Feelings meant for someone!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hold me tight, never let me out of this embrace,
I love the feel, I love the calmness which envelopes me,

The only sound I hear is your steady heartbeats,
The only smell I sense is your woody scent,
I could stand like this forever..

I would wholeheartedly embrace the fire that u lite in me,
I would heartwarmingly welcome the pain you give me

But never let me out of your arms..never let me..
Because I am nobody without you..
I cease to exist without you,

My love for you run deep,
It's me, myself



PS: This is a random madness of mine, for long time I had lost this spark of instant writing out my feelings..but when I regained a part of it back, I shared it with few of my friends..One of them was adamant in wanting me to post it in IF...Hence here you go...Drop a word if you liked it..It makes my day bright! :-)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its not madness! i would call it intense
its really awesome reflects one's intense feelings
superbbb!!!!!👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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If you have the gift of writing something so beautiful, spontaneously, then I must applaud you! Wow! It was very good! 👏
Do share more of these... Don't hesitate!!!

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Oh..And whoever these feelings are meant for, is extremely lucky! 😊 😉
Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet , simple yet elegant !!! loved it :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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if this is madness and then I am fan of your madness. Beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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If it is madness in your point of view what will be the great or classic or masterpiece..
I like it..no i love it
superb
Don't let it go
Thanks for mail
waiting for strange love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww.. beautiful.
thanks for sharing.
love
AK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is ur random madness???do u even hear wat u say..
if this is ur madness, i wonder how sanity is..
and u never told me u had it in u..i guess i dont know a lot about u..
and thanks to ur friend for forcing u to put it here..
and coming to ur writing..that was intense..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome I think to jot down thoughts and emotion is not everybody's cup of tea it was written beautifully too !!!!👍🏼😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is beautiful and intense,full of feelings. Love it.

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