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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
amazing ending👏
loved ittt😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
I really liked swayam-Shreya part the true bff who knew each other soo well.Swayam's pain was beautifully penned
AM I THAT
BAD….ITNA BURA HU
MAI….ITNA..KI SHE CANT
TOLERATE MY SHADOW….FOR HER
AM JUST A DESPERATE
STALKER….A LOOSER….AND
ALWAYS BE….KYU ITNA BURA
LAGTA HU MAIN USE!! she don't
want me in her life…I'll do that… her
wish is my command…I'll get away
from her life very soon…"
These r my fav lines.A true lover boy who can sacrifice his love for his love
Their confession was amazing.Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
it was nice update
sharon realisation of her love for him was heart touching
swayam open his heart in front of her best friend shreya which heartd by sharon was amazing
sharon cute antics in front of swayam was intresting
i love d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
awesome one...

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Beautiful as ever Himani, it was a pleasure reading this OS...keeping writing more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing..
it was superb..
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome chapter...fab ending...loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey friends...this is something i wrote for di...on her Birthyday...umm..actually after her birthday...i hope u all like it!!

New Girl in the City


Sharon's POV:
It was new day…new page in my life's DIARY….new way …and new
destination….new city …and new designation in life…after being student for so long…now finally …am a working girl….yesss… my new dimension in life… my first ever job…in the city of Professionals…
BANGALORE!!!

I was standing in front of an old building…which might be construct 50 years ago or may be 100!! Haha…but it was good…soon I got to meet my land lady...she was not that old...her face was full of wrinkles...by her
behavior and attitude she looks like lady Hitler...but nice inside..a very loving lady !!!

Finally I got my PG room...although i have my bro n bhabhi in same city..But I wanted to live alone ...I wanted to experience the new meaning of freedom...umm...Or I should say..i wanted to experience the meaning of being independent...doing all..By myself!!!

Hitler told me that I have to share my room with Priya...Priya...the same girl who is working in the same company…cute…friendly…and bubbly girl…we mixed up in our very first meeting…god I was so happy
that finally I have a friend here….it was really amazing feeling…it was all new world for me….after settle down there, I thought to explore the city…so I took my cell…Cam…and my DIARY (diary ki alag story
hai..Will tell you some another day)

I was out on roads…roaming without any destination…colorful market…wonderful people around…awesome malls…..I was enjoying to the core…writing my thoughts …clicking pics…As Bangalore is IT city…it seems like that…really…everything is looked so systematic…as if someone controlling all programs and applications…it was really fun having a day out…I had my dinner out…and went back to PG.

Late night…I was lying on bed…lost in own thoughts…it
was like yesterday…my first day in GLOBAL BUSINESS School ….one of the best business college's in Delhi…first few days were tough to handle…but again god helped me out…by sending an angel in my life…my best friend…AKANKSHA…with her life become so easy …she was always there whenever I need her…the one who understand me without even
saying….days…months…years passed…we passed with flying colours…umm…actually I topped :) …and now m here in Bangalore….all excited for my first day on my very first job ….so all the best Sharon…gud nite and sweet dreams.

Same building…ground floor…corner room…..a slim lean guy…sitting on his study table ….in front of window….sweet pleasant breeze playing with his silky hairs…he was sitting resting his face on his right hand…in dreamy mode…...his deep brown eyes staring moon…as if taunting…its beauty looks fake in front of that "GIRL"…lost in his own thoughts …
suddenly he got up with a jerk…searching something restlessly…finally got it…his dear DIARY!!!... he opened it and started writing….


Swayum's POV:

Sooraj ki pehli kiran si roshan "WO"
Nadiya ki dhara si alhad "WO"
Pakshiyo khanakti chahak si"WO"
Os ki boondo si nirmal "WO"
Mandir ki jyoti si Pavan "WO"

bachcho ki massom shararat si"WO"

meri sanso me anjaan mahak si "WO"
meri ankho basi chamak si "WO"
mere kaano me gunji khanak si "WO"
meri dhadkan me anchuye ehsaas si "WO"
mere dil me basi chahat si "WO"
"WO" meri zindagi me aayi..khubsoorat khwab si….

…… "WO"

I wrote these lines in my Dear DIARY...and leaned backward in resting position….giving support to neck with both my hands...still lost in her...I had never seen someone so beautiful...her beauty lies in everything what she was doing...ohk..now you must be asking how do I know...ohk...I was following her...I mean how could I miss her...whole day I was after her...she is as beautiful as an angel in moonlight...untouched...pure as dew drops...full of innocence...her eyes speaks thousand words….curiosity in her heart and cute sweet smile on her lips ….bites her lower lip every time if she misunderstood..Or commit mistake in speaking….i had never seen some one that mad for chocolates…ehem…correction…actually dark chocolates.

She was full of life… whether playing with kids…or helping some oldies…aur haan…gol gappe…yesss..the way she was having them ..umm…I guess those were on the top of her favorite list…her each expression after having one…goshhh..Those were to die for…even I can feel the sweet and sour taste of those gol gappas!!!

