new story-Smiling Once Again.Part 1 pg 4 21/02

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI...
hello every one'this thought came in my mind today suddenly and I thought to pen it down'for My Bubbly last part is remaining and this story would be only of maximum 2 or 3 parts'

what happens to a girl whose all dreams are snatched away before even they start blooming???what will happen when the things that she loves the most will be left by her???what will happen when all the things she wanted to do for ever in her life when she will be deprived of all those thing??what will happen when she will be said to hate her favourite colour???all the small dreams of a 18 years of girl like a happy life or a life where she would be independent with all love would be crashed???what will happen when she would forget to smile???what will happen when a 19 year old girl with a huge responsibility would earn a living independently???
what are the circumstances that caused her to do like this???why is she living alone???what caused her to become a stone from her bubbly self???will there be anyone who would return the same bubbly girl back???will anyone from the world of the billion's accept her? understand her?
these questions would be answered soon'
this would be only for 2 or 3 parts'



IMPORTANT:
if there is some other story with the same storyline then please let me know'i have never come across any such concept'if it is already there then I will remove it'
hope to get ur response'if I get good response I will update soon'..as it really motivates me write more..and I will update my another story soon'



for pms pls buddy "AGpm"..


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lovesia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new story
start soon will be waiting
nd plz update my bubbly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrast on new story..looking fwd
thank u for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new story..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prolueo...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely stor n fr d ypm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interestg concept😊 loved d prologue

lookg forward for d updates
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Banner Credit to Sonia Maneet kaur(Jass.KN)...Thanks for the awesome banner...


thanks for all the likes and comments...hope this part to gets tha same response...

part 1:

