new ff-rishtey updated pg 32

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hey friends,this is my second ff.plese spare me if yu do'nt like it.

INTRO-
JAI-a business tycoon .his age 33.owner of walia group of hotels.he is getting engaged.

BANI-a simple girl from mt.abu.working in walia hotels as general manager.her age 24.she is in love with jai.she wears simple salwar suits with no make up.

PIA-she is arrogant,dreamy,selfish.bani's younger sister.she can cross any limit to fulfil her dreams.love is waste of time for her.she is a model.

rest of the characters are same in the story.




part-1

walia mansion is decorated like a bride.after all its jai walia's engagement.every person in the house is busy.then a handsome man comes downstairs wearing a black armani suit with a killer smile on his face.

its jai walia. 😊 😊

he is very happy today, as he is soon getting married to the love of his life.

the pary is started.every imp.person of city is present in the party.

jai is busy with his friends but he holds his breath when he saw her love coming downstairs wearing a red dress.beautiful.....he muttered under his breath.

she is none other than PIA. 😡

both exchanged rings and jai plants a kiss on her forehead.pia is extremely happy.after she got what she wants.a successful husband,and media attention.

bani is busy with the guests as she is pia's mother and father both.she is smiling and laughing with the guests but inside she is broken.she is wearing a mask in society that she is very happy but she is very upset,not b'coz jai do'nt love her.but due to pia b'coz she do'nt love jai.she is only using him.

earlier she tries to convince pia that she should not do anything like this but she answered

di,aap kyu nahi chahti ke mere sapne poore ho.vo baat alag hai ke main jai ke saath pyar ka natak kar rahi hoon,par pyar chahiye kise....waise bhi jai mere saath khush hai.......

the engagement pary is over happily.

everyone retires to their rooms.jai is laying on his bed thinking about pia.he loves her carefree nature,her attitude.

pia has met jai a few days ago,and jai is bowled over to see her and proposed her.she immediately accepts his proposal and the rest is history.

on the other side.bani is also thinking aout the change of events.about six months back,she joined walia hotel as gm and soon she falls in love with her boss.but jai never noticed her.sometimes he behaves as she does'nt exist. 😭 😭 😭

but now things have changed completely.he is engaged to her sister.she decides in her mind that she will never let anyone knows that she loves jai.thinking these things.she falls asleep.

days are passing,now pia,rano and bani often goes to walia house.masi,dadi,anu,sahil,adi likes pia but they love bani.she is very caring, understanding and loving.

today,there is grand pooja in walia house.bani goes early to help masi in preprations.pia madam is busy in a party.

jai comes downstairs wearing a kurta as pooja is about to begin.he sees bani preparing all the things.he feels bad to see this as pia should do this.but he ignores.

pooja is ended and pia is not there.eveyboby is on dining table,eating food.bani is serving the food.

wah..kya khana bana hai,mindblowing....hai na jai said adi happily.

haan masi ..aur ye halwa to itna acha hai ki man karta hai apke haath choom loon.....replied jai with a cute face.

masi smiling-ye khana maine nahi bani ne banaya hai...
bani feels shy as jai looked at her after masi's answer.
first time jai feels good to see bani. 😉

bani escapes from there.she is worried that pia has not come yet.

then pia enters wearing a small skirt.everyone is shocked to see her in this attire.

jai angerily-pia tumhe pata tha na pooja hai..phir bhi tum nahi aayi...aur ye kya pehna hai tumne..... 😡

pia-relax mr.walia...mujhe aapke ghar ki pooja mein koi interest nahi hai aur waise bhi mujhe party mein jaana tha....she answered carelessly and leaves.

jai for the first time is thinking whether his choice is right or wrong.bani is also angry at pia's behaviour.

after few days,masi got a heart attack and bani nurses her in this condition.she takes care of her medicine food everything.she had not slept for a weak.jai is watching all this silently.he is touched to see her caring nature.
but pia as usual is busy in parties.

bani now knows everything about jai.his likes,dislikes,his mood.when he needs what everything.

then many times,jai and his family members feels that bani always lives for others and pia only thinks about herself. jai always tries to convince himself that pia is his love.

tommorow there is a grand party in walia house as jai won a big contract.bani is organising everything.she always keeps herself busy in work b'coz whenever she is free jai occupies her mind .

jai is now impressed from bani but pia's false beauty is still in his mind.

jai is working in his study when bani comes in

mr.walia maine party ke saare arrangements kar diye hai...apka suit ready karva diya hai...ready ho jaiye guests aane wale hai.now to take care of jai's needs is routine for bani.

bani...bani.....jai calls her.
je mr.walia....
bani mere shirt ka button tut gaya hai,tony ko kaho aake laga de....

mr.walia tony busy hai..main laga deti hoon...
then she starts sewing his button.first time bani is so close to jai.jai is staring at her continously.she can't handle his gaze and she leaves quickly. 😉 😉

jai-bani ki mujhe aur is ghar ko kitni aadat ho gayi hai.....he thinks and quickly goes in the party.

bani is getting ready when anu and masi came to her room with a gift.both forces bani to wear this for party.she agrees.

pia comes in the party wearing a green dress.she is looking good.then bani comes in the party and every man in the party holds his breath.

bani is wearing a pink sari with backless blouse.only two strings.its a see through sari.har hair a bit curly and she is wearing big earrings.she is looking stunning.

jai can't take his eyes off from her.he has never seen bani in that way.his heart beat is out of control. 😉

then a man comes and says something to bani in front of everyone

dekh kar tumko yakken hota hai,
koi itna bhi hasin hota hai,
dekh pate hai kaha hum tumko,
dil kahi hosh kahi hota hai..... 😳 😳

everyone claps and bani gives a sweet smile to that man.he is tarun.
jai is jealous. 😡


bye
if yu do'nt like it then i will close this topic.

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swatinarang thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good start honey11. jai is getting jealous as bani is getting attention of others, but bechara kuch nahin kar sakta siyaye jealous hone ke.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow honey that was a good start. see the difference betweenbani and pia , jai you better realize soon varna tumara satyanash. I like tarun to like bani. Jai jealous how cute. Pia abhi bhi aisi hi hai, paise aur parties sabh p sey shuru hota hai na. continue soon ok 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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honey11 i m very gussa with u. i have posted my comment and u don't have any value for my comment so u have written no reply. i think u don't want me to post on ur topic.😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am sorry swati.gussa chod do plz....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is nice something what i used to imagine to happen.good job.pls continue it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey buddy plzzzz cont soon..... 😃

its really good.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey honey bunny!!! lol!!! its wonderful!!! keep it up....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love and jealousy??? both in one episode!!

jai... bani is the one!!!!!!

forget Pia!!! 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hun...u are back with another one...
😉 😉
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👏 great job...loved it...
post a new part soon...want to see what jai will do
how will he react to these feelings of jeaousy...
jai tu sudaar jaa...u r engaged to pea brain...
aab kya karoge tum... 😆 😆 😆

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