room and saw her sleeping peacefully lost in her world of dreams... he went close to her and sat down on his knees and stared at her face.

virat : partner... dont leave me... manvi wake up please... (he held manvi's hand which was resting on the pillow beside her head) partner... you cannnot leave me... please mat jao... i need you manvi... you gave me back everything that i lost years back but that doesnt mean i am ready to lose you... i mean a friend like you... main tumhe nahin jaane dunga... tum kahin nahi jaogi... aur agar jaogi, toh main khud tumhe drop karke aunga... thats it...
virat kissed her forehead and he alos dont know why... but he did... he felt the need to... he got up and went back to his room mentally planning for a plan to stop manvi...
manvi was left baffled now and she turned to the other side thinking what did just happen... why did virat behave like this... why did he held her hand securely as he was scared to lose her... why did he say that he doesnt wnat to lose her and that he needs her...
manvi : partner i have to go... you got your everything back... now its my turn... i too want my love back... i too want to love him and be loved by him... i cant live without kabir even if it means that i have to distance myself from you n di. kabir ko paane ke liye, mujhe tumhe khona hi hoga partner... kabir ke paas rehne ke liye mujhe tumse door hona hi hoga... i really wish to stay with you guys but my kabir needs me... i dont want to lose kabir which means that i have to lose you... i have to leave you in this phase because kabir needs me the most right now, so do i... i will go virat... no matter what... i will go...
manvi drifted off to sleep thinking all this and next morning she opened her eyes to see virat standing in front of her.
manvi : partner... good morning...
virat just looked at her and didnt respond...
manvi : chep ho kya...??? hello...???
virat : you are not going...
manvi : what...???
virat : tum nahi jaa rahi ho...
manvi : i asked what that doesnt mean i didnt understand what you said in first place...
virat : how can you not tell me about this...???
manvi : because you were on a date last night...
virat : ohh let it be... you should have texted me atleast...
manvi : i thought you must be busy...
virat : busy...??? i always have time for you... dont i...???
manvi : i thought...
virat : stop... stop giving me silly excuses... you are not going and now if u want, you can sleep again...

manvi : but...
virat : go off to sleep manvi or get up, lets go out for a morning walk or something... because its just 6 am...
manvi : virat... listen...

virat didnt listen to her and left the room...
manvi : ufff... this chep...

Important note just below the update... please do read it guys... 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys this was my thank you gift to u all...

you all are cooperating with me thats why...
i know you all love me n trust me i love u all...
yesterday night, i was really not feeling like studying, so i typed this part...
i have an exam tomorrow, so i dont have time to send pms this tym also...
please cooperate again... 😳
and for those waiting for dmg n pmkk... i will update them after my exams... ie this weekend... may be friday or by latest saturday...!!!
by the way dnt forget to leave your comments for this part... 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow mayia again a very wonderful and superb update👏👏👏
i loved it to the core. i specially love virat's dialogue when he said that "partner tum aise nahi ja sakti ab mujhe tumhari adat ho gayi hai. haye yeh dialogue sunke main toh flat hi ho gayi.
it means that virat has starting feeling for her but why you bring kabir in this story yaar but villian ke bina story bhi toh adhuri hoti toh it's okey maaf kiya😳😳😳
anyways lovely update and best of luck for your exams
JAI HO NAINA MAIYA KI😉
Edited by nishal310 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haaye haaye shivali first this tym... wowww... congrats...
n remember the mantra
naina maiya ki jai ho...!!!!
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

haaye haaye shivali first this tym... wowww... congrats...

n remember the mantra
naina maiya ki jai ho...!!!!


Ahem Ahem yes mayia i am first😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice updatebechara virat he cnt take the fact that manvi's leavin him n he dnt even kno y its affecting him 😉oh god yeh kabir he's nt bad bt he's the third wheel in virman n thats wats bad !!!!
thanx a lot for the treat lovely update
n i hope ur exams go really really well
good luck with them 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waoo naina great update dear.. it was beyond words...
No maanu plz don't leave virat😭😭... she will lose everything 4 her kabir.. she wil leave virat.. ufff what will happen than...
Virat kissed her waooo so sweettt😳😳... Hope that everything goes well n entry of kabir make soon..
Great update.. continue soon,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it.
hope so virat will realized his love soon.
continue it soon
best of luck for ur exam
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update
loved virat
Continue soon
All the best for your exams

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