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Chapter 144: Returning the Link of a Legacy

The Scene… Damn I can actually feel it…there was no khushi, it was me there… it's just that lady called her out.. I found myself in office, in front of lappy…
It's so flattering.. Right from she bent till she turned to his chest…. the best what I like is, everything is through mirror and not face to face.. I JUSTLOOOVEEE IT!

NOTE: to comment I need to read it thrice – four times – five times- or.. don't know.. lost the count actually… because I start reading being third person but I don't know WHEN I take place of khushi… just forget every other thing around me… so at the end I start again.. and finally succeed

Below you will find I have just highlighted few lines… what to do, I don't have words! They ran away…

"Lady Lavanya?" Kushi called out as she knocked on the door of the Library and peeped in, hoping to not find the one she was trying not to find, but the Library too was empty.

Tumhari issi ada pe fida hoon main, Linny Jaan!

Lord Arnav's bedchamber slightly open …. It was dark within the room it seemed but the shifting flicker of feeble light gave the impression that there was a candle lit within the room.

Is this description of his room or his heart..?

Silence persisted and Kushi was considering whether to enter or leave, when she noticed the candle on the bedside table.

I like her dilemma… 'Jaun k nai Jaun… jaun k nai jaun'

As she stepped into the room, a cool breeze blew in and she looked to her left to find the huge balcony of the room open, the breeze fluttering the pale curtains and reaching out to play around her gown and the strands of hair at the side of her face that had come loose from her bun with all the dancing she had done.

Its sooo beauuutiiifuuulll ……………..!
There is no open door in office, but I felt that cool breeze, it shivered me!!

She was so lost in his gaze that she didn't notice him move closer to where she stood until he was standing right behind her and she had felt the heat of his nearing presence on her back though they were still inches away from touching each other.

Thank you for mentioning last words… it was indeed needed, O.w my visualization.. ha u know how fast it is….!!

She had opened her mouth to retort to his action but that was when she saw what he held in his hand through the reflection of the mirror.

He lifted his hands and brought it before her face, the fire of the candle flashing on the tiny gold heart that hung from the thin golden necklace.

Linny, not only writer.. you can be a good director too…!!

He was watching her every expression and she could only stare back at him through the muddle of curious thoughts in her mind until she felt the cold metal touch her skin as he was gently brought the necklace around her neck.

She closed her eyes as she felt his warm fingers move at the back of her neck, sending wild shivers down her body, but his quick fingers had already fastened the clasp of the necklace and then she could not feel his fingers anymore.

Her lips parted in the attempt to ask him something but when she saw his gaze slide to catch that slight movement of her lips, words failed and she felt her heartbeat race from the way he was gazing hungrily at her lips.

Oh man.. you have perfect plan to KILL me… their eyes were conversing so much… n still going with the flow… as let happen whatever is written…. My my my…!
There is no dialogue, yet conversation.. there is minimal touch yet so much to feel…

Finding the courage to gaze at him only from the corner of her eyes, she looked over her shoulder and that undid his will.

Ooochhh..!!

But the very next moment, her breath hitched when she felt his fingers on her neck again, one curious finger lazily running along the necklace, sliding lightly on her tender skin.

Then before she knew what was happening, he leaned down and with his eyes still capturing hers in the mirror, he kissed the back of her neck on her necklace.

I literally had to take time to settle myself before reading further..

She gasped and closed her eyes, feeling fire on her neck that weakened her and then, before she had recovered from it, he had kissed her neck again, moving slowly with his short uncertain kisses along her shoulder.

Ooo MAN…!! Linny this is sheer surprise for me… YOU.. YOU wrote this… UFF… May I kiss you on forehead n cheeks… plz..
Second time break to settle down…

Her lips trembled and she felt her legs become unsteady but, all of a sudden, his arm was around her to keep her steady and she opened her eyes to find the hand of that arm gently pressing on her waist, as though it were cradling her womb….

All my senses are in off mode.. except one *naughty wink*
n ya 3rd break

His seductive kisses had not ended for now he was exploring her other shoulder.

The smell of his hair and of his mouth was all she could be aware of and she moaned uncontrollably with each kiss.

Linny, IS this YOU??… Really.. like REALLY!!…

He brought his hands to her shoulder and one hand travelled up to her chin, lifting her face to look up at him.

Fabulous scripting.. JUST FAB..!!

...the heat on his tongue was terrible. It was not human to have a tongue so scorching as the one that she had felt occasionally as he kissed her neck. She gasped and exhaled and tried to not panic and then slowly, she slipped into a longing to have more of the fire she was being numbed by.