After having fun on roads…she head to mall…for some shopping of course…and I was not amazed that she directly head to wardrobes area…Girlzzz…I don't understand why girls always like to buy cloths…the confuse look so adorable on her…she looks even more cute in confusion…her cute antics in selection…and the curiosity every time she asked the sale girl..HOW'S THIS….Awww…I can't tell how innocent she was looking …. She bought umm...2 or 3 kurta's and 2 Tees…and out of all…3 were of blue…means her fav colour is blue…after all heavy work of buying attires…she was hopelessly hungry…she than had her dinner….took taxi and went!!!

Bas chali gayi…yuhi…god knows I'll ever be meet her again or not.

I so wish mai use mil pata…use aur jaan pata…atleast uska naam to pata hota…till I get to know much about her….i'll call her

NEW GIRL IN THE CITY!

Please leave your valuable comments...thanks!!
Regards
Himani

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Archangels

Deepika Di

hey My Rockstar🤗



My Birthday thread...my angels' efforts...my friends' contribution...made my birthday SPECIAL...All the gifts on my birthday written by my friends/my angels/my Di/partner...were unique in its own way...after all i happened to be one lucky person who was showered with endless love and affection(which i don't deserve at all)...But something was missing...u know what was that ...it was ur GIFT...before being ur Di...i became ur reader...and i LOVE ur unique style of writing...look at the irony of life...or shall i say ..Circle of life...ur first write up i read was on Nisha's Birthday thread...I simply ADORED it...a simple...in fact a very simple concept...age old feelings...emotions...be it pain..love..or separation...but something was different...the execution..i could see ur pure heart and soul through ur words...the OS was Tanhayi...i had fallen in love with ur writing style that very moment...



Days passed...i saw ur write up on my birthday thread...which is not just FOR me...but its ON me...couldn't get a better birthday gift than this...my life from ur eyes...from strangers to sisters...long journey we completed in few months...himani..to himi...to my rock star...so mant stiars of our lovely bond...as i say U R A BTTER VERSION OF ME ...the things..the moments..i have shared with you..i dont think i have shared or i can share with anyone else...well i dont know wat i have written till now...bear with it baby...

Coming to my late lateef angel's birthday gift...i would put it in this way ...


..if Suku's OS made me smile and blush...Sur's OS made me grin widely with a naughty glint in my eyes...Nish's OS made me teary...wooo...wat an emotional roller coaster ride...at last this OS showed me the mirror...mirror of life ..and gave me a lesson...beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder ...



New girl in the city...woo..baby u nailed the title...The journey from Delhi to Bangalore...frm all known smiling free-spirited faces to unknown frowning serious corporate machines...but stilll the journey is worth it...after all in this beautiful journey I happen to meet people like YOU...



The journey from B-school to corporate u showed beautifully...the connection with my bestie...new blooming friendship...exploring a new city...eyes busy seeing new dreams...U said it all...i guess only u could have written it...Sharon..the girl seems very familiar ..i LOVED the opening lines...could relate to those lines...



It was new day…new page in my life'sDIARY….new way …and new
destination….new city …and new designation in life…after being student for so long…now finally …am a working girl….yesss… my new dimension in life… my firstever job…in the city of Professionals…
BANGALORE!!!



Now what I am waiting for is...the curtains on that window to open ..and witness a new beginning..to know his outlook about life...about LOVE..about HER...Loved these lines..


Only u could have done this for me..a life story which i guess every single girl who decided to go out of the secured zone of their houses to the harsh corporate world can relate to...

The small small things u have taken care of...be it golgappe,shopping,blue or dreams...yeah i am a dreamer...i dream a lot...

The journey from a small town to a big City ..from bunch of known faces to the sea of unknown faces can never be smooth..its strange..challenging yet beautiful...when u get few sweet people to hold ur hand...in thick and thin ...



Same building…ground floor…corner room…..a slim lean guy…sitting on hisstudy table ….in front of window….sweet pleasant breeze playing with his silkyhairs…he was sitting resting his face on hisright hand…in dreamy mode…...his deepbrown eyes staring moon…as if taunting…its beauty looks fake in front of that"GIRL"…lost in his own thoughts



LOVED this part would be an understatement...i LOVE ur style of writing...ur thought behind every piece of writing reflect ur pure soul.


Swayam's POV was just so beautiful and yes PURE...the purity that reflects in his POV comes from ur heart...because u my love possess the purest heart ...LOVED THIS VERSES...Ahaa..when love takes the form of words..it will sound something like this



Sooraj ki pehli kiran si roshan "WO"
Nadiya ki dhara si alhad "WO"
Pakshiyo khanakti chahak si"WO"
Os ki boondo si nirmal "WO"
Mandir ki jyoti si Pavan "WO"

bachcho ki massom shararat si"WO"

meri sanso me anjaan mahak si "WO"
meri ankho basi chamak si "WO"
mere kaano me gunji khanak si "WO"
meri dhadkan me anchuye ehsaas si "WO"
mere dil me basi chahat si "WO"
"WO" meri zindagi me aayi..khubsoorat khwab si….

…… "WO"



He followed HER ...her little nuances ..her cute habits...her uniqueness...attracted him..this can NOT be the end...The new girl in the city has to meet HIM...i know u will do it for me...

I wont be able to tell u ..how much I love u ..so I won't ever try...Nish ke bhasha me bole toh bhavnao ko samjho😆

Luv
Ur Di

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice attempt Himani. I liked the basic idea of it! =D

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