Pyar ki Ghoonj - OS

AsYa OS - Pyar Ki Ghoonj

After zoya told Asad that he's alone etc

Asad was sitting by the fire he had started outside, the thoughts of Ayaan and him thinking of betraying and not accepting his request kept circling his mind.. He thought to himself that Ms.Farooqi was right he was completely alone.. Even she wasn't with him.. In disgust he brought his head in between his knees and tried to escape the world and think about nothing, maybe if I had some quiet time he thought ill be a little less tensed

Meanwhile, Zoya was in her room walking around in circles
" Allah mian, I think mainay aaj Mr. khan ko kuch ziada he bol diya tha" she began biting her nails and thought ill go apologize to him. Zoya went to asads room but didn't see him there, through the window she some light and saw Asad siting around the fire and left to him. She carefully walked closer not to make any noise. She came and sat right beside him and started gazing up at the sky .. Asad felt her presence but didn't bother to look up..
Z: " you know mr.khan, kabhi kabhi jab main sad hoti hoon na aur jab mujhe kisi ki zaroorat hoti hai toh main in taroon koh dekh thi hoon.. You know they're so pretty.. Aisa lagtha hai kuch minutes kai liye jaisay duniye he rukh jati hai"
Zoya laid back on to the grass to get a better view of the stars. Asad rose his head up and looked straight at the sky , it was a beautiful sight to see...

Z: Mr. khan main janti hun kai aap boht hee mushkil waqt sai ghuzar rai hai.. Its a very tough time but bas 2 minute ke liye duniya ko bhool kar aap sirf in taroon ko dekhiye... (Asad hesitated) please mr khan ?" Zoya pulled on asad and he slowly laid back, both now laying down and staring at the sky...
A: " mainay kabhi koi faislay is liye nehi liye kai main apni ami or bhai ko koi chot phonchaoon main toh sirf apni ami ki hifazat kar na chata hoon.. No one understands me woh mere apne hain Magar har tarf sai main aikala hoon.."
Z: " its okay Mr.Khan"
A: " bachpan sai lai kar aaj tak mainay apni ami ko kabhi aisa nehi dekha .. Kabhi nehi" Asads voice cracked and anger started building up and he quickly stood up... Zoya seeing this got up to
Z: " i can understand Mr.kh--" asad pulled zoya close bu grabbing her by the arms
A: " sab kehte hai kai woh samaj thai hai LAIKAIN KOI KUCH NEHI SAMAJ THA" his eyes blood red shot at zoya like a bullet frightening her so badly she started shaking. Asad pushed Zoya away and grasped his forehead and calmed himself down. He turned around to see a scared zoya and realised she was only trying to help her..
A: " dammit .. Main sab kob chot phonchata hoon! " he smashed his hand inside the burning flame of fire
Z: " MR.KHAN!!!!" Zoya pulled his hand out and blew on it gently to ease the pain and .. Asad watched her regretting hurting her and couldn't take his eyes off her
Z: " MR. KHAN ARE YOU CRAZY AGAR AAP KO KUCH HOGAYA HOTHA TOH ?!!"" She asked with conceren ... Asad started right at zoya and she not being able to handle the stare tried to look away but he captured her in his gaze . He instantly pulled her close to her and grabbed her for a embrace.. Zoya was shocked at first but than eased into the hug as all Asad needed was some support.. She tried to loosen the hug but he held her tighter..
A: " IM SORRY ZOYA"

Aajhahahahahah i dont know how it is i just randomly wrote it please its my first OS should i continue i dont please comment and make my day :)

- Rashda Ahmed
ASYA <33

Tell me how it is or ill think its bad if it is bad please tell me how to improve :) alll suggestions arr greatly appreciated its my first time :$

It was wonderful. Write more! :D

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

It was wonderful. Write more! :D

I'm glad u liked it I was scared no one would like it :) thank u and I deff :)

So well written. I loved it😉Continue this girl!! 😳😃

its ausome

Hey!

This is one of the best OS's I've ever read on this forum! It's just very real and believable. (Except maybe the hug, but what the heck, it was a fan fic, and we write those for the creative liberties that we won't get to see on-screen.)

really nice!!!!! plzz do continue!!! ;)