Even in such hot sensual SEXY moment you are not leaving any chance of reminding for the mysterious curse…! Hats OFF!

One more second and he would have possessed her temptingly parted lips but just then a voice called out from somewhere near the stairs outside, "Kushi?"

As the scene was leading ahead, was praying don't show the kiss linny, don't show it plz…n THANK GOD..!! I so don't wanted 'THE' kiss right now…!

Oh yeah my senses are back too….

Lord Arnav slid into the darkness and Kushi hugged her arms around herself, afraid of the dark but more afraid of the perplexing things that know staggered her reasoning. What had happened to her? What had happened to him? What had they been doing..

Hum se pucho… hum batayien… !!
Blushing loud I am in office… and two of my colleagues already staring at me..!!

"What have you done?" he demanded in a low icy voice.

She has done…!! Big O on my face… 'ulta chor kotwal ko daten..'!!! YOU HAVE DONE my Lordy.. u cheat me..? But I am so happy u did that..!!

"You always seek to mess with my head!"

Caught you!! 'Ab aayi na asali baat zubaan pe'…

"How dare you weaken my-" he had begun but then her fingers had reached for her neck and his eyes were diverted to notice the movement. His gaze fell on her neck and his furious expression turned to one of bewilderment.

Yes yes yes.. weaken my WHAT?... u r there.. just there.. Say it damn it!

She looked at him, "What is-" And then she saw how he seemed to be startled too. Or was that worry on his face?

"WHAT" "WHAT IS-" "red marks" "Worry"…. Oh god what is happening… where the description of marks is, is there any mystery in shape of marks too… Oh god this is so anonymous…

She looked at him, feeling the remaining walls of her strength crumble, and her voice came in a shocked whisper, "You--you've done this before...you did it to me in the forest.....it was YOU!"

"phata poster nikla hero…" OMG this is so captivating… LOVELY that you connet it here..

Then without giving him a glance, even when he reached out to her a second time, she rushed out of the room and ran for the stairs, not seeing the woeful woman who stood with closed eyes, against the wall near the room Kushi had run out from.

Oh dear… LA you are hear too.. so it was you who called khushi at very moment… should I say u have called her out purposefully (to bring her back into her senses?) or out of disbelief….?

This was clean (read pure) BOLD and I am clean BOWLED….!!

BG of the episode... [i had two songs in my mind at the same time, one is bold and another is like 'prayer of love' like ibadat... but i choose the earlier one.. dont know how much appt it is.. you can decide yourself]

P.S.

(It is unwise to intrude into the slow narration of this scene, I admit, but it must be noted that at this precise point, ..., the moonlight fell on the lower part of her pale white face and she was smirking with a strange glint in her faraway gaze).

A big tight hug for this para… while reading after second time was not khushi and the third person and yes I smirk the exact way…. Bingo linny…!! U remember I have picked up LH as me, when asked pick a char from tale..!! I am feeling so happy that you put this para here..!

And here are the lyrics...

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye
Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

Ang lagaa le

(Tan ek, jaan ek
Apna ho jahaan ek
Aise lipte ruh se ruh
Ke ho jaye imaan ek)

Ohhoo…
Kesuoon si kaali ratiyaan
Adharon pe kaape batiyaan
Sanwli si saanse mori
Araj sunaaweee
Aake mori shwet preet pe
Rang sajaa de

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye
Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

Ang lagaa le

Enjoy
H
Soul
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow it was just wow...u cretaed an enironment i would die to see it on tv really hats off to u
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a nice update!! this story is taking as much time for the confession as IPKKND took! awaiting some nice twist and admittance of feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very well written for a first time if you had not mentioned would not realise emotion packed punch.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
awesome
was the other lady
lavanya
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
❤️ Beautiful hon!

a very much awaited update for us! and what more can we ask from you now! so amazingly written! It was one 'passionate' update! I sooo want to run towards you and hug you real tight! 🤗

Im not saying that this scene was'nt upto the mark in the serial last year.. but you, my Justice-Maker.. are marvellous!
There was song in a bollywood movie.. "MERE JAISA KOI KAHA 10 ON 10"

gooo.. sing that at your loudest pitch! 👍🏼

I loved the use of candles, wind, fog and darkness.. It just set the mood.. 😊

It was so mean of Arnav to blame Kushi.. so typical HIM!! 😛 but then when he noticed the marks.. I liked him at that very moment! lol! I can never hate him! 😃

I dont know! but Im not able to say anything about Kushi right now! though she'll be upset about the meeting but Im so happy to understand her presently! 😳 😆
You say this was your 1st attempt and you're already scored highest babe! do many more like them know! 😉 😉

