virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014

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hninhayman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

awsome and fabulous as always naina
can't wait to read next part filled with lots of drama and suprises
continue soon and do pm me
thx 4 the pm:)

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deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

nice but it was more or less same as they showed on the show. i hope da next part will bring in some new twists and turns :)

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

really nainu... after long time u updated it...

but i hope u wont delay for next part... coming to update...

that was fabulous...👏👏👏

really ... i mean the way viren is worried for his kido brother... was very nicely presented...

i hope in next part... jeevi find out manvi's real reason to go back...and stops her from leaving...😉

lovely update svty:)👏

thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Awesome Update...~! U have kept the first half the same whivh was nice..re-live some good days of EHMMBH..:)

Best Maanvi leaving this would put his priorities straight...M eager for the love triangle...i know have alot to update wouldnt ask early update lekin wil wait for ur update...:) Thanks for the PM Naina..~!

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_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

wow wonderful update naina!!!😃 maya phir aa gayi😡 bt i liked da way viren was praying fr his bro... i wish jeevika ko jaldi pata chal jaaye wat is da secret... plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

naina updated after so lng thanx alot 😊
And the update was really good
Manvi ki aadat nai gayi na apne pairon pe khud hi kulhadi marne ki ...

Viren is a sweetheart he understands his little bro the mst his part was very well written i likd tht am sure he is going to be their love guru 😉

Excitd to knw hw will he react wen he will knw tht manvi is leaving and also wen he cums to knw abt kabir ...

Update soon

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_Ridz_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

wow yaar awesome update...i always say you write fantastically well... thanx for the pm buddy 👏

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Naina superb update ⭐️⭐️.. Loved Virat-Maya reunion part.. Its exactly like the serial.. You have described it beautifully 👏👏.. Viren is a great brother.. Loved his care and concern for Virman.. Now Virat will realise his feelings for Manvi I guess.. Looking forward for the entry of Kabir 😳.. Love triangle Naina!!! Sounds damn good 😃.. Kabir and Virat face off .. Cant wait to read more 😛.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Naina superb update ⭐️⭐️.. Loved Virat-Maya reunion part.. Its exactly like the serial.. You have described it beautifully 👏👏.. Viren is a great brother.. Loved his care and concern for Virman.. Now Virat will realise his feelings for Manvi I guess.. Looking forward for the entry of Kabir 😳.. Love triangle Naina!!! Sounds damn good 😃.. Kabir and Virat face off .. Cant wait to read more 😛.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗

hey thanks meera... 😊 😊

yes it was exactly the same n would be same somewhere in the next update as welll... bas ek twist ayega aur equations will change... 😉

kabir entry veryyy soon... 😃

i will update this soon... 😊