Taarey FF.. Is hatred stronger than Love?? (Note pg 80) - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Wow I love this attitude no none Rey lol its so sexy lol. Taani being all dramatic omg she is too much lol. Im loving this ff plz continue soon, recap is super exciting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
superbbb update .. i loveee taani😉😆.. she complained to swayam .. that part was soo cute loved it.. n swayam he is so caring... cant wait for the precap scene
nb:... update was short next time if you dont make it long ... then... then...then???... haa i will also make my updates short😉😆😆..hows that??😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Part 3.

Dedicated to Indu di (disismeenu4u)
Plz plz plz don't make ur updates short!! Nahi toh mein toh update he nahi dungi!! And where is my Chahaat?? It's been so long yaar update soon, woh bhi lamba wala!
Now the update:

A strong pair of arms flung around his neck, securing him against the wall.
Rey could see anger finding refuge in Swayam's eyes, his face turning red and his burning skin piercing through Him. One of Swayam's hands were wrapped around Rey's neck forcefully bounding him to the wall, but holding his neck so delicately that it wouldn't even hurt a fly. As if only giving him a warning. And the other hand pushed against his shoulder, making sure he couldn't move. But before Rey could question him, he burst out with a lot of anger.

Sw: How dare u touch Taani!! What do u think, that ur new so you can do anything? Well u don't know me!! Come any where near taani or any other girl and ur life in this college, will turn into hell!

Swayam didn't want to hurt him just give him a warning, as he was new. So he turned around and was about to leave when...

Rey: (Dramatically) Mummy!! I'm so scared, koi toh mujhe bacho!! Yeh lardka bohot dangerous hai!

Swayam walked up to a smirking Rey. Feeling disgusted at the fact that even after a warning he still had the guts to fight back.

Sw: u think ur really smart??
Rey: i don't think i know.
Sw: oh really... Well i'll have to see that in class, but right now its best to take off this smirk and think about what i said... It might be the only thing standing between u and my punch (showing him his fist).
Rey: ummm... (Putting his finger on his chin, as if thinking very deeply) NAH!! How about... you show me that punch of yours?(smirking)
Swayam Thought that if he doesn't teach Rey a lesson now, Rey will not take him seriously.
So Swayam lifted up his hand and was just about to punch rey (his fist a few inches away from rey's face) when Rey's hand held his fist and stopped the punch.
Both of them looked at each in full on tashan mode! As if trying to kill each other with their tashan 😆
Rey turned around and pushed Swayam onto the wall and held his neck tightly. (Almost choking him!)
Rey: maybe next time... but right now i need to go to class and show how smart i am.
(He let go of swayam's neck)
Swayam was staring at rey with killing eyes.
Rey: and ya... (Getting into his face) Don't interfere in my life! (Turning around to leave) Think about what i said... It might be the only thing standing between ur pretty face and my punch (showing swayam his fist). (Smirking) bye sweetheart (gave him a fly kiss 😳and walked into his class)
(Side note: fight thordi boring thi and no one really got hurt as, i didn't really want swayam to have a particular reason to hate Rey!)

After college-
Swayam was driving Sharon home, when she noticed the fingerprints on his neck!
Sh (worried): Swayam! Whys there fingerprints on ur neck??!
Sw: ah.. Wo bas Rey ke saath ek fight ho gayi thi so yea...
Sh: What that new entry right??! Kyon? Ussne aisa kya kardia??
Sw: (repeats the whole situation, and obviously exaggerating it so that it looks as if he had also given him a few marks. He didn't wanna look like a wimp in front of his girlfriend)
Sh (really worried and hypo!): WHAT!
Sw: don't worry babes, itna bhi dard nahi ho raha...
Sh: arre dard nahi Swayam!! He called u SWEETHEART!! how dare him! (Teasing him) only i have that right!
Sw: Sharon tum bhi na! Kabhi nahi sudhrogi!!
Sh: (laughing hysterically)

Meanwhile with taani-
She searched the whole college for Rey! And there was only 1 spot left... The library!

