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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

I'm totally loving you at this moment

That was beautiful!

Let's see how these 31 days go...😉

I was actually looking forward to a beautiful part and I got it, thanks

Congrats on becoming an IF- dazzler, you could dazzle like a star now

And good luck in your exams and Insh-Allah we'll see you soon<3

Edited by risingsea101 - 12 years ago

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@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

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congratulations love!!!

For turning into a dazzler =)

exams.

Grrr.

i HATE THEM.

Thank god for me, they are in Novembah :P

YOU WILL get ann A+ in whateva you are doin'.

trust me. what eva i say actually happens.

like, i told a guy he was gotta hurt his head. He ended up cracking it open and getting 25 stitches on his forehead. whoops.

But, then it only happens sometimes.

I wanted One Direction to be in my room yesterday. but they didn't come.

i guess they were too busy with the Take Me Home Tour [=))]

so, you WiLL get an A+ <3

finally, to da update!!!

gawjus love <3

HES GETTIN' DAH FLUTTERBIES!!!

lol, Zoya and her peppah spray 🤣

DIVORCE??!!!

NO WAY!!!!

well, at least they have 31 days :P

Babber Sher 🤣

love, i LOVE your updates 🤣

good luck for exams, and please update after you're done studying :P

Thanks for the pm love <3

oh yeah, by the way, Karan might be a silent readah or somfin ya know ;)

so he might be reading your stuff right now :P

oh, and don't mind any spelling mistakes, s'only 8:46am, just woke up 🤣

Edited by AussieChick - 12 years ago

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Good luck on your exams! May you pass with flying colors! The first thing u may want to go when exams are over is the update...please!!!! Otherwise I might die! Lol. Good luck again and thanks for the story so far.

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: HK90

Chapter 5 to chapter 7 was a funny, lovely jorney, loved reading them a lot 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 really I loved each dialogue, it was superb. These are my favourite parts, I have many more but if I stay here to say a word about every thing, I will not able to finish it till night.

'Don't get off the damn horse. Just ride off into the sunset without marrying that Miss. Zoya Farooqi and live happily ever after. 🤣 usually are the brides who say things like this, "I run away before it's too late," but I see that Asad was thinking of putting into practice what the elders say, that the guy barat gets on a horse because in this way they give to him one last chance to escape before that his freedom is over and I see that Asad was keen to do it.

'Well then, wave good bye to your days of freedom! You'll now probably spend the rest of your life wiping food off your wife's face. How pleasant! 😆 poor Asad 😭 do not worry, you will not need to wipe the food off Zoya's face or I can say that you'll have fun doing it, since she is a stunner, and plus you would have a valid excuse to touch her face, and her beautiful lips😉

"Damn! She's not even punctual! Late on her own wedding?!'😕 I think that Asad doesn't know that brides are always come to the mandap after the groom😛, so it makes sense that she is late. If he made ??his trinfale entry even she has the right to do it, so that's why she goes after the groom so she can get everyone's attention on her😃

It was covered by the drooping pallu of her heavy dupatta! How can people make Oh'ing and Ah'ing sounds at a faceless figure? Seriously, people can be so fake, sometimes! Asad tell us the truth, that you were annoyed by the fact that you could not see Zoya's face, what other people had seen that's why they did all those moans

How on Earth am I going to tell her that I'm not ready to do IT with her... Doing IT with her when I haven't even talked to her once in my life... But what if she thinks I'm not man enough? Asad is afraid that she may doubts about his masculinity, if he tells her that he doesn't want to do IT with her on the wedding night😆
Don't worry Asad we know, and I even Zoya after looking at you, that you have all the thing in the right pace 😳 ☺️

'I'm wandering around the house on my wedding night. People would start thinking I'm gay or something.
The solution is really simple, to prove that you are not gay, a baby, but for that you should start look at your wife first 😆 😆 😆

Asad continue call her Miss Farooqi I hope that he understand soon that now she is Mrs. Khan.

P.S. you made my a Qubool hai addicted, because I watch the serial for 12 hours, with out pause, I'm totaly crazy about them now.
P.P.S. I noticed that Razia as a Villan is very strong, from past 17 years she is maneuvering the lives of so many people, I would say that our Shyamu compared to her is nothing, with all due respect to Abbas.
P.P.P.S. edited on page 24

Awww!! I'm sooo very sorry I couldn't reply to your awesomely long and lovely comment before! Had been so busy with my studies and family. I've dedicated Chap 8 to you. please accept it as a small bribe and don't be angry at me 😆

Yesss!! You're thoughts exactly match with whats on my mind while writing 😆 And I knowww!! The Big Bad Shyamo seems only like a naughty kid compared to Razia 🤢😆

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: risingsea101
I'm totally loving you at this moment
That was beautiful!
Let's see how these 31 days go...😉
I was actually looking forward to a beautiful part and I got it, thanks
Congrats on becoming an IF- dazzler, you could dazzle like a star now
And good luck in your exams and Insh-Allah we'll see you soon<3

Aww Thank youuu!! I've been striving to become an IF Dazzler for ages now. Thank God it finally happened 😆

Yes, now AsYa have 30 days to fall in love. Lets hope they don't waste them all on fighting 😆

Thanks for the luck! I need it 😳 and Thank youuu for your regular comments! Much appreciated 😛

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

res going to be here soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

--edited--

My soon was not soon, I'm so so so so sorry for being late

now coming to the update what you dedicate the update also to me, I'm shocked 😲 and also very very much happy

thanks you so so so much, it's so sweet of you.

