rakhiankita thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#1
Hey guys iss beautiful shaam ki beautiful poem hai jo maine do bahut hi beautiful couples ke baare mein ...phela couple hamari aankho ke Taarey ...taani and rey aur doosra couple jin mein poem dedicate karna chungi vo hain MERI PYAARI ADITI DI YAANI ADICUTIPIE AND ADITYA JIJU 😊and guys pls tum log iss poem ko taarey par imagine kar lena ok! so here we go!

A POEM ON TRUE LOVE

Every moment we spent together
Has touched our lives, our souls forever
The things that we shared and learned
Is permanent growth that we've earned.

The person that I am with today
Did not get there by chance, no way
I am who I am partly because of you
And you are YOU because of me, too

The changes I see
and what I have learned about me
are a response to how we affected our lives
and what we discover in each others eyes.

It is uncertain if we have to part or one day live together
Either way, we have touched our lives forever!
No matter what the future will show
No matter what we are told.

We are connected on such a deep levels
That no one can remove that, not even the devil.
Our feelings might be different a year from now
But you are part of me forever somehow

A part of me will always be you
and a part of you will always be me.
no matter what happens ,that much is certain
our souls are one until life closes the curtain.

I will love your forever
For worse or for better

You are now forever in my heart
And nothing can tear our souls apart.

I will never forget you
For my love is honest and true.

so guys now comment time shower this poem withyour precious comments and likes ok😊😊😊


Edited by rakhiankita - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

1.2k

Users

9

Likes

16

Frequent Posters

raddhi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
haaye damm romantic n
awww soo swt n cute i luv each
n every line of it n it show luv yaar
luv it thanks for PM n do put more
n yeah do PM me again kkk
Mohit_monaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
tujhe na ek poet ba jana chahiye...u wil be a hit... 😉
love this poem as always [yeh sunte sunte agar bore ho gayi...toh main kuch nahi kar sakti 😛]
it was so awesumly written...jus love these lines...esp the last line...

A part of me will always be you
and a part of you will always be me.
no matter what happens ,that much is certain
our souls are one until life closes the curtain.

so basically...i LOVE it...hehe =)

rakhiankita thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

tujhe na ek poet ba jana chahiye...u wil be a hit... 😉

love this poem as always [yeh sunte sunte agar bore ho gayi...toh main kuch nahi kar sakti 😛]
it was so awesumly written...jus love these lines...esp the last line...

A part of me will always be you
and a part of you will always be me.
no matter what happens ,that much is certain
our souls are one until life closes the curtain.

so basically...i LOVE it...hehe =)


well i woid say thank you sneha...😊😊😊
adi.cutiepie thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#5

haaye! anki kya poem likhi hai! i just loved it! mai bol nahi sakti ki mai kaisa feel kar rahi hoon! oh my god chweetu! i love you! mujhe ye bohot pasand aaya! ab aage tere jiju bolenge!

hey ankita! awesome poem dear! you just expressed aditi n my relationship, our love! thank you nahi bolunga warna mai to gaya! it was so pure! i loved it! ab mai tumhare liye kuch lines likhta hoon-

oh meri saali hai kitni sweet!

like a bird's tweet!

meri gf ko mili itni pyaari sis!

ho gayi poori uski wish!

oh meri sweet saali!

thank you bolne pe daantne wali!

so how was it? tumhare jiju yaani maine pehla tumko sunaya gaya poem! waise it was awesome! i know tumhare wale se accha nahi ho sakta!

rakhiankita thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

haaye! anki kya poem likhi hai! i just loved it! mai bol nahi sakti ki mai kaisa feel kar rahi hoon! oh my god chweetu! i love you! mujhe ye bohot pasand aaya! ab aage tere jiju bolenge!

hey ankita! awesome poem dear! you just expressed aditi n my relationship, our love! thank you nahi bolunga warna mai to gaya! it was so pure! i loved it! ab mai tumhare liye kuch lines likhta hoon-

oh meri saali hai kitni sweet!

like a bird's tweet!

meri gf ko mili itni pyaari sis!

ho gayi poori uski wish!

oh meri sweet saali!

thank you bolne pe daantne wali!

so how was it? tumhare jiju yaani maine pehla tumko sunaya gaya poem! waise it was awesome! i know tumhare wale se accha nahi ho sakta!



sabse pehle a bada wala hug to you guys ...i am glad aap dono ko yeh poem pasnd aayi
and jiju not bad haan i mean i loved it very much...love you both
😊😊😊
😊😊
..gone.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Mein toh Sneha se 100% agreee karti hu yaar...You were born to be a poet..!! I really enjoyed these few lines towards d end :


A part of me will always be you
and a part of you will always be me.
no matter what happens ,that much is certain
our souls are one until life closes the curtain.👏👏👏

Aww!! datz sooo ... wat to say...hmmm DEEP!! Loved doz lines !! Do you mind if i confess smthng over here...Poetry had never been my cup of tea until i started readin yours..You are too amazin nd your poems are no less!!😉



rakhiankita thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Itz.Me.Charleen

Mein toh Sneha se 100% agreee karti hu yaar...You were born to be a poet..!! I really enjoyed these few lines towards d end :


A part of me will always be you
and a part of you will always be me.
no matter what happens ,that much is certain
our souls are one until life closes the curtain.👏👏👏

Aww!! datz sooo ... wat to say...hmmm DEEP!! Loved doz lines !! Do you mind if i confess smthng over here...Poetry had never been my cup of tea until i started readin yours..You are too amazin nd your poems are no less!!😉





bilkul i would love if you do so😊😊😊
Arya.100 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
awsummm... bful one... i loved. it
zada nhi blungiii... bus ur trulyy talented yaarr
khyati2000 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
hayee kitna romantic tha
luved it👏

Related Topics

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse ¡ 10 years ago

Prologue Since the day she has come to the college of Mumbai as a US return, he had been a trouble for her. He has not stopped

Expand ▼
Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima ¡ 5 months ago

A Love Story Sealed in Dance Dreams The sun shone brightly over the beautifully decorated outdoor venue, where fairy lights twinkled even in the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".