JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 92

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Posted: 12 years ago
CONTINUED ...

Go fast na Di, Tarun encouraged her. Please na. Road is empty, nothing will happen.

Shyla hesitated and then notched up the speed.

Yipeee went Tarun at the back, standing and spreading his hand.

Bhaiyya had a temper which rarely showed up, but it looked like it was going to pay a visit.

Didi he prayed, slow down please, but grinned watching the two of them.

Shyla was in flow now. Getting into the mood along with Tarun. She sped on the road, getting pretty careless. She accelerated a little more on a dare from Tarun. The scooty bumped around.

She heard the car honk from behind, but she was too engrossed enjoying herself.

The car honked repeatedly.

God these tourists, irritated she turned to look, made a face and moved to the side of the road giving room for the car.

Nandu speed up and go a little ahead and stop, he instructed, his face a mask now.

He turned and watched as Shyla stopped her scooty to have an argument with Tarun. She tightened her duppatta, Ready he heard her call out to Tarun. And then they were off again!!

He got out and stood beside his car, hoping she would see him.

No such luck.

Shyla did not even glance towards him, her hair flying behind her she zoomed right past him.

Tarun who had decided to sit facing the other way and was the one who saw Adrit. He waved and shouted. Adrit bhaiyaa.

Screech bump bump went the scooty as she applied the breaks, Tarun, what?

Bhaiyya, Tarun called again.

Stop teasing Tarun, Dr. A wont be here for another 2 or 3 hours.

But he is standing right there Di.

She turned around. She gasped. It was indeed Dr.A and he was walking towards them.

She hurriedly got off, Tarun did likewise and both stood in attention.

Bhaiyya looks very angry, very very angry, Tarun whispered to her.

Shhhut up Tarun.. but decided to confirm it.

She looked up for a quick glimpse.

Decided it was time examine her toe nails. Which she did with great concentration.

Wow nice shoes thought, as it came into view.

Lock the scooty La, it was not a request, the voice sounded strange.

Adi.. she started.

Just do as I say Shyla.

[FULL NAMES ALWAYS MEANT TROUBLE]

She locked the scooty.

Keys please he said, She dutifully gave it to him.

Get into the car.

Adi listen I have to…

His look suggested he was not going to listen.


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Posted: 12 years ago
CONTINUED...

[NANDU HAD QUICKLY MOVED THE CHOCOLATES TO SAFER PLACES]

She got into the car. Tarun was seated in the front.

Adrit got in beside her, shutting the car door with some force.

Shyla sat back realizing he was in no mood to listen.

[WONDER HOW MUCH OF OUR ANTICS HE SAW]

She grinned.

She jumped when he grabbed wrist.

Stop grinning Shyla,

No helmet, he was saying, and speeding!

La how stupid can you be.

She had never seen his temper before.

She froze, she just looked at the new Adrit.

Adrit was trying to control his temper, but just thinking of her getting hurt made him angrier.

Both of you need a good slap, as he looked at La and then at Tarun.

I am sorry bhaiyya,

Shyla was unsure how to react to his anger.

Adi... she tried again….

No Shyla don't want hear anything right now, his voice was sharp.

She knew she had done something silly.

But so much anger?

She slowly moved from him a little afraid, she turned away her eyes filled with tears and looked out the window.

Adrit closed his eyes, [ADI CALM DOWN, YOU ARE SCARING HER]

They had reached her house. As soon as the car slowed down, she opened the door and ran in.

La…damn, he cursed himself. His anger subsiding as quickly as it had flared.

Fighting is good, Tarun was explaining to him, It will make her love you some more.

Adrit smiled despite himself. Yes it will, now how am I going to go about it Tarun.

You are the brain wala Doctor. You should know, laughing loudly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely preparations😊..cant wait for the actual engagement..
yipee...first to read ur update..😃..
loved Adrit's anger😳..actually can imagine Shyla's reactions for Adrit's anger..

Edited by anu7593 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Angry Adrit is damn sexy. Thanks for the long updates. How did she miss out on the chocolates would have calmed her down a little. 😉
Posted: 12 years ago
Brain wala doctor...lolz.. It's natural, Adi's anger over La for being careless and that too about herself! After all, Adi loves La so much, that even the thought of her getting hurt, shakes him to core!
Loved the update, do continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally Angry Dr.A i knw hw HOT he mus be wen he's angry😉n sweet Shylu all confused with this angry side of her Adi😳now its time for Dr.A to cajole his La
Edited by hemaDaganKhian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
At last some manofying! Yupieee!

But I wish Adrit had gotten angry for some other thing, where Shyla was not at fault. He seems justified here. But I love it that Shula was comfortable enough to speed, so

Jaya ka r you still building up towards the tragedy showing how reckless Shyla is prone to?
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe my lips are sealed
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Posted: 12 years ago



THANK U dear for stopping by.
the FF is written keeping MR. MOHIT RAINA AND SONARIKA .. mahadev and parvti of DEVON KE DEV MAHADEV

thank u for reading and appreciating


thanks 4 d info...nw i knw them..more than that i am nw familiar vth adrit n shyla... nice update... i too like angry adrit...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally a angry young man.
Loved the update.

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