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_G1234_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Stalking. :P

update soon. :)

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Tammie

@saomom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: _G1234_
Stalking. :P

update soon. :)

What she said...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#783

Waiting K ... Patiently ...

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 13 years ago

#784

I loved it krani

read the whole FF in one day

the way you are describing things is exceptionally aweesome

cant wait for you to come back

and update more

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farishta12

@farishta12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#785

wow what an awesome update 😉

Edited by farishta12 - 13 years ago

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#786

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#787

R. Yay!

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Krani, this one was flawless. Arnav's inner turmoil, his confusion, denial and finally acceptance, the transition and his chain of thoughts - seamless. The man is afraid of rejection, and hence is unfamiliar with the concept of requesting, or asking; the man only knows how to demand. For someone like Arnav, it takes a lot of strength to even admit to himself that he may want something so desperately, something he cannot be certain will end in his favour. This is one huge step for Arnav's character, just accepting that he wants her forgiveness. Your characterization of Arnav is fabulous, and this update is another feather on the cap.

That scene where he goes to her in order to lash out, but instead feels the attraction wash over him and then walks out - it was fantastic. No dialogues, no real action either, really. Yet, it spoke volumes. Very cinematic, I could picture it in my head quite vividly. Especially when the anger and lust is followed by a sense of calmness - Khushi is definitely his salvation. Lovely scene, that one :)

However cold or heartless he may have been in the past, he needs to earn her forgiveness alright, but the fact that he may want to do that in order to be the reason behind her smile, is heartwarming to say the least. How will he go about it? He is still looking at it from a business perspective, like studying his clients, but what else can you expect from him? He will learn, and hopefully soon. Next update soon Krani, please ?

Edited by vgedin - 13 years ago