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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manikka

gr8...
lovely but painful part...
the teaser is lovy dovy...but scary...
do continue soon dear...
will be waiting for studies wala love...
thnks for PM...


thankss manikka...

Teaser is lovey dovey ??? due to think ill keep itlovey dovey 🤣

studies walla love is gonna be superb 🤣 but just very few of it 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

so much happened n it all wud have a permanent mark on maan mind...


thaknss aishu...

yes things will leave a permanent mark on his mind... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update

poor maaneet kitne shocks aur milenge in dono ko???


this s just d beginning of shocksss😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

maan had to go through so much at such a tender age so sad

and precap was really nice
do update soon



yep poor bechaara maan... 😡

u liked d precap 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 36 :

It was the Pre Boards Exams, how time flew after Nano's demise only the families could tell😭, the grief was eating them in and out, the cherishing atmosphere was eclipsed by sufferings, something that didn't deter was the love they held for each other in such distressing times😭. Geet used to study late night till 3 and always would bother Maan, literally every day, she would call Anni and pester her to forward Maan's notes.🤣, though Maan was an year elder to her, they both were studying the same class, since his Polio attack and the year long rest ,he was enrolled a year later on school, and now during the Pre Boards , she was thanking Almighty for making them styudy the same classes though miles apart😳, Maan had the habit to miss his every exams, he would come up with some tournament, being exceptionanlly Athelete, he would always browse for tournaments and make a point to see that he definitely attend those Meets which had clashed during Exams time🤣, in hsort he hated studying and didn't want to sulk studying, he would just pay attention to his classes and appear for exams, and now Pre Boards too he couldn't make it due to his National under 19 BasketBall Meet.😡

Geet used to always fume in ager cos he made a point that she was unaware till his departure😉, only after he left Anni would call her and give the bad news😆, Geet would immediately log in her FB account, and start her bashing sessions, both their profiles were interconnected with he daily posting a friendship quote and different shades of flowers each day on her timeline😳, and she showering his timeline with unlimited threatenings and bad mouthing😆. It was a year they had both created the account and there was not a single day in which he failed to flower up her timeline, the most astonishing thing would be that there wasn't a single species of flower he would repeat almost 300 days😲, and he had posted a different flower for her each day, how would he explain to her, how much he loves the flowers his garden😆, it was his repentance for shouting at her when she had plucked the tulip from his garden, he had promised himself he would give her every flower on earth in exchange of those shoutings😳, and here he fulfilled it by posting each one at her timeline😳' Truly their love was beyond imagination but hey never knew that this love was so crystal clearly deopicting in their eyes😳, that the very same eyes which would search for the other in a group too get a visual assurity who knew fate will take a 360 degree turn😡, her eyes speak d truth n \he reads it like map spread out, n she can't utter lies, may be that is why she started to avois eye contact... 😡

It was her Maths Exams, and she had the model papers practicing, all the model papers from her sieniors, the papers Maan had courierd, she was growing restless, she dialed to find out that he hadn't returned from the National Meet, knowing him😆, expecting him before Maths exam was like a joke😆. It was a tough day , may be cos of her exans, or the emotional connection she didn't know, the exam went well next day and when she came back home, the site slipped her off her senses😡, Beena was sobbing and Rano trying to keep things calm, she wanderedaround to see an unconsiouss Maan in the guest room😭, she didn't have te courage to speak, but before she could say anything, she tried walking near him trembling in fear, but to her dismay, his body was jerking 😭, she hadn't seen such a visual torture all her life, she shrieked and Beena came iver running, all suddenly appeared from no where , and started rubbing his legs😡, Kunal tried stuffing something in his mouth to keep it open, it was 2 min event and everything subsided to normalcy, Kunal had silent tears, Mohinder hugged him don't worry, Kunal said but Mohinder he's got it again twice in 2 days😡' Just hope the Dr comes on time, Geet asked faintly what is it 🤢? Kunal took her out , she immediately realize d her Maan was having Epileptic Attack.😲

PRECAP : MaanEet studying for Boards😡 !! studies walla love😳! The end of the love story poisoned with ego'😭






PS : I want to ask something, whether my using of the pics are going to create any kind of prob as per copy right issues?? We can write fictions n post Edited pics , but copying direct pics from episodes is something i was never comfortable at using, but many readers requested me to use pics cos it gives more imagination during readinf, as far as using the pics here at IF i dnt think there arises any prob, but i copy paste my updates on ma blog too, can thta cause any issues? if someone can do a read up on this issue ll be very very grateful, and if needed will remove all pics that i have used so far in my updates, plz someone do it for me!

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thanks to richu26 n Dee. for giving the banner of DHS! 🤗

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n thanks to Kavya Khushi for working on d Banner of THE BARRIER - MY VEIL!🤗

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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haila pagal Dhobha first here... me dancing
😃
update was superb dear

the facebook reminded me of our friendship dear

we too do the same na... i mean u are tooo good to use this part loved it

and than maan not much interested in studies i cant believe

but precap wat and how will ego poison their love yaar

sab galat hoga na pagal😭
Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update... & yeah waiting for studywala love... 😉 Nice one.. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
amazing update
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 36
nice part...
OMG Maan sends her flower everyday that too a new one and different one...
what happened to him?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update ws superb yaar...realy lovd it...

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