Taarey FF.. Is hatred stronger than Love?? (Note pg 80) - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Read part 5 , subh, nw i get why u used this title , so taani is responsible for reys moms death god! When rey comes to know about this he will hate taani!! I am feeling bad for both of them . I love the concept subh, amazing work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Subh, read the 6th part .. U did a great job, that dil se re seq was so good, i visualized it ..
N taani yaar she is so naughty n cute the way she moved forward to rey poor rey was embarassed n scared 😆, Loved that scene
bt swayam ho!! He punched rey God, he is sometimes very scary
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Posted: 12 years ago


I'm updating soon sweety!! Don't worry 😊 and really sorry for late update 😔 *holding ears* sory sorry sorry!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7

THANKING ALL THOSE WHO COMMENT!! I really love reading all ur comments over and over again!! They really make me happy!!! I go into a lot of effort to write these parts and reading all your comments make me feel that my efforts aren't going to waste!! So thank you all!!
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Now heres the 7th part:

Seeing Taani like that Swayam was unable to control his anger... his eyes narrowing, face turning red and hands automatically forming a fist.
Swayam ran up to Rey, he held Taani's hand and pulled her aside gently and punched Rey hard on his left cheek with his right hand.

Rey felt a sudden hard impact on his face which forced him to turn right with a mighty force. Unknown to what was going on Rey fell to the ground, his eyes closing and head starting to spinning...
T: REY!!!
Taani snatched her hand from Swayam's grip and gave him a how could you look...
T: WHAT THE HELL SWAYAM!!! Are you out of you mind???!!! What has Rey done !!

Taani ran up to Rey. Her expressions changing from angry to worried, in a spilt second.

T: OMG!! Are you okay??! (Kneeling down infront of him)

Swayam was shocked at Taani's behaviour as to why she was helping Rey... And why she was so concerned... The whole gang came forward astonished at Swayam's and Taani's behaviour.

Rey's eyes opened... Anger fuming out... His eyes turning red... Body shaking from anger... hands forming a fist, his nails scraping the floor on the way...
He looked at Taani... Her worried face... Eyes showing concern and a sense of urgency to know if he was okay... Her lips moving... She was saying something but he couldn't hear... He was lost in her... her hair flying in the air from the fan, her hazel brown eyes shining in the light and blinking slowly, earrings moving back and forward with her face movement as she was talking... Her hands moving in the air, the bracelet he had given back to her sparkling in the light... She was BEAUTIFUL...

Taani shook him from the shoulders...
Snapping Rey out of his trance...

R: ha... hhaa!
T: (confused) R u okay?...

Remembering what Swayam had done, Rey stood up... He ran over to him and grabbed his collar, giving him a sudden jolt! Swayam was turned around and pinned to the wall...

R: HOW DARE YOU! What do you think of your self!! (Grabbing hold of Swayam's neck)

Seeing the terrifying scene, Taani got up from the ground and rushed over to Rey and Swayam...

T: Rey!!! (Grabbing onto his shoulder) stop it Rey!! REY!! Let go... Rey!! (Trying to pull him off Swayam, tugging against his shirt)

Rey's grip on Swayam's neck got tighter... Nil, Vicky, Bharat and Amar ran up to the trio.
Swayam was struggling for breath. Almost choking and suffocating, his hands were trying to grab Rey.
Nil and Vicky held onto Rey's hands and Bharat and Amar held onto his stomach, trying to pull him off...

T: Rey!! (Sobbing now) Please Rey... Let go... (Quietly but pleadingly with a desperate look)

Hearing the sudden change of voice Rey turned his head around to his left, to see Taani... A tear was slowly escaping her eyes... His eyes flowed the tear's pathway, all the way down to her chin... His grip on Swayam slowly became loser seeing taani's tears... As if forgetting where he actually was and what he was doing.

But then he was suddenly pulled back, from the four boys... All four off them fell down (not Rey) losing their grip and balance...
As Taani was holding onto Rey's shirt she was also pulled forward and crashed into Rey's hard chest...
Both of them stared into each others eyes getting lost in their deepness, as if trying to see into each others past. Both their eyes reflected the same pain and they both knew it. Unknowingly Rey placed one of his hands around Taani's waist and the other was brought up to her cheek. He placed his thumb gently on her cheek still in looking into her eyes, moving his thumb across her cheek wiping the trace of the tear that had escaped her eyes... Soon they were both lost in each others embrace.

T: Rey... (She said almost whispering, but full of so much emotion)

Taani held onto Rey's face gently caressing the area Swayam had punched

T: are you okay??
R: Hmmm... (Still in a daze, liking her touch)
T: (seeing the bruise... with a shaking voice) Sorry... (She started crying and wrapped her hands around Rey's neck... Hugging him tightly)
R: Hey... Shhh... (Placing a hand on her back, and rubbing it up and down her back... Calming her down) it's not your fault... (Wrapping his hands around her in protective grip)
But they were soon brought out of the embrace, and they forced apart as they came out of their trance.

