virman ss bad boy CHAP 19 pg 93 (9 may)

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Naina please update this one if possible 😃 🤗

yaar i am trying my level best to update my ffs... but nowadays i have less tym to sit n type stories...

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: naina927

yaar i am trying my level best to update my ffs... but nowadays i have less tym to sit n type stories...

No problem take your time.. and take care 😃

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
No problem take your time.. and take care 😃

thanks for being dere meera...

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kateyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

finally i readed it nd luved it nd i never thought virat was lying 2 manvi dats he luved her just 2 win a bet i hate it whn sum guy do dis type of things but he realise it . i always wanted shabbir play a role of virat's frnd in many stories nd finally u make dem frnds bcoz his personality suits 2 b virat frnd i like dem both 👍🏼

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

now y do I have this feeling that this shabbir person is gonna be turning into a big time Back stabber! Hmmm * fishy fishy*!!!!! anyways was a cool upd8 and the Vella song rocks!!!!!!!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: abbay
now y do I have this feeling that this shabbir person is gonna be turning into a big time Back stabber! Hmmm * fishy fishy*!!!!! anyways was a cool upd8 and the Vella song rocks!!!!!!!

no shabbir is not like that... he is not a bck stabber... so relax... 😊

anyways thanks...

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: kateyes
finally i readed it nd luved it nd i never thought virat was lying 2 manvi dats he luved her just 2 win a bet i hate it whn sum guy do dis type of things but he realise it . i always wanted shabbir play a role of virat's frnd in many stories nd finally u make dem frnds bcoz his personality suits 2 b virat frnd i like dem both 👍🏼

i too wanted shabbir to be virat's frnd... dono takkar ke hai na... thats why... 😊

anyways i m glad that u liked it...

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

PART 10

virat : uth saale...
shabbir : kya hai...??
virat : 10 baj rahe hai... college bhi toh jaana hai...
shabbir : chod na... mera toh sar dard se fata jaa raha jai...
virat : jaise mera mann toh jhumke nachne gaane ka ho raha hai... my head also aching...
shabbir : to chod na aaj college... kabhi manvi ko akela bhi chod dia kar...
virat : main manvi ke liye college jaa raha hu...???
shaabir : haan... bachpan ka dost hai tu mera... i know u well...
virat : okk... yes... hurry up... manvi must be waiting...
shaabir : le teri manna ka phone aa gya... (pointing towards virat's moble which started ringing...)
virat : hello...
manvi : kahan ho tum...?? kahin dikh nahi re...??
virat : woh... abhi ghar pe hoon... aata hoon thodi der mein...
manvi : are you okk...?? tumhari tabyat theek hai na...
virat : manna i am okk... bas raat ko neend nahi aayi...
manvi : tumne jaroor coffee pe hogi... kitni baar kaha hhai, raat ko coffee mat piya karo...
virat : haan coffee peli thi...
manvi : come soon... i am missing you...
virat : coming baby...
manvi : tum aur shabbir saath ho kya...???
virat : shabbir...?? nahi...?? kyun kaha hua...??
manvi : woh he is also not here thats why...
virat : ohh... i donno...
manvi : let it be... make it fast virat...
virat : just gimme 40 mins...
manvi : i can wait for u whole life... 40 mins kya hai...
virat : i love you...
manvi : love you too...

virat disconnected the call and saw shabbir looking at him and smirking...
virat : kya...???
shabbir : kitna jhooth bolta hai bechaari ladki se... (u lie so much to that innocent girl...)
virat : tere liye manvi bechaari hai...?? (u really belive she is innocent...??)
shaabir : hehe... bechara toh tu hai... uske pyaar ka maara... (hehe... innocent.. u are innocent who is trapped in her love...)
virat : chal tu uth main ready ho kar aata hoon... (i will get ready, u get up...)
shabbir : okk...

at college gate...
virat : get off the car...
shabbir : what...???
virat : i told manvi i am not with you... if in case she sees us together then i am gone...
shaabir : my buddy is scared of his girlfriend...
virat : i am not scared... i love her...
shabbir : yeah yeah...

after sometime...
virat : see i am here...
manvi : virat... wooww... that was quick... only 36 mins...
virat : were u counting the time...??
manvi : yes... i was dying to see you... you didnt call me yesterday also... soo...
virat : was a little busy... manna lets go to cafeteria... i need to eat something...
manvi : why didnt u have breakfast...?? dont tell me u were again late today...??
virat : yes late again... today by 2 hours...
manvi : when will you become responsible...
virat : i dont need to be responsible... u are dere with me so u will be responsible for everything...
manvi : very smart...
virat : very true...
manvi : u should have slept today... u are looking exhausted... i insisted you to come...
virat : i wanted to see you thats why i came... n i can sleep after i go home...
manvi : but i am feeling bad...
virat : there is no need of you to feel bad... by the way did something big happen yesterday at your place...???
manvi : yes... dad told me that i should again think about u n me... i should give a second thought to our relationship...
virat : and what did u say...??? u didnt agree with him, did u...??
manvi : no... i straightaway refused saying that i trust you no matter what...
virat : thank you...
manvi : aww... dont be so nice... this doesnt suit you... hehe... just joking...
virat looked at her with a smile on his lips...
manvi : i love you n i trust you...
virat : i love u too...

virat (thinking to himself) : ye buddha na meri manna ko bhadkane ka mauka nahi chodhta... aur agar woh sach kabhi manvi ko ya iske buddhe baap ko pta lag gaya toh tu toh gaya virat... ye madan chaudhary mauke pe chaka maar dega... i have to do something...

ps : just wrote in 10 mins... why...?? bcos i was bored... english trnaslations yet to be added at some places... so please cooperate... will edit it tomorrow...

hell tired, so will send pms tmrw...

love u all... 😊

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Crazyvirmanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

First one too comment :D love manvi's trust on virat but however she doesnt know the truth awww. What will virat do next? Hes so scared to loose her if she finds out the truth:S Awesome story so far and waiting for the next update :)