The waking part was too cute and romantic 🤗🤗 finnaly Jahanpana six packs is start noticing her, if you keep that woh din dur nahi hai jis din aap apki begam ki akhiyon mein kho jaye ghe😳, keep it up Asad 👍🏼

I loved his concerned toward Zoya, kya karu haye kuch kuch hota hai 😳

But Zoya and her peper spray is too much yaar, she but it in her own husband's eyes🤣, Zoya don't do this again otherwaise babar sher tumhe dekhe gha kayse 😉 Loved the way she was checking out him 😳

"No Tamatar, I'm not leaving for a honeymoon with my briefcase. I just have a really important meeting that I can't miss!" but Asad tumara kya barosa, oh sakda wa ke tum sach much akele hi apne honeymoon par chale jao 😆

What they are talking about divorce, oh no they have just 30 days to fall in love, hope yaar that didn't wait the most of the time in fighting with each other, hope they start staring at each other.

"That tingling feeling you get when you fall in love?" Asad asked.

"Yes!" Zoya replied dreamily. Maybe Mr. Bodybuilder does have a heart, she thought smirking to herself. Zoya please don't drool too much on him and don't describe him so well because with you, we also will start drool over him, actually I'm already doing it ☺️ ☺️

"I believe that tingling feeling is actually common sense leaving your body" 🤣 🤣 common sense leaving your body, really, but he is right because you can't fall in love if you use to much sense 😆 so hope Asad lose his sense soon 😃

Heart?? No chance!! Don't worry Zoya darling we will make a transplant😆, just for you, with your name wittern on top 😉

Now I really can't wait to read the next part because I know that it is going to be really funny, romantic and there will be a lot of fight, but lovely one.

LOVED IT TOO MUCH TO THE CORE

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: AussieChick
Res

Edit********

congratulations love!!!

For turning into a dazzler =)

exams.
Grrr.
i HATE THEM.
Thank god for me, they are in Novembah :P

YOU WILL get ann A+ in whateva you are doin'.
trust me. what eva i say actually happens.
like, i told a guy he was gotta hurt his head. He ended up cracking it open and getting 25 stitches on his forehead. whoops.
But, then it only happens sometimes.
I wanted One Direction to be in my room yesterday. but they didn't come.
i guess they were too busy with the Take Me Home Tour [=))]

so, you WiLL get an A+ <3

finally, to da update!!!

gawjus love <3
HES GETTIN' DAH FLUTTERBIES!!!

lol, Zoya and her peppah spray 🤣

:O
DIVORCE??!!!
NO WAY!!!!

well, at least they have 31 days :P
Babber Sher 🤣

love, i LOVE your updates 🤣

good luck for exams, and please update after you're done studying :P
Thanks for the pm love <3

oh yeah, by the way, Karan might be a silent readah or somfin ya know ;)
so he might be reading your stuff right now :P
<3

oh, and don't mind any spelling mistakes, s'only 8:46am, just woke up 🤣

I wanted One Direction to be in my room yesterday. but they didn't come. Let me just 🤣 🤣🤣 Aww thats too bad! Maybe u should hope harder next time 🤣

Aww... Thank u for your luck. I hope your words come true and I get an A+ which btw seems impossible at the moment 😆

Ohhh!! I never thought about that! Maybe Karan is a secret admirer of my work and one day he'll appear in my room to inform me about the same 🤣 No offense intended! I just found your comment really very cute 😆

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: fee-fee
Good luck on your exams! May you pass with flying colors! The first thing u may want to go when exams are over is the update...please!!!! Otherwise I might die! Lol. Good luck again and thanks for the story so far.

Hahahaha!! Yes, I'll be dying to write the next update as well! Once you start writing an FF, Its all you can think about 😆 Aww thanks for the luck!! Pray for me that I grow some brains and actually start studying 😉

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: HK90
res going to be here soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're here already?? 😃

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

I wanted One Direction to be in my room yesterday. but they didn't come. Let me just 🤣 🤣🤣 Aww thats too bad! Maybe u should hope harder next time 🤣

Aww... Thank u for your luck. I hope your words come true and I get an A+ which btw seems impossible at the moment 😆

Ohhh!! I never thought about that! Maybe Karan is a secret admirer of my work and one day he'll appear in my room to inform me about the same 🤣 No offense intended! I just found your comment really very cute 😆