Today was geet handa's marriage with her father's friend's son. soon the baarat was going to arrive. I will say u geet's life now. geet handa the only daughter of mohinder and rano handa. was pampered a lot and loved life very much.
Just turned 18 and as per mohinder's promise to his friend geet would marry his son as soon as she turn 18. geet knew this from her childhood and she prevented herself from any other person's influence...geet to started to like him and she started to wave dreams from childhood thinking about him…finally the day came for her marriage…
Hmmm what to say about her character??the bubliest girl one would ever come across..her senese of humour would bring smile to everyone's face…when she is present she couldn't see any one sad…and the things that she always had weakness for was bangles and red colour…after knowing about her husband she started respecting him…but when this respect turned to love she never knew…
she never knew much about him except his name and that their marriage was fixed and he was her dad's friend's son…when she came to know that he was in army her respect for him increased ten folds…
she started respecting him a lot..they had talked only twice…during that she came to know many thing about him and her feeling became strong….Ok now coming back to present….
the baarat had arrived…butterflies were flying in her stomach thinking about their life…she was called down for the pheras…after the phera's there was vidaai after which geet left for dev's home…there she was welcomed in a grand way…at night she was very nervous..dev came slowly into the room and asked her to change and sleep…first she felt bad but then she was glad that he understood that she was not ready…
the next day geet prepared sweet and all praised it…she then left for pagphere to her home and returned evening with dev..they became more comfortable with each other….
they had dinner at his home…there dev broke the news that he has to return to his duty from the next day…geet was very sad hearing this..the whole dinner she was grumpy…when dev came to the room he saw geet was crying…not knowing how to console her slowly he went and sat next to her..
sensing his presence near her she immediately hugged him…not know what else to do he also responded…then after that what happened was totally dreamy for geet and dev…they became one…the next morning geet's happiness was in sky and she happily sent off dev…
after some days geet came to know that she was pregnant…geet felt that she had got all her happiness…but they saw when happiness knocks your door it also brings sadness..and the same happened with geet…the day which she thought would be the best day of her life she would have never thought that it would turn so disastrous…
happily she returned home to inform them the good news unaware what this day has in store for her..she reached home to see sadness everywhere…something didn't go well with it…she went to dev's mother who was just like a mother to her…geet saw her crying fiercely….
her heart immediately sensed something bad..immediately her hand went to her stomach to assure her baby…she went near her and called her…after seeing geet she started crying more…
Geet: maa why are y crying??
no answer…
Geet: maa please tell na…u are scaring me,…
maa: geeettt..(hugged her tightly..)
Geet: yes maa..please tell me…
Maa: Geet please control yourself…
Geet: what is the matter Maa???u are really making me worried…please tell me..
Maa: just now I got a call from dev's companion.
Geet: soo..what happened??is everything alright there???did u talk to devji??did he say when he would come???
Maa: geet please control yourself…
Geet: but maa u didn't say anything…did u talk to dev..(her inner instincts said that something is terribly wrong…)
Maa: Geet dev will never talk to us now…he will never come back….
saying so she again started crying…at first she didn't believe…but seeing the home's condition she understood that her child will now never get a father to love…what she thought today and what happened….she wanted to cry..but tears were not coming out…all the while her hand was on her tummy…
geet was just staring into empty space…that one night was going in front of her and her hand was protecting her unborn child…none saw her condition till she fainted taking dev's name loudly…
the doctor was called..she said to make her cry else I would harm her and her child…hearing this dev's mom said that dev would come back into this world…after sometime geet gained consciousness and she was cared by all but none could make her cry…
they did the final rituals of dev…till now geet didn't even spill a drop of tear from her eyes…all her dreams were crashed….her bangles which she got with most love after knowing her pregnancy were removed…from her body all red signs were removed and she was made to wear the colour that she hated the most WHITE,….but this also didn't make her cry…
all tried their level best to make her cry….even the doctor said that if she didn't cry then unfortunately they would have to abort the baby…when this too didn't affect her dev's aunt who always wanted her daughter to be dev's wife poisoned dev's mom's mind against geet saying that geet would kill young dev…because of her only dev died…else dev had been in military for many years but till now he had never even got a single scratch but as soon as this girl came we lost our dev..she was successful in poisoning her mind..
she went to geet and told her that for her child and dev she must cry,….hearing the word child tears started to come out of her eyes….she broke out completely…she hugged dev's mom and cried…even her heart pained..but suddenly she remembered her sister's words…she immediately pushed geet away..geet who was drowsy slept there…
slowly days started passing and geet observed change in her mother's behaviour..but shrugged it off thinking it might be due to the loss of her son…geet became a stone after his death..she was living only for her child and her family…always her mother will be talking about the baby being a boy and she would be happy that dev will again come back to his mother…this think always pricked geet..she noticed that whenever she would be with geet she would always talk about the child..she never asked even once about geet..
some months passed(approx. 8 months..) geet was sitting in the hall and dev's mom was preparing dinner for the family…suddenly geet screamed in pain…immediately geet was rushed to the hospital by his mother…
she was taken to labour…after sometime the whole family came there and were waiting eagerly for the young dev to come into the world…after sometime they heard the sound of a baby crying…everybody's face lit with a smile…
the doctor came out and congractulated on a baby girl…immedaitely the smile disappeared and it was replaced by anger specially in his mom's face…
she went to her room and
Maa: geet I never thought that u would cheat us..i thought that u would give me my dev…but u..chi..a girl???in our family we never had a girl baby born…u have spoiled our family name…but I would have somehow accepted it but??i wanted my dev back to me..so only I always controlled my anger infront of u..i wanted u to be out of our lifes but because of my dev I kept u…but now u are of no use to my family…so u can get lost from here…
hearing this geet completely broke..the lady whom she thought as her mother had said all this to her…she thought to go away from their lifes forever…
that night she took her baby girl and left the place she had been born..the place where she had woven many dreams…where all her dreams had crashed..all her likes destroyed…the place which gave her the very precious gift in the form of her angel…
she left that place for never to return…leaving everything, every dream, every happiness, the bubbly geet…to start a new life…the new life which would bring happiness or ??? in her life…

PRECAP:LAST PART..

ok friends i need a help from u..next which update u want...i will update next week.. answer through this poll...


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for pms pls buddy "AGpm"..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
geet love dev's mother as her own but when geet give birth to girl they said so cheap thing about her
cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very sad for geet...how geet's MIL can behave like that yaar..she also a women..😡😡😡wonderful update..pls cont soon..

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