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Posted: 12 years ago
I am running the after scenes when Adi will try to manoy Shyla. His anger is totally justified must have given him a panic attack seeing her speed like that carelessly. I would have loved to be scolded by Adi like that. Ohh its so cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww La and Adi's first official fight as a couple. How cute. Now am waiting for Adi to manofy her. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Booo Hooo...

Shyla burst into tears as soon as she was inside her room.

His Anger was something she had not seen before.

Dr. A I know I was doing something stupid, but you did not have to go all grrr.

There was a knock on the door, she quickly wiped her tears.

Half a dozen relatives came in.

She smiled through the evening and late into the night.

She knew he was calling, it must have come through more than a dozen time.

Thank god for the relatives, she wont talk to him she told herself stubbornly.

You are going to meet her now Adi? It is going to be 10!!

She is not answering my calls Naren.

She was having some fun Adi, did you have lose your temper, poor baby, Ridhi was all sympathetic.

Fun Ridhi, my heart was in my mouth watching her bumping around, his anger surfacing again.

You better go and meet her, I am sure she must have cried her pretty eyes out. You be nice to my sis, Naren warned him with a smile.

He dialled her number for the nth time, Pick up La sweety pie.

It was past 10, when she was left alone.

The mobile rang.

She sat looking at it.

Keep calling Dr. A, wont pick up.

Taking the mobile with her, she tiptoed out of the house.

Adi stood near her house wondering what explanation he will give for this late night visit, when he saw her sneaking out of the house and going towards her favorite spot.Gotcha, he grinned.

He followed at a safe distance.

The full moon shown through the trees.

She had her sketch book in hand.

Settling against the tree, she started to sketch.

Get into Car Shyla, she mimicked his angry voice, give me the keys Shyla.. I am you La not shyla, she spoke to his dimpled sketch.

See he hurt me, showing her wrist to the wind..

NOT talking to you Dr.A , she told the trees, the wind and a sleeping dog, which woke up, YA RIGHT HE THOUGHT and went back to sleep.

Adi leaned against a nearby tree, listened and grinned happily.

He dialed and watched.

Not talking she spoke to the mobile and poked her tongue out it.

He dialed a couple times then messaged her.

Pick up sweetheart 😒

😡 No

please😭

NO 😡😡

I am sorry..😭

😕 No Talk to u

He sighed time we talked darling .


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AND A LITTLE MORE... Booo Hooo.

He stepped forward and a twig cracked.

She went still and scrambled to her feet.

She turned.

Dr. A, spluttered.

Don't you come near me!

Waving the pencil in front of her.

Nice weapon La? he chuckled.

She pulled back her hand, don't what to talk to you Dr. A,

La..

La, I am sorry pumpkin.

She ran and stood behind a coconut tree

Go away Dr. A, her eyes pricking with tears.

His teasing gone, he stood behind her, not touching.

La, just turn around. Please.

She shook her head with a NO.

Please..

He heard a sob

He turned her around.

Her eyes were streaming.

You were so angry she said between hiccups of sobbing.

He allowed her to cry, running a finger on her cheek following the tears, moving a strand of hair from her face. Cupping her face he smiled at her, making her sob all the more.

I don't like you, she told with all the love possible.

He put both his arms around her and pulled her to him.

Do you know what it will do to me if you get hurt?

No she shook her head.

Even the smallest scratch on you sweetheart would kill me.

That made her cry all the more.

He kissed her forehead.

Your temper… you were different she sniffed.

I should have had better control, I am sorry baby, he lifted her tear drenched face.

Fresh tears flowed , don't like you when you are angry.

I wont get angry any more, not with you,

You hurt me she complained.

See pointing to her wrist.

Both of them examined what was a pea sized bruise.

Awww you poor baby,

Looks like we need to x-ray it, with mock seriousness.

Dr. A , half sobbing half laughing.

Give, she sniffed, opening her palm.

He laughed out loud and placed the chocolates in her palm. If nothing else works, chocolates will he knew.

Don't you ever ever give Dr. A a fright.

You were frightened? She looked puzzled.

Seeing you flying on your scooty, yes I was lovely one.

Her head on his shoulder, her fingers played with the rudraksh, she smiled happily.

Got your Pad, he smirked.

It has no wings though,

He kissed the top of her head, trying hard not to laugh, will fit into your purse and you can use it overnight he concluded and burst out laughing.

She pushed away from him and glared,

Still laughing , he went on, I am not due till next week, how cute, pinching both her cheeks.

She stood with her hand on her hips, tried to look angry, but could not hold back the laugh.

I can be pretty dumb, hope I don't embarrass you in front of your friends, she said thought fully.

You are my pretty princess, and no you can never embarrass me La.

A cloud moved momentarily covering the moon. It is late darling, you should be safely tucked in

He kissed her nose, taking her hand, he walked her towards her house.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm, tsk tsk La...

Holding his hand she skipped ahead, pulling him along.

He watched her tenderly, slow down sweetheart,

She turned towards him, the moon shone on her, bathing her in a shimmer,

Adi, she held both her hands up, tomorrow I will have mehendi on them

Happiness making her look more radiant.

Hope they turn a deep shade of red, as deep as Dr.A's love for La, she spoke to herself, her voice husky.

He raised her open palms to his cheeks.

It will, as deep as La's love for Dr. A, kissing the inside of her palm.

She was all set to cry again.

NO, he said tapping her nose.

Come on doll, you better get your beauty sleep.

Their hands clasped they walked.

Adi,

mmm.

Can you stay for some more time?

NO

Can I have another chocolate.

NO

Can I see the rings.

NO.

Can I

NO..

She punched him. You're a Big Bad Dr.A.

Capturing her fist and tucking it into the crook of his arm

YES. keeping a straight face.

He waited till she went inside. She stood near the window,

You are all coming here tomorrow for lunch Adi?

Yes baby, all of us will be there.

She was standing safely out of his reach, feeling really brave and mischievous, putting on her loveliest smile.

Dr. A, she called as he was about to walk away.

Yes darling.

The last "Can I"

He looked at questioningly.

I was going to ask..

"Can I kiss you.."

His eyes narrowed, you little devil'.. brave words princess.

Be prepared for your punishment, a wicked smile appeared on his lips.

Seeing the smile, her bravado slipped.


[ GREAT YOU HAD SAY SOMETHING STUPID, JUST WHEN EVERYTHING WAS FINE]
What can he do, she muttered to herself. she shivered as a few options came to her mind. she quickly slipped into her bed and blushed herself to sleep.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaa me 1st to comment! 😃
wow jaya...th updates are soo awesome! loved all the three of them!
sorry i have my boards going onm now so i cant comment more often
Edited by Yukthi. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Yukthi.

wow jaya...th eupdates are soo awesome! loved all the three of them!

sorry i have my boards going onm now so i cant comment more often


Yukthi exams are the priority silly girl, 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh Jay u should have made them kiss would have been perfect for that impromptu meet. Hahaha LA trying to tease DR.A I hope Adi keeps his promise about that punishment. 😉. Superb updates. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: edna16

Ohh Jay u should have made them kiss would have been perfect for that impromptu meet. Hahaha LA trying to tease DR.A I hope Adi keeps his promise about that punishment. 😉. Superb updates. 😃


Kisses are coming up,, did not want to put in one too many..😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
only one word i love you
now i think i have started liking Adi😆
but punishment..ahem ahem i am waiting for his punishment
and seriously i find it too too too cute when he treats her like a kid..that's the best thing i love about this story

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