PS- It feels so good to read chapters without your favrt. character! 😉 haha! 😆


Edited by ShrutiPandey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear!!!!
that was definitely hot, sensual n beautiful...
i hv read it twice n now m craving 4 more...
lovd it to the core n thnxxx 4 da pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rabba ve dear Aquiline... I thought of writing my comment though im feeling dizzy with high temperature. But when I came here, soul's mesmerising song caught my attention and compelled me to read her comment before I write one. And, I got immersed deeply in the beauty and depth of her comment... im still relishing on it and is unable to come out of it. Her comment is just "PERFECT"... Her words conveyed everything that is needed to be said... Im feeling so content now and I don't feel like adding anything through my comment... Do forgive me. Im feeling totally dreamy after hearing the song...
Hats off to you for re-creating magic through this "mesmerising" chapter and a big tight hug to Soul for her beautiful, soulful comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: A_Soul

Chapter 144: Returning the Link of a Legacy

The Scene' Damn I can actually feel it'there was no khushi, it was me there' it's just that lady called her out.. I found myself in office, in front of lappy'
It's so flattering.. Right from she bent till she turned to his chest'. the best what I like is, everything is through mirror and not face to face.. I JUSTLOOOVEEE IT!

NOTE: to comment I need to read it thrice ' four times ' five times- or.. don't know.. lost the count actually' because I start reading being third person but I don't know WHEN I take place of khushi' just forget every other thing around me' so at the end I start again.. and finally succeed

Below you will find I have just highlighted few lines' what to do, I don't have words! They ran away'

"Lady Lavanya?" Kushi called out as she knocked on the door of the Library and peeped in, hoping to not find the one she was trying not to find, but the Library too was empty.

Tumhari issi ada pe fida hoon main, Linny Jaan!

Lord Arnav's bedchamber slightly open '. It was dark within the room it seemed but the shifting flicker of feeble light gave the impression that there was a candle lit within the room.

Is this description of his room or his heart..?

Silence persisted and Kushi was considering whether to enter or leave, when she noticed the candle on the bedside table.

I like her dilemma' 'Jaun k nai Jaun' jaun k nai jaun'

As she stepped into the room, a cool breeze blew in and she looked to her left to find the huge balcony of the room open, the breeze fluttering the pale curtains and reaching out to play around her gown and the strands of hair at the side of her face that had come loose from her bun with all the dancing she had done.

Its sooo beauuutiiifuuulll '''''..!
There is no open door in office, but I felt that cool breeze, it shivered me!!

She was so lost in his gaze that she didn't notice him move closer to where she stood until he was standing right behind her and she had felt the heat of his nearing presence on her back though they were still inches away from touching each other.

Thank you for mentioning last words' it was indeed needed, O.w my visualization.. ha u know how fast it is'.!!

She had opened her mouth to retort to his action but that was when she saw what he held in his hand through the reflection of the mirror.

He lifted his hands and brought it before her face, the fire of the candle flashing on the tiny gold heart that hung from the thin golden necklace.

Linny, not only writer.. you can be a good director too'!!

He was watching her every expression and she could only stare back at him through the muddle of curious thoughts in her mind until she felt the cold metal touch her skin as he was gently brought the necklace around her neck.

She closed her eyes as she felt his warm fingers move at the back of her neck, sending wild shivers down her body, but his quick fingers had already fastened the clasp of the necklace and then she could not feel his fingers anymore.

Her lips parted in the attempt to ask him something but when she saw his gaze slide to catch that slight movement of her lips, words failed and she felt her heartbeat race from the way he was gazing hungrily at her lips.

Oh man.. you have perfect plan to KILL me' their eyes were conversing so much' n still going with the flow' as let happen whatever is written'. My my my'!
There is no dialogue, yet conversation.. there is minimal touch yet so much to feel'

Finding the courage to gaze at him only from the corner of her eyes, she looked over her shoulder and that undid his will.

Ooochhh..!!

But the very next moment, her breath hitched when she felt his fingers on her neck again, one curious finger lazily running along the necklace, sliding lightly on her tender skin.

Then before she knew what was happening, he leaned down and with his eyes still capturing hers in the mirror, he kissed the back of her neck on her necklace.

I literally had to take time to settle myself before reading further..

She gasped and closed her eyes, feeling fire on her neck that weakened her and then, before she had recovered from it, he had kissed her neck again, moving slowly with his short uncertain kisses along her shoulder.

Ooo MAN'!! Linny this is sheer surprise for me' YOU.. YOU wrote this' UFF' May I kiss you on forehead n cheeks' plz..
Second time break to settle down'

Her lips trembled and she felt her legs become unsteady but, all of a sudden, his arm was around her to keep her steady and she opened her eyes to find the hand of that arm gently pressing on her waist, as though it were cradling her womb'.