She walked into the library where she found him walking along the aisles trying to find a book. She checked him thoroughly for any marks or bruises which had been caused by Swayam. But there was nothing!

T: What the hell yaar!!! Iss pe toh ek bhi scratch nahi hai!! Aisa kaise ho sakta hai??!
Rey: (hearing someones voice turned around to find taani talking to her self). What the Hell!! Tum yahaan mera piche piche aagayi??!
T: (damn it!) listen Mr! Mein yahan tumhare piche piche nahi aayi hun okay!! Mein tumhe kio stalker dihkte hun, ki tumhe poore college mein follow kaarongi! Mein bas yaha ek book lene aayi thi okay!
Rey: yeah sure! Par mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki tum yeh dehkne aayi thi ki mujhe chot lagi hai ki nahi!!
T: (what the hell! Isse kaise paata! Can he read my mind??! Arre shut up idiot!)
R: Well u know what, tum apne uss bodyguard ko bol dena, mera life mein interfere na kaare!!
T: (clicking her finger at him) listen Reyaansh!! ...
Hearing the word Reyaansh from her mouth he grabbed her arms and pushed her against the shelf. He stared at her, his looks piercing her through her soul. What had she said wrong??

R: don't call me that!!! (He screamed at the top of his voice, leaving taani's eyes popping out) call me rey just REY!!
He turned around unable to control his anger and tears. leaving Taani astonished and scared. (But she was not a person who u could shut up that easily)

T: listen... agaar tumhe iss naam se itne problem hai toh apni mom se bol kar change kyon nahi kar wa liya?

The words she had said started ringing in his ears... Mom... Mom seh bol kar change kyon nahi kar wa liya?... Mom...
Hearing the word MOM, his eyes filled up with tears. And his hands automatically formed a fist.
Not wanting Taani to see him crying, he just stood there facing away from her, not uttering a single word.

T: (unable to understand his sudden outburst) What ever, i'm going!!

She left the library leaving a badly sobbing Rey behind. He punched the aisle in front of him and fell to his knees. His heart being unable to handle so much pain screamed out in agony... AAAHHH!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hope u guys enjoyed it 😊 do tell me how it was!! And don't forget to like!!
And i know indu di it was short (again) but next chapter is long... As it has a long flash back... So u better give me a lamba wala update!!

P.S plz add me for PM's as it's hard sending pm's separately

PRECAP:
There was an unbearable silence in the library. It was tearing him from the inside, the silence was just like his life... EMPTY. All you could hear was Rey's sobbing and his tears dripping down on the ground.
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Oh DAMN! Shee yaar no actual fight between Swayam-Rey. LOL.
But rey has lot of pain inside of him. Honestly I also LOVED TAANI. Along with Rey I also wanna see what Taani has been through & I would LOVE to see both of them FULL of ATTITIDE & ARROGANCE with eachother. I really don't wanna see Taani as BECHARI except with her brother Swayam, & definetly not in front of this ARROGANT & full of ATTITUDE Rey.
I would love to see Taani standing equally arrogant & rude just like rey & with rey, kyunki usse bhi toh apni takkar ka koi milna chahiye aur who else could be better than Taani.

Anywyas AWESOME update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Im actually happy that Reyam didn't fight, awesome update. Taani is too funny, but why Rey is so hurt hearing the name Reyaansh and about his mom. U did a wonderful job plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
omg!
the entire fight was so INTENSE! that is the best word to describe it
and 🤣 sharon teasing swayam
and loved the end
so rey has something with this mom...hmmm! this is keeps getting more interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Poor swayam...

Rey swayam convo was grt...

What the! Taani came to chk f rey's wound...

Taarey fight again...

Rey hvng,... Hard past

waiting 4 nxt parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Oh my god. U dedicated the precap 2 me? Thank u very much. And I loved both chapters. Taani's drama and reyam tashan. I wonder what pain both r suffering. And thank u for dedication. I am so happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Reyam fight cant handle..
vo log dost hi acche lagte hai...
REy is crying...feeling bad ...for him..
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
part 2:
Oh my god!! ReYam fight?! I reD the.second chap just now!!! Gotta read the next update NOW!!

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