Unconditional Love...

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Sanah

@--Sanah-Sizzles

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Posted: 12 years ago

My first ever piece of writing hope u like it??

Characters:Same as of MEIEJ

It is that day in the life of Madhubala and Rk. when Rk says that he does not love madhu... and that was all a dhoka...

NOW STARTS MY STORY

Background...Tera Ishq hi mera(new version)

Rk : I dont love u Madhu...that was all dhokha

and revenge for what you did with me that day that day when you did not agree to go with me...

Madhu: Stop Joking Rk we both love each other and now we shall marry

Rk: Marry for what.People who love each other marry i dont love u

Madhu is shocked and cannot speak anythink Rk leaves her to her chawl. Noone is Actually sad everyone knew that this would happen

Madhu is too confused about Rk's Behavior and is shattered by his harsh words

Some days later she gathers strenth and tries to think

Other side Rk acts very awkward and does ot aloow deepali to come closer.He dreams of Madhu and shouts BIWI in his sleep...

HE STILL LOVES MADHU BUT wants her to come in movies...

MAdhu tries to forget her love bt cannot and decides that in order to make rk realise her love she would enter movies

She gives auditions and accidently one day meets R.k.

R.k is moved to see his first and the only love.

He shows ego and tries to commint himself by making Madhu's fun and MAdhu gives him a full and complete answer...

R.k is moved to hear that she does not love her

but she secretly still loves her...

Madhu cries in the bathroom and R.k is on the other side very sad and depressed.

Conversation between her mother Padmini ,her and Trishna,

Maa: I knew Rk is like this

Trishna : me too maa i came to know that day when Balraj came back in our lives...

Madhu: He will have to repent for this >>>>>>>>

surely i will work in films and show him...

This is unconditional love between madhu rk in which they are unaware that their opp. pairs still love them

This is the start now lets see what happens next

To be continued only if u like it and want

So if u want it to continue please reply and like:i wold surely continue

Edited by mengisanah - 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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*edit*

yeah am first..
wOW!

so RK loves her,and she too..
that's so much unconditional love..

looking forward ..
do continue and include me too.
:)

just started madhubala from the same episode you picked up to continue..
what a co-incidence!
😆

Edited by kuts - 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

woah! its my first story on IF to read,other than IPKKND. LOL.

thanks for the pm..
:)

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

i hit the first like,and now you would be thinking k am spamming. but na.

LOL.

will un res in a while.
thanks so much 4 the pm..

:D

happy writing..
;)

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesme!!
Can't wait for more
continue soon

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Udita4

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the PM.. Very nice.. please continue and include me in your PMs 😊

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

ur updates r just n ...👏👏👏

u really done a n ...⭐️⭐️⭐️..

i just ...really ...

update of urs dear...😳😃..

4 ur gr8 effort.dear..👍🏼.

4 PM me...😃

tons of ..🤗🤗🤗.

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Sanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 2

This post can only be sent to members by pm

If u want a pm add me...

Left with the scene of Rk and Madhu showing not to love each other but actually love each other.

Now,

At R.k. Mansion

Deepali: I am still with u dear.If u need me u surely can call me (acting seductive)

Rk :Go away...I dont love u...

Deepali :At the end you have finally agreed that Madhu was not for u at all right then u have another option and u know who is it

Rk: Ahaaan>>> I like it

Another option for you go to ur husband Sikky , Bhabhi ji

You are out of my life and also the love of my...(stops)

Deepali: Hun??Love of my...

R.k.:Another one word and i will call the security

Get oouuttt>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..

Deepali exits and R.k gives a sad luk remembering Madhu and Remembers the moments spent between them...

He finally sleeps dreaming of Madhu

Out at the Chawl...

Madhu alone thinking about R.K.

Madhu :Why did he betray me i did not deserve this I Love him too much

She also tries to forget him bt dreams about him

She keeps crying and telling others that she hates R.K for what he has done bt cannot forget him

Going to the room remembers the scene when R.K. tells her that he does not love her and thinks it for a bad dream...

Next day in the morning her mother

Madhu: Maa what are u doin with my saree and Mangal sutra

Maa:Going to throw it

Madhu: U cannot throw my thingd

i would keep it till i take my revenge from R.k.

