Taarey FF.. Is hatred stronger than Love?? (Note pg 80) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear
i ll wait until it gets interstng
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Its amezng..waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dea chap 1 ws awsm pls pm me next time :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Hello guys!! am back with chap 2! :D and Thank you all for ur supportive comments... they mean alot to me...
here it is:

On the way to his class, many girls tried running into him to start a conversation but it didn't work. He would just walk past them, without even offering help or saying sorry.

Taani was walking in the hall way texting Sharon on her phone, about the dance auditions that were going to take place.
When suddenly *BANG* she ran straight into a hard chest, and almost fell when a strong pair of arms wrapped around her waist, securing her against his warm body.

For the first time after 5 years she had felt so safe and secure with someone. She looked deep into his hazel brown eyes, his eyes were crystal clear, she could she pain in them, the same pain she had. The pain of being alone in this world.

Completely lost in his eyes,
Taani: sorry i was textin...
But before she could continue her sentence, he forced her up with jolt. She was shaken to she so much anger.

Rey: main tum jaise lardkiyo ko bahot ache jaanta hu. Phele to jaan bhuj kar lardko mein ghuss ti ho phir sorry bol kar dosti kaarne ki koshish. Am i right!!! But it's not gonna work on...

But before he could continue yelling at her...

Taani: oye hello shayaad tum mujhe jaante nahi ho!!! Mujhe tum jaise lardko mein bilkul bhi interest nahi hai! bhaghwaan jaane kaha kaha se aajate ho!! Galti khud ki hote hai, aur dusroo ko blame karte ho! But understand 1 thing mein Taani hun, Taani Kundra! Mein tum jaise...

Rey just walked off, having enough of her blabbering.
Rey in mind: ajeeb lardki hai, phele to sorry bolne waale thi aur ab?? Bol rahi thi ki galti meri hai! What nonsense! Reyaansh Singhania kaabhi bhi gaalti nahi karta!

Taani just stood there open mouthed...
Taani in her mind: iski toh...!! By god, kya shamjta hai apne app ko!! Bina meri baat sune hi chaala gaye!!
Ab dhek tu Mr. Reyaansh Singhania! Taani Kundra tera kya haal karti hai!

In canteen-
Taani walks in and swayam was there, she went up to him and was just about to bombard him with everything that happened, when swayam got scared looking at her arm...

Sw: taani wat happened to ur arm?? Are those someones hand marks!?
Taani in head: lagta hai jab uss MR. Attitude ne mujhe karda (stand up) kaar vaya tha toh usse hogaya hoga! *lightbulb clicked in head* agaar maine swayam ko baatya kya hua toh Uss Reyaansh ki toh band baaj gaayi ge!
Chaal ab acting shuru kaarde!

T:(starting to sob badly): swayam... Swayam!! Uss new entry ne... Uss ne..
Sw: ussne kya!! Taani tell me na, bacha tu mujhe nahi baata yegi??
T (putting her head on his shoulder dramatically , so that swayam can't see her face): swayam, i just accidentally ran into him... And then he started judging my character!! Fhir swayam (pretending to wipe her tears) he pushed me really hard by grabbing my arms toh... Yeh marks uski waja se hai... (Holding swayam by his shoulders) Swayam, tum plz kuch maat karna, nahi toh wo mujhe nahi chodrega!! (Falling on the ground and sobbing badly) plz swayam... Plz kuch mat karna...

Swayam left the canteen in full tashan mode! Thinking to himself: HOW DARE HIM!! iss rey kho apni maa yaad nahi diladi toh mera naam bhi Swayam Swekhavat nahi!!

With taani-
She stood up, smiling widely
By this time everyone in the canteen was staring at her
she could feel peoples gaze on her, so she composed herself and...
T: wat r u all staring at!!? Go get a life!
And left the canteen unable to control her laugh.

Meanwhile Rey had finally found his classroom and was just about to walk in when... He was pulled against the wall with a strong pair of hands, which flung straight to his neck...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So how was it?? Plz mujhe baatana kaisa laga. And if u want any improvements in characters and their attitudes don't hesitate to tell me! Aur ha plz do like and comment!
P.S i know i'm not that great of a writer, but plz do bear with me 😊
PRECAP: (especially for ShivTRSS)

Swayam was just about to punch rey (his fist a few inches away from rey's face) when Rey's hand held his fist and stopped the punch.
Rey turned around and pushed Swayam onto the wall and held his neck tightly.
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
idk if i said this in my prev comment but bad ass rey is really hot!!
and taani 🤣 pretending so that swayam could beat up rey
ohhh tensions next
and pain in rey's eyes! cnt wait to see how this unfolds
loved it
and yayy first to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Oh DAMN! can't wait to see this swayam-Rey fight...
Interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Omg!!!!! I'm actually liking this attitude waala rey... And taanis dramebaazi was just LOL... Nd excited for next part... Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
🤣

Rey ka attitude...by god! and Taani ki acting... perfect jodi 😆

bechara swayam...😆
awesum update...eagerly waitng 4 the next part... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great part, n u ar an awesome writer, omg swayam in full Tashan mode, n rey and swayam fight, omg this is the twilight zone lolll, anyways awesome, please cont soon
Edited by miss_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_neha

Great part, n u ar an awesome writer, omg swayam in full Tashan mode, n rey and swayam fight, omg this is the twilight zone lolll, anyways awesome, please cont soon



Hehe, thank you so much di!! Ur comments really make me happy and i feel gud about my writing!!
Luv ya! ❤️

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