Arshi WS: Khushi epi pt2, intro new WS pg 11

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

LIKE BOTHTHE CONCEPTS BUT DONT WANT MAANAVSUR TO DIE

Quote

Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

its true joy reading ur works and being a part of roller coaster ride in ur stories...makes for delightful read👏

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: punam2712
LIKE BOTHTHE CONCEPTS BUT DONT WANT MAANAVSUR TO DIE

yaar what can I do... If he doest die then the story will not progress... This story will have punarjanam and all yaar... So dont worry abt maan and geet not getting together...

Quote

Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

gr8 epilogue jst d perfct end...
All a play in d end...
D choas just got settld in..
D way u brimg in a twist in a tale z main highlite of u're ffs di...u jst rock it...
Such a beautiful end...
Thanks 4 d pm

Quote

YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

that was ... MIND BLOWING 👏

1st of all i wanna say thanks for all the PMs you sent me over the past months, i hope you keep em coming cause even though this ff is finished😭 i still wanna read ur others

2nd read both teasers for ur new stories both sound interesting but i have to admit i am leaning more towards little mistress ( i ❤️ ALL ur Arshi stories)

n lastly

the epilogue

it was AMAZING

you managed to tie up all loose ends whilst leaving some mystery at th end for our own imaginations to fill in blanks( luved the fact he is gonna get some payback but in a not ina mean way)

i was telling my friend who also is a fan of yours that it would have been a brill script for a play or film

anyways keep writing n

look forward to reading more

Quote

Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

bth d ss seem diffrent nd graspy but i dnt knw wat to pick...arshi one my mistress...bein biasd but cant help it...
Though danav also enchanctin but i havent really undrsood d cncept..

Quote

adventure_roks

@adventure_roks

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

amazing...
enjoyed it a lot...
the twist in the end was just awesome...
will be waiting for more creations from u...

Quote

Priti

@Drishuluv

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

i had read this ws last week itself but was not able to comment through my mb, so thought of doing it now,i know i'm too late but still...sorry!!!!!( i knw its become compulsory word of my comments)

Amazing os,really luvd it.i specially love d way u show their sisterly bond.

somewhere middle of d story,i was really scared tht who will get hurt at end of d ff but u change d whole story by making musky realize tht she actually luv his childhood buddy not arnav...

superb ws, will wait to read some more amzing ws on arshi& thanx for d pm😊

Quote

S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

read all the remaining part in one go... awesome... truly fabulous...

could you plzzz give a sequel or something if you have time... would love to read more