(Wants to keep it as a mark of love)

On the sets

Scene with a heroine

Actress: Pati... u r very cute

Rk stops remembers his scenes with her biwi calling her Cute

Director: Rk sir ur dialog Biwi...biwi... where r u biwi...

Rk tries each time he stops

the actress consoles him and tells her to be comfortable

R.K. shouts at the actress...

R.k-- change the dialogs i cannot say this

Madhu wants to join film industry and comes to Rk's sets

They see each other from far have an eye contact

And they again Part ways

Both act to be stuck on their decision

and try to act as if they are no longer amicable

Bt as both turn Madhu starts Crying and R.K depressed

The actress sees this and says------------ Both love each other and are mad for each other then why are they separated??

Rk reaches home and see his and Madhu's picture on the wall he cries

Her maa sees this from behind the door

And then enters...

As she enters R.k. stops crying and breaks the picture by a glass to show his agitation for Madhu::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;

This becomes a situation Nafrat paaas aane na de Mohobaat door gaane na de

Madhbala ke ishq aur Junnon ko kya naam doon...

To be Continued

Please give sufficient likes and comments so that i can continue happily...

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Sanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

FAST PART 3

All those who want the story by pm please buddy me...

Continuing the story...

R.ks Maa sees her from outside the room and enters

Rk.--- Munna Paatel come here and remove the picture.

Maa comes inside the room

Maa--- Rishu i know that u still love Madhu am i right na >?? Tell me?

R.k.---maa I dont love her.

Rk was about to tell her the truth but sees Deepali outside the room

Maa...Speak Rishu u still love her naa

R.k.----She is the person i hate the most in the world...

Deepali smirks and goes

Maa--- Rishu i know u love her bt u take ur time and realise it...

R.k. goes to the bed thinks all the good moments spent with Madhu and goes off to sleep

At the chawl...

Madhu is trying to recover for the things done by R.k.

She still does not understand why r.k had done this to her??

She decides that she will make herself capable of becoming R.k's BIWI and show him by also becoming an actor...

In the morning R.k and Madhu both go to the sets And madhu goes to R.ks studio to give the audition

just becoz she wants to see him

At the studio R.k sees Madhu and wants to go and talk to her

R.k----Want are u doin her>>??(acts as if he does not care)

Madhu----- Who are u? Why should i tell u??
R.k.---Ahhan U forgot ur ex-pati so fast>>>

Producer----- Who all have come to give the audition??

Madhu--- Sir i here...

Producer---U are u joking just luk at urself U think u will be selected

R.k.------ Director Sahab,Dekhte hain hw gud is she lets see...

Producer:Ok wat is ur Name...

you dere

Madhu:::...mad...

R.k. ----- Madhubala Rishab...Ahhaaannn... Sorry.

Madhubala Malik

Producer:U know her sir??

R.k.---- Kuch log hote hain jinhe bina jaane bhi jaanna padta hai

R.k goes to his vanity

Producer confused

Ur dress is in the dressing room go and change in the vanity

Spot boy : But sir all the vanities have gone only R.k. sir's vanity is dere.

Producer: Ok then u go and change in R.k sirs vanity as he is not dere

Madhu: Can i not do it in these clothes sir i dont wanna change

Producer: U have to

Madhu goes to R.k's Vanity

R.k is not dere she remembers all the time spent in R.k's vanity

She goe to the changing room and as she is changing R.k come and sits in his Vanity

Madhu does not see him and tries to close the hook of the gown she wore all by herself but cannot

R.k sees her goes to her and Closes her hook.

Madhu tries to leave...

She felt incomfortable

R.k leaves the vanity for her..

Madhu wears a veil over it

As she enters the producer is shocked to see her beauty

He goes and tries to remove the veil

R.k. feels angry and Madhu's tear drops fall down😭

Producer:Who will become the actor and he wants to become the actor

Then someone says that it can be r.k.

And everyone agrees...

But R.k. and Madhu dont agree

And after a lot of time R.k. and Madhu agree...

As they try to act...

They have tears in their eyes and do it very perfect as they remember their old scenes...

They do it very well after remembering all the scenes

R.k and Madhu finally go out well and the producer likes her performance

Madhu is completely broken after this and R.k is also distressed

When they reach home, They remember the time spent the day

Madhu and R.k are still happy for spending time with each other

Their MOHOBBAT is what that is bringing them closer ...

To be continued lets see what happens next

Please reply guys...

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