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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys...here m giving u a small promo about the next chapter...

promo
asad rushing to doctor's cabin in hospital...doctor plz meri zoya ko bcha lijie...dekhie iski iski saanse tham rhi rhi hai...doctor plzz bchaa lijie ise plz doctor m iske bina nhi rh skta...
doctor checked her nerve...and yes she was breathing but very slow...and he took her in OT...
here asad was standing near the window in tears...

BG* tere bina jiya na jaye...socha na jae...tere bina...dil deke jaana...jaan deke jaana kurbat kya hai...mohabbat kya hai...duniya ki daulat mil bhi jae to tu na mila kch na mila😭

and the doctor came out talking to nurse..."doc doctor...meri zoya thk to ho jaegi na...btaie na doctor plz tell me"...
"mr.khan plz calm down...dekhi hum apki wife ko bchane ki puri koshish kr rhe h...pr..."doc said
asad said" par kya doc par kya? par kya?"
even the wrds his wife didnt bothrd him...he jst wanted his zoya back...
"mr.khan...physical chot bhi bhot jada hai pr hme aise lg rha h ki unhe koi bhot bda shock lga hai...unki body kisi meds ko respond nhi kr rhi...we don knw aisa kyo ho rha...humse jo ho skta tha humne vo kia...ab hmare bs me kch nhi h...ab to koi miracle hi unhe bcha skta hai"
asad" nhi meri zoya ko kch ni ho skta kch bi ni" nd he broke in tears...

*in masjid*
"ya allah...phli br mene kisi se pyar kia h use mjhse mt chiniye...phle abbu ab zoya...mt kijie aisa m jii nhi paunga" asad said
asad crying hard in front of allah...and as if his wish granted...ya zoya started responding...allah bhi unki judaai na dekh paaye...and dats what we call a *miracle*...ya miracles happen...only if we believe in god...dil se :D



phew!!!...jada bda ho gya... :p...so frnz kesa lga...u can suggest me if u want any change...maths ne dimag ki dahi bna rkhi h to socha break leke asya ko yaad kr lette h :p...hope u guys lyk it...





Edited by pinkks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
aww that was really good :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its sooo good
cant wait for the next chapter
please pm me if you can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg really nice plzz update soon!!!
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i want the next chpt like NOWWW!

OTHERWISE I'LL STALK YOU! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next chapter please!! Now Now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mze aa gye oye balle balle 🤣
Thnkew so much guys...
and i will post soon...only if my darling maths allow me to🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so m going to post the 2nd part...hope u wil lyk it😊
nhi pasand aya to bta dena 😭
Edited by pinkks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyaa frnzz so m back...arae ruko mujhe mat maaro...maarna hai to jake IF ke un members ko maaro jinhne ye rule bnaya h ki newbie cant post more than 10 posts a day...meri galti nhi h 😭
well ab kr bhi kya skte hai...so coming to the post...here u go...
PART 2
asad saw her lying like lifeless on the road...blood was continuously oozing from her head..and he broke down in tears...he cant see her like dis..."nhi m use kch nhi hone dunga...aise kese vo mjhe chod ke ja skti hai...asad ahmed khan jise chahta h use paakr rhta hai...puri qayanat mil jae na tb bhi use mjhse dur nhi kr skti...agr mje allah se bhi ldna pde to m ldungi lekin m apni zoya ko kch nhi hone dunga"
and he rushes to her...picked her up in his arms and moved towards his car...

BG "jaane nhi denge tjhe...janne tjhe denge nhi...chahe tujhko rabb bula le...hum na rabb se darne vale...raah me dttke khade hai hm"

IN HOSPITAL
"doctor...doctor...doctor kaha h..."asad said at the top of his voice...
all the nurses tried to calm him down but all their efforts go in vain he was not listening to anybody...then he saw doctor's cabin and opened the door and rushed towards him..."doctor dekhiye na meri zoya ko kya ho gya h...vo kch bhi bol rhi...iski saanse bhi tham rhi h...plz doctor kch kijie...plz kch kijie m iske bina nhi jii skta doctor" and he broke down in front of doctor...
"dekhiye plz calm down..."doctor said
"ye ap kya kh rhe hai...yha meri zoya zindagi aur maut ke bich jujh(fight) rhi h aur ap kh rhe h m relax ho jau...ap aisa kh bhi kese skte hai ?"
doctor checked her nerve and hopefully she was breathing but very slowly..."nurse jaldi se OT me preaparation kro hume abhi operation krna hoga..ward boy strecher lao jaldi" doctor said
asad was startled by the word OPERATION..."doctor operatio?...meri zoya thik to ho jayegi na doctor...btayie na doc?" asad said
doctor "dekhiye abhi kch kaha nhi ja skta...hume phle hume unka checkup krna hoga uske baad hi kch kaha ja skta hai"...
and they took zoya to OT and asad stand there...tears flowing down continuously from his eyes...