N: aahhh!!! Vicky dude get off me!! I'm not Gay!!
V: abbe!! Meri paas meri Kagu hai!!! Aur tu apna par meri upaar seh hata!!
A: bhalath haalt mele uplar seh!! (Bharat haat meri upar seh) (Wriggling his legs around trying to make space)
V: arre Amar apne par apne paas rakh!! Chhii!! (Pushing his legs away)
B: abbe rhuk be!! Sab phele mujhe uthne do!!

And Bharat got up placing his hands on Vicky's and Amar's stomach...

V and A: ahhh!! Oyi!

After Bharat got up he helped Amar stand up and Nil and Vicky stood up. They straightened them selves up and went to their respective girls, who were laughing at the scene.

Sharon had ran up to Swayam, who was on the ground leaning on the wall...
Sh: swayam? Omg!! (She took his face in both her hands) are you okay??
Sw: (to get her sympathy) aahhh... Ooch... Nahi mein toh yaha nach raha hoon... (Pretending that he can't see her) mujhe kuch nahi dhik raha
Sh: (starting to weep) Swayam, bohot dard ho raha hai?? (Tears flowing down constantly)
Sw: (feeling guilty) arre Sharon... I was just joking yaar! I'm fine! (Smiling) See!
Sh: (angry) Swayam!!! I hate you!!!
Sw: (with a cute pout and innocently) but i love you Sharon...
Sh: (blushing) Hmmm... (Punched him on the chest and Hugged him tightly)
Sw: (dramatically) ahhh... Mar dala! (Hugging her back)

By this time the Professor walks in and sees the front of the room and becomes enraged! Swayam and Sharon hugging on the floor, the boys talking with their blushing girls and Rey and Taani just staring into each others eyes unaware of whats going on around them.

P: STUDENTS!!!

All of them were shocked!! Swaron letting go of each other and getting up, the boys and girls turning to face professor and Taarey coming out of their trance and looking around like idiots as to what is going on.

P: what nonsense is this!! My classroom is not a place where you can have you KITTY-PARTIES!! Understand! (all nod) Now straighten your selfs up and get ready for the lecture!
All: Yes sir!

Everybody was sitting down... Taarey at the front right-most corner, Swaron behind them and the others were spread out around the room.
More students started to come in and take their seats.

P: okay students! Settle down! Right today we will start with... (looking over at rey) Rey! What has happened to your Cheek!?? Why is it bruised son??
R: ahh... Woh sir (looking over at Taani, who was shaking her head in a NO) actually it was just some fight i had this morning out of college. No need to worry sir.
P: (rolling his eyes) youngsters these days!... But it looks a bit serious my boy, you should go to the medical room... The nurse should be there but i'm not sure. But you go check anyways. And Taani you can go with him, since he's new 😊


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Hope you guys liked this part!! And sorry if it's boring!!

PRECAP: Medical Room!
Rey took taani's hand off his face and held it in between both his hands...
R: hey it's okay... Tum toh senti hogayi!! Mijhe bilkul bhi nahi lagi... Promise (smiling)

WARNING: please do LIKE and PLEASE GUYS DO COMMENT!! Most of you do like the post but i've noticed not even half of you comment!! And i feel really bad!! And i understand u probably have more important things to do but even a 'i liked it' will make me happy and it won't take more than a minute!! So plz do comment guys!!

And all those who do comment i really appreciate it!!! And Thank you all from the bottom of my heart!! Love you all!! ❤️

Sorry for mistakes! 😔

Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dis was so emotional luvd it u wrote really well 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update dear...rey stop seeibg taani cryibg and lost in her...fighting scene is so well written...live the update...waitting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update aww Taani crying seeing her Rey all hurt, love their llhh moment and the boys omg always hilarious. Swayam pretending to be badly hurt just so Sharon can fuss over him is so funny. Love the entire update and u did a wonderful job plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really nice n next time plz bada wala update. . . 🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your Update made my day ... Well my day was becoming bad to worse and as soon as I got ur pm everything became better so I had to anyways say something well coming back to the update LOVED IT ... Taani caring about Rey ... Rey looking at her so lovingly ... It brought back good old memories of TaaRey and their intense and passionate moments (which are somewhere lost but loking at how this track is going it might find its way 😉) And the PRECAP ... Hmm MITWAA Sequenece ( Which was my favourite scenes especially in the Medica Room) So I really can't wait I might get some luck with ur updates 😃 so pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear loved your update...rey stopped hearing taani s voice change awesm..n taani is so concerned for rey...pls update soon😊

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