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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uh-Oh Rishab and Madhu moving to Mumbai without their significant others? Mukund and Dips better hire bodyguards to keep RK and Madhu away from each other. 😆 I am so excited about this story! I really like how its coming along so far.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Uh-Oh Rishab and Madhu moving to Mumbai without their significant others? Mukund and Dips better hire bodyguards to keep RK and Madhu away from each other. 😆 I am so excited about this story! I really like how its coming along so far.

looks like there is a steamy road ahead. I am excited as well. This one is going to get cheesy at times. WARNING ya girl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iiDona

looks like there is a steamy road ahead. I am excited as well. This one is going to get cheesy at times. WARNING ya girl


YAY! Steamy road ahead! That makes me even more happy! cheesy and filmy I can handle, in fact i love filmy and cheesy things.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS FOR A NEW ONE
HOPE IT IS HAPPY NOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

THANKS FOR A NEW ONE

HOPE IT IS HAPPY NOW

that is the intention
so far😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

YAY! Steamy road ahead! That makes me even more happy! cheesy and filmy I can handle, in fact i love filmy and cheesy things.😉

my girl soujanya here asked for cheesy so, *drum roll please* here it is. coming up shortly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

"I want a love that makes me trip on my shoelaces when I see him.

Stutter when he says good morning.
Twirl around in a white frock even though I would never do that in public ever
but, I think he likes my silliness so I will do it anyway.
The kind that makes me nervous, weak in the knees.
Mad and blushing.
Calm and screaming.
I want to jump up a tree and tell everyone we belong together regardless of their interest.
I want him as my model even though I design for women.
I want him asleep on my lap just so I could count his eyelashes and touch his hair because he would not let me when he is awake; ruins the texture you know.
I want a love where I take up cooking classes because he wants scrambled eggs and I am a vegetarian.
I want to go a soccer game because he plays even though I can't tell the champions from the rivals.
I want to dance in circles when he calls.
I want to listen to the static on the phone and dream for hours.
I want to love my love.
I want to view the world through his eyes.
I want to scribble my first name next to his last name not caring what impression that makes on my image of a woman who stands her ground.
I want a love that lasts".

"No you don't. You don't want any of those things. You are just trying to make this process difficult for me".

Deepali shrugged her shoulders at the lengthy and cheesy response from Madhu.
Madhubala was the last person on earth to care about romance. This was likely a lecture to divert Deepali's attention from the issue at hand: whether or not to continue a long distance relationship with Mukund.

"Fine, don't believe me. I am not ready to leave Mukund regardless of what you say", Madhu folded her arms and looked at no one in particular.

"You will never be ready. I know this man is not right for you". Deepali was persistent in her ways and this time was no different. She had decided this was the end of a boring phase. So, the end it was.

"He is not wrong either". She was not interested in defending her non-existent relationship.

"What are you afraid of? That's right. You are afraid of being single. You think you can't handle your own".

"Can do". The taunt had hit its mark.

"Really? When was the last time you were not in a relationship? I remember, when you were busy winning the state robotics championship".

"We pledged never to mention he who shall not be named".

"He who shall not be named scarred you for life. You have lost the ability to function withou a boyfriend". Deepali held back and prepared for a saga to unfold.

"I will prove you wrong. I am breaking up with him tonight".

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"We need to talk Mukund".

An unsuspecting Mukund jokingly mentioned, "uh oh. Are you about to deliver the its not you, its me speech".

"Actually, it is you".

"Excuse me?"

"I think you are an incredible man and will be a great boyfriend to someone else. But, we have grown apart".

"Madhu, is it about your move to Mumbai? Look, I don't think you will ever cheat on me. You never be the same person as..."

"Stop right there.

Do not bring my mother into this.
It really is you. I was going to stay quiet and take the fall but, what the hell?
You have reached your lowest low.
I cannot tolerate you finding weaknesses in me every second of every waking day. I am sick of it! I am sick of you!
I am not your case study to dissect my socio-economic and mental well being.
I do not need you to tell me what is wrong with me.
I did not sign up for a shrink, I signed up for a boyfriend.
What is this, huh? This ugly two thousand and eight hoodie.
That dude at the bus station called you a hobo!
You are with a designer for heaven's sake.
Be a little more respectful of my credentials.
I am done".

"And I am the crazy one?" Mukund whistled.

"Okay, you can't have her so, make fun of her?

Look at you rationalizing and trivializing the most significant existential crisis of your life.
You are a boring choo choo train.
This is the most thrilling incident that will ever happen to you. Cherish it!
Think on it, sleep on it, pray on it!
And, don't you mention me or my family from your mouth again or I will cut a man".

"You are just like your mother, a disgrace to the community!".

Mukund yelled as Madhubala tapped away maintaining her composure. Thud, she hit a broad frame.

"Everything okay?" Rishabh asked.

"Sunshine and rainbows", Madhu hid her face with her palm and disappeared somewhere in the parking lot.

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
thank god she broke up with that boring worm...really mukund is so disgusting like in the show...yuck...but madhu answered him back and that was great...
thx for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

thank god she broke up with that boring worm...really mukund is so disgusting like in the show...yuck...but madhu answered him back and that was great...

thx for the update

I have no idea what he was like in the show so, I will take your word for it. Mukund had to go for the story to move forward.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
ohh that was a pretty nasty breakup! but it happens! Glad she is out of a relationship that she didn't find worth her time👏. Now its RK and Madhu time! soon I hope! 😃

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