BG"do kadam ka ye safar hai...umar choti si dgar hai...ik kadam mein ldkhadaya kyo???"

he thought that he shuld inform his ammi so he called...tanveer picked the call...n said "hello"..."hello tanveer...ammi ko phone do jaldi"..."kya baat hai asad tumhari awaz ko kya hua...koi problem hai kya mjhe btao"..."tanveer plz ammi ko phone do"..."asad plz btao na kya hua h"..."i said give the phone to ammi dammit"..."okay" "khala asad ka phone"..."han asad beta bolo" dilshad asked..."ammi..." nd he started crying..."...".kya hua...kya hua asad bolo na"..."ammi vo zoya"..."zoya kya?...vo thk to h na a asad?...ya allah"..."ammi uska accident ho gya hai"...nd he again started crying like a small child..."kyaaa" n dilshad dropped the phone n started crying...najma and tanveer saw her..."ammi kya hua...kya kaha h bhaijaan ne...ammi plz btaiye na" najma asked
"bhaijaan kya hua ap hi btaie ammi to kch nhi bol rhi bs rye ja rhi hai"...and asad told her about the incincident and told her to come at city hospital...

then he move towards the OT...he can saw zoya lying on the bed like a lifeless body...pale face...doctors operating on her wounds...
he remembred all his words...when he aska her to leave hi,his family...not knowing dat she is also his family now...when he told her dat he will not talk to her even if they are the two last persons on earth...he scolded her becoz of the gas incident...becoz of her dressing sense...becoz of her shayari...becoz of her blabbering...and he was dying to hear her now...he looked at zoya and said"zoya plz mujhe chod ke mat jao...m vaada krta hu tumhe fr kbhi dukh nhi dunga...hmesha khush rkhunga...tumhari shayri bhi sununga...aur tumhare ye jahanpanah tumhari hr baat manenge plz laut ayo plz"

BG" mujhme tu tu hi tu bsaa...naino me jaise khwaab sa...jo tu na ho to paani paani naina...jo tu na ho to m bhi hoyunga m na"

and he feels a hand on his shoulder and he looked back "ammiii zoya " and he hugged her and started crying...dilshad said "kch nhi hoga asad use kch nhi hoga..."...najma"bhaijaan" and asad hugged her and both started crying...tanveer didnt came at hospital coz she thought dat it is the big opportunity...now she can find the doll... :O...and she started searching for doll but she was unable to find the doll

here in hospital doctor came out talking to nurse..."doctor kya hua...vo thk ho jayegi na btayie na plz..."".dekhiye...hum apko juthi hope nhi dena chahte...saaf saaf btaye to hume aise lgta hai ki unhe koi bhot bda shock lga h...physically bhi vo bhot weak hai...pr mentally weak hone ki vjh se shayd unki body kisi bhi medicine ko respond nhi kr rhi...humne apni taraf se puri koshish ki...par ab hmare hath me kuch nhi h...ab to sirf koi chamatkar hi unhe bcha skta hai"...and he broke down at the last words of doctor..."ab kya hoga...nhi meri zoya mjhe yun chodke nhi ja skti use lautna hoga"...and he runs outside the hospital...najma tried to stop her but dilshad said "give him some time...jb apne pyar ko kuch hota hai...to smbhalna mushkil hota hai...par tum fikr na kro...thoda time lgega akele pr smbhal jayega"

najma widened her eyes when her ammi said dat jb pyar par kch beetti hai..."ammi kya bhaijaan?"..."haan najma tumhare bhaijaan zoya se bhot pyaar krte h...mjhe to ye sb phle se hi pta tha...tumhare bhaijaan drte hai use btaane me" dilshad said...

here asad walking on street...rain started...but dont have any effect on him...he was lost in his thoughts...in the beautiful memories he has spend with her...