All my senses are in off mode.. except one *naughty wink*
n ya 3rd break

His seductive kisses had not ended for now he was exploring her other shoulder.

The smell of his hair and of his mouth was all she could be aware of and she moaned uncontrollably with each kiss.

Linny, IS this YOU??' Really.. like REALLY!!'

He brought his hands to her shoulder and one hand travelled up to her chin, lifting her face to look up at him.

Fabulous scripting.. JUST FAB..!!

...the heat on his tongue was terrible. It was not human to have a tongue so scorching as the one that she had felt occasionally as he kissed her neck. She gasped and exhaled and tried to not panic and then slowly, she slipped into a longing to have more of the fire she was being numbed by.

Even in such hot sensual SEXY moment you are not leaving any chance of reminding for the mysterious curse'! Hats OFF!

One more second and he would have possessed her temptingly parted lips but just then a voice called out from somewhere near the stairs outside, "Kushi?"

As the scene was leading ahead, was praying don't show the kiss linny, don't show it plz'n THANK GOD..!! I so don't wanted 'THE' kiss right now'!

Oh yeah my senses are back too'.

Lord Arnav slid into the darkness and Kushi hugged her arms around herself, afraid of the dark but more afraid of the perplexing things that know staggered her reasoning. What had happened to her? What had happened to him? What had they been doing'..

Hum se pucho' hum batayien' !!
Blushing loud I am in office' and two of my colleagues already staring at me..!!

"What have you done?" he demanded in a low icy voice.

She has done'!! Big O on my face' 'ulta chor kotwal ko daten..'!!! YOU HAVE DONE my Lordy.. u cheat me..? But I am so happy u did that..!!

"You always seek to mess with my head!"

Caught you!! 'Ab aayi na asali baat zubaan pe''

"How dare you weaken my-" he had begun but then her fingers had reached for her neck and his eyes were diverted to notice the movement. His gaze fell on her neck and his furious expression turned to one of bewilderment.

Yes yes yes.. weaken my WHAT?... u r there.. just there.. Say it damn it!

She looked at him, "What is-" And then she saw how he seemed to be startled too. Or was that worry on his face?

"WHAT" "WHAT IS-" "red marks" "Worry"'. Oh god what is happening' where the description of marks is, is there any mystery in shape of marks too' Oh god this is so anonymous'

She looked at him, feeling the remaining walls of her strength crumble, and her voice came in a shocked whisper, "You--you've done this before...you did it to me in the forest.....it was YOU!"

"phata poster nikla hero'" OMG this is so captivating' LOVELY that you connet it here..

Then without giving him a glance, even when he reached out to her a second time, she rushed out of the room and ran for the stairs, not seeing the woeful woman who stood with closed eyes, against the wall near the room Kushi had run out from.

Oh dear' LA you are hear too.. so it was you who called khushi at very moment' should I say u have called her out purposefully (to bring her back into her senses?) or out of disbelief'.?

This was clean (read pure) BOLD and I am clean BOWLED'.!!

BG of the episode... [i had two songs in my mind at the same time, one is bold and another is like 'prayer of love' like ibadat... but i choose the earlier one.. dont know how much appt it is.. you can decide yourself]

P.S.

(It is unwise to intrude into the slow narration of this scene, I admit, but it must be noted that at this precise point, ..., the moonlight fell on the lower part of her pale white face and she was smirking with a strange glint in her faraway gaze).

A big tight hug for this para' while reading after second time was not khushi and the third person and yes I smirk the exact way'. Bingo linny'!! U remember I have picked up LH as me, when asked pick a char from tale..!! I am feeling so happy that you put this para here..!

And here are the lyrics...

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye
Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

Ang lagaa le

(Tan ek, jaan ek
Apna ho jahaan ek
Aise lipte ruh se ruh
Ke ho jaye imaan ek)

Ohhoo'
Kesuoon si kaali ratiyaan
Adharon pe kaape batiyaan
Sanwli si saanse mori
Araj sunaaweee
Aake mori shwet preet pe
Rang sajaa de

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye
Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

Ang lagaa le

Enjoy
H
Soul

Dear Soul... love you for coming up with such a delightful comment... 👏
The song selection is just perfect... and quite mesmerising...
Reading your insightful thoughts on this beautiful chapter with that song playing in the background... it made me lost in reverie...

P.S And, you told me that your comments are getting less charming nowadays???!!!!! 😲
Edited by hoopoe - 12 years ago
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