FF Virika: Forever and Ever= surprise pg. 92 - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooo I was really missing my first story ever, so I decided to write one part for it. Hope you guys like it (will be waiting to read your comments 😉)

SURPRISE SURPRISE

Gia was going to be turning two soon and Jeevika was in her last month of pregnancy. Gia had a hard time adjusting to life without her mom. She was used to her mom making her sleep every night and getting her up and ready in the mornings. Nowadays Jeevika was on complete bed rest and Viren being Viren would not let her get up at any cost. Only if she had to go to the bathroom would she be allowed to move from her bed. Gia was used to her dad now putting her to bed and her masi or dadi helped her in the mornings. Manvi was also due any time now, but she had an easier pregnancy than Jeevika shockingly. It was around 7 on a Sunday morning when Jeevika woke up feeling uncomfortable. She tried balancing herself to sit up against the bed. She looked at Viren sleeping and woke him up.

j - "Virenji"

Viren turned around and saw her sitting up. He got up and sat next to Jeevika placing his hand softly on her face.

v - "Are you okay?"

j - "Yeah, can you please go check on Gia"

v - "Okay, you stay put. I'll go see her"

Viren got up from the bed still half asleep and opened the door of their bedroom to go out. He saw Virat coming to his room with a crying Gia in his arms.

viren - "What happened" he asked taking his little angel from Virat.

virat - "The windows to her room were open and the wind was full speed. A vase fell from the table and she panicked"

viren - "Oh no" he said rubbing Gia's back who comfortably rested her head on Viren's shoulder and rubbed her beautiful grey eyes.

virat - "Okay I better get back to Manvi before her morning tantrums begin"

Viren smiled at his brother and carried Gia inside towards Jeevika.

viren - "A vase fell down in her room because of the winds and my little princess got scared" he said taking her to the bed. He placed her in the center and Viren covered her up with a blanket. Gia stretched her little arm around trying to hug Jeevika who la back down cuddling with her daughter. Viren got up and looked at how his two girls would ruin his sleep and they were both sleeping peacefully like angels. He went to go shower up and by the time he came back he saw the duo waking up and yawning.

viren - "Are my sleeping beauties awake?" he said smiling

Both of them cutely looked at Viren especially Gia. Gia was extremely close to her parents. Everytime her parents would have to go out somewhere and leave her alone, she would cry continuously for hours leaving Virat and Manvi, who where often her babysitters, confused. She was really really shy as well, and wouldn't talk to anyone besides her mom and dad. She smiled and nodded at everyone else. Viren and Jeevika would have to force her to talk.

Gia got up and sat down next to Jeevika leaning her small little head towards Jeevika's body. She cutely placed her hand on her mothers. Viren sat down next to his wide on the other side of the bed giving her a light kiss on her forehead making her blush a little.

viren -"What do my two girlies want to eat for breakfast"

j - "Oh goshh" she said closing her eyes for a few seconds

viren - "What happened?"

Jeevika took Viren's hand and put it on her bulging belly. He was feeling their little creature inside kicking.

viren - "Someone's kicking very hard" he said lovingly looking into his wife's eyes.

j - "He's going to be so naughty, I can totally feel it Viren"

Gia saw her parents having a light moment and she just stared at them.

viren - "Gia you want to feel your brother kicking?"

Gia just smiled and nodded. Viren took her tiny little hand and gently placed it on Jeevika's stomach. She started giggling while looking at her mom as she could feel something inside.

gia - "Tickles" she said giggling.

Both Viren and Gia placed their heads near their soon to be family member trying to get as intimate to him or maybe ever her as possible. Jeevika just sat there embracing the beautiful moment while placing her hand on both of their heads. She was in bliss sitting right between the love of her life, and their symbol of love. And inside her was yet another meaning to her life.
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
Dhoxi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dumbo

thank you for writing this story again though its only one part 😊
Not only you, we were also missing it so badly ... 😃

So coming to the update ...

awww another baby you know what i hope for always is a twins 😆

Gia shy like her mother ❤️

New baby kicked ☺️ ..

I am so excited you know dumbo 😆

Overall it was superb ... I just loved it so much ❤️
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kays94

SPECIAL SURPRISE COMING RIGHT UP ...


wht wht wht..?
Temme temme teme...
plz plz plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG...
You made my day...
Like..
god...
i never thought of tht...
tht was so unexpected...
Love you Karina...
Superb...
Gia...
Jeevika...
Viren...
and soon to be family member...
woohoo...
Read it twice...
Loved it to the core...
Man... you gotto continue it... :P
Such a sweet surprise... :P :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow tht was amazing surprise

luvd it
wow it was perfect part
gr8t u should cont this yr
it's amazing
wow gia is too cute just like her mum😊
thnxs for the surprise
give us more surprise like this😉
Edited by koolgurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the surprise
a big thank u kays🤗
aww...gia is a sweetheart
the cute lil family
loved hw viren n gia feeling the baby's kick
just loved it <3
thank u😊

u should continue it :)
Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!😃😃 this is like sone pe suhaga !!!!!
i am in love with gia ang virika are soo cute !!!!!!
kudos to you to come up with such amazing ideas!👏👏
you shld definitely continue it !!!!!!!! such an amazing story and such a fabulous writer!
😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was SUPER AMAZING! Your flawless writing is an absolute pleasure to read... Hope you be able to continue soon :) Masooma.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wohooo
Dancy Dancy Dancy...
Surprise Surprise Suprise...
Happy Happy Happy...
:D
So damn adorable <3
Man like seriously!
I agree Ist story is always frst :)
Awww Gia is sooo cute :*
Viren being Viren is so damn caring ...
I love my family, they r one of a kind family! :)
Poor Virman as babysitters ;P
Lol loved the unborm kicking and the family feeling him and waiting for him to come awww
Seriously fantantastic :*
I truley loved the surprise :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a great surprise

The update was amazing

Gia who's just like her mom shy and sweet love it

The soon to be family member kicking aaw gia was feeling it aswell it was so cute the way she said tickles

Thanks for the pm I would say you should so continue this story

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