BG"ishq aashiqui mein kuch log chaantta hai..inhe dard baantta hai...inhe zakhm baantta hai...tod deta hai khwaab saare...dekhte dekhte krde brbaad sa...jo tu na ho to paani paani naina...jo tu na ho to m bhi hoyunga m na"

he was walking in the heavy rain and he reached 'dargah'
he covered his head with his handkerchief and purchased a chaddar (phoolo ki chaddar) and enter the dargah...there he gve the chaddar to the sahib standing there...and went aside...and started praying...
"ya allah...m janta hu mne use bhot rulaya hai...bhot bar use ye bhi kaha h ki vo mujhe chod ke chli jaye...par allah...apko to pta h m usse kitni mohabbat krta hu...han m usse bhot mohabbat krta hai...mere sath aisa mt kijie...phle abbu chle gye to fir bhi mene meri ammi ne apne ap ko smbhal lia...ab agr zoya ko kuch ho gya to to to m jii nhiii paunga" and he started crying...he remebered the day he had met her in the same dargah...her cute face flashing in his mind...her tears...he cant see them..."mujhe use lauta do... uske bina nhi jii skta...m apse vaada krta hu...us pr kbhi koi preshani nhi aane dunga...use hmesha khush rkhunga...meri zoya ko mujhe lauta dijie please meri zoya ko lauta dijie"...
the person standing there(i dont knw what they call dat person so i named him sahib sry for dat :p) saw him crying...so he went to him and asked"bcha ye allah ka darbar hai yha pe jo bhi sche dil se kuch maangta hai uski dua zrur QUBOOL hoti hai...tum niraash(sad) mt hoyo vo allah h na sb dekhta h...vo apne bacho ko dukhi nhi dekh skta...tum dekhna tumhari dua zrur qubool hogi"..."allah pe vishvas rkho"...asad find his words true he thought" ya allah sche dil se zoya ko maang rha hu...iss duniya ki daulat shohrat kch nhi chahiye...bs mujhe mera hasta khelta parivaar lauta do meri zoya ke sath" and he again started crying...

and here in hospital as if allah granted his wish...ya zoya responded...
"doctor ye respnd kr rhi h..."nurse said..."oh dats a good sign let me check" doc said...
after some time doctor came out of the room and told dilshad and najma dat she is out of danger now
..."doctor kya hum unhe mil skte hai?"najma and dilshad collectively said..."han humne unhe normal ward me shift kr dia h par vo abhi bhi behosh hai...humne unhe medicine di hai to unhe kal subh tk hi hosh ayega"doc said..."okay doctor thnkew so much hmari zoya ko bchane ke lie" dilshad said...
"thnkew mjhe nhi allah se khiye humne to sari hope hi chod di thi ki ab vo bch payegi par achanak se unhone respond krna start kr dia...aj mujhe ykin ho gya...miracles hote hai" doc said...najma and dilshad were so happy they happily hugged each other and go towards zoya's ward...
najma said" ammi hume bhaijaan ko bhi bta dena chahiye...pta nhi vo kaha honge"...dilshad said "han najma tum use call kro"...najma"okay"

here asad was sitting in dargah...and his mobile rang..."hello"..."hello bhaijaan...zoya thk ho gyi bhaijaan ap jaldi se idhr aa jayie"..."kya tum sch kh rhi ho...allah ne meri dua qubool kr li...m abhi aa rha hu najma bs abhi"...
and he after giving thnx to allah...he ran like a mad man to hospital "meri zoya thk ho gyi...m aa rha hu zoya bs abhi aa rha hu tumhare pas hmesha ke lie"

BG" zindagi se chura...zindagi me basa ke zindagani bnaya hai tujhe...ruthe rabb ko mnaa ke aasma ko jhuka ke...zindagani bnaya hai tujhe"...

and he reached hospital...he ran to her ward...and saw her lying there...he didnt saw her mother n sister and just ran to her (zoya) and took her hand in his "mujhse vaada kro zoya ab tum mujhe khi chod ke nhi jaogi...m tumhare bina nhi jii skta..." asad said...dilshad said" m proud of u beta...akhir tumhe pta chl hi gya apne pyaar ke ahsaas ka" and najma,dilshad and asad hugged...

phew!! dats oll for today...so hows it?...want more?...tell me if i should continue!...eagerly waiting for the response...typed it from mobile so sorry for any mistakes...and plzz ignore grammatical mistakes :p

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnkew so much 😃

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