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Posted: 12 years ago
that was superb and i am rolf🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

🤣SHin Chan you brat.

Will come back to comment

Waiting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely one
shinchan is one brat!!!!


one req anu...keep this character for another week no..
me wanna write on shinchan too but my xams r going on
i will be free next week only
pls keep shinchan character for the nxt week too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

lovely one
shinchan is one brat!!!!


one req anu...keep this character for another week no..
me wanna write on shinchan too but my xams r going on
i will be free next week only
pls keep shinchan character for the nxt week too

msg her... she isn't coming to IF due to her exams...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome combination
my favourite cartoon sinchan
and of course my fav couple maaneet together was just superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣OMG woman. Post it fast. Jaldi karo. Gangster aunty is waiting eagerly.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dedicated to my lovely parjai ji {Nisha aka Susegad} and my darling sister Diva 7

"Sabse bade nachaniya"...


I know you are going to win next stage of this dance audition maan..Geet spoke holding her husband's arm quite possessively.Her statement brought a genuine smile on maan's lips as he looked in to his wife's eyes. Pure childish excitement in her hazels made him proud of his decision of giving a try to this dance competition organized by Star one.He had never denied his beloved wife's wish and he could not deny this one too,though participating in a dance competition was really awkward for him. Hence,he was here for the final round of audition of "Sabse bade nachaniya"..He definitely found the "title of show" ridiculous,however he liked the fact that participants from all age groups were allowed.He was quite surprised to know that his fellow participant for the final round was a five years old kid.The kid would show "his best dance move" and maan had to copy that move with much perfection..In the same way the kid had to copy maan's best dance move..
"Common maan..lets meet that kid..He must be really talented to reach the final round"..Geet suggested to her husband. Maan gladly accepted her suggestion as it was perfect way to kill the the boredom and time.Half an hour was still left for the final audition..They reached at one of the "practice room" where kid was supposed to present with his parents.
"Hello..!!!" Both Maan and geet greeted kid's parents with a smile."We are here to meet your son..."
"Hello Mr. and Mrs. Khurana.." "Nohara couple" greeted their guests very warmly.."Shinchan is in toilet for loo break..."Misty Nohara,shinchan's mother informed them.
Kid's name rang some bells in maan's mind as he furrowed his eyebrows.He was trying to remember where he had heard this name when the owner of the name himself appeared in the room..
"Hello beautiful..Kya tum mere tricycle par ek long drive pe chalogi???"
Both geet and maan turned around hearing those words.While geet gave a smile after hearing the cute proposal of the kid,Maan gritted his teeth.
"Geet ..he is same kid with "thick eyebrows" whom we have met in Shimla"..He whispered in geet's ears.
"I remember him maan.."Geet said with nonchalance as she moved forward to pull Shinchan's cheeks,leaving behind her husband who was reminiscing some "worst moments" of his life,during the Shimla trip...

"Easy maan..Easy!!!" Geet exclaimed panting with the speed maan was dragging her outside the hotel..
"Come fast geet..I would show you the "snowman" i have made.."Maan said almost running towards the place where he had made a cute snowman for his wife..After few moments,they reached at their destination however some one was already present there to accompany them..Maan saw a kid in red tshirt doing something with his snowman..
"Hey kid..what are you doing here???" Maan asked in confusion.
"I was improving this snowman..I have turned it to in a snow woman.."Kid replied as he turned around to face the couple. Maan was stunned and geet's cheeks turned visibly pink as they saw the "improvisation" kid had done. He had made two " snow globes" at the chest area of the snowman thus officially turning the snowman to "breasted snow woman"..
Kid's voice brought Maan out of the state of shock as he heard him talk to geet further.."Hello beautiful..Mera naam shinchan Nohara hai..Meri umar paanch saal hai..Mujhe shimla mirch khana bilkul bhi pasand nahi..Kya tumhe shimla mirch pasand hai???"
Geet smiled warmly at his cute antics.."Mujhe bhi shimla mirch khana bilkul pasand nahi..shinchan. aur mera naam Geet hai."
"Arey waah..fir toh hamari khoob jamegi..Kya tum mere sath "date" pe chalogi???" Shinchan said batting his eye lashes..
"Jee nahi..Geet tumhare sath date par nahi jayegi.."Maan said with anger pushing geet behind him..
"But why Muscle man??" Shinchan asked cocking his thick eyebrow.
"Because she is my wife.." Maan exclaimed putting pressure on word "wife".."and we don't need your improvisations...I have made a "Snowman"..I don't want it be a "snow woman".."
"You are quite immature in this "art" muscle man..You haven't even made the snowman properly.,its lacking an important thing."Shinchan spoke moving towards the snowman once again..
"What does it lack???" Maan asked following him.
Rather than answering him,Shinchan removed the "carrot" that maan has used to make snowman's nose.A gasp escaped geet's lips as Shinchan placed the Carrot at the center of the lower portion of snowman..
"Now he is looking like a "Snow man".."Shinchan said quite thoughtfully before leaving the place and Khurana couple with their mouths agape.

"Do you mix "Starch" in his bathing water geet??" Shinchan's voice brought Maan back to the present..
"No..Why are you asking this shinchan???"
Maan saw his wife speaking quite lovingly with the naughty kid.
"His dance moves are so "Stiff"..It seems like he bathe with "starch water" every morning.."Shinchan answered with a wink..
Geet did not like Shinchan's answer ofcourse.Before she could retort,she found maan holding her wrist..
"I would see you at the stage.."Maan exclaimed in a challenging tone as he steered his wife outside the room..
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Fifteen minutes ago-
In washroom...

"Please gangster aunty,,mujhe kidnap mat karo..."Shinchan pleaded in a scared voice.
"oh god..I am not here to kidnap you shinchan..." Lady exclaimed with irritation.
"Then why are you here gangster aunty???"
"Stop calling me gangster aunty..My name is Nisha..and I am here to make an "offer"..."
"What offer???" Shinchan asked her with much curiosity..
"You have to do your "Ole ole" dance for the final round..." Nisha said with a wicked smile.
"The one I do with my pants down ???"
"Yes that one shinchan..You have to keep your trunks down to your ankles and move your bummies with music.."
"and what would i get in return???" Shinchan asked with an evil smile.
"You would get twenty boxes of your favorite "Choco chips"..." Nisha said putting forward her offer.
"That won't be enough for me Nisha..Mujhe sath mein "1 crore" Rs. bhi chaiye..." Shinchan said rubbing his chin.
Nisha was well aware of his antics.She knew very well how to handle this naughty kid..
"Sorry shinchan..I don't have 1 crore Rs.. So..Our deal is cancelled now..."She spoke turning towards the washroom door..Shinchan smacked his head for his stupidity as he ran to stop Nisha..
"No no Nisha..I am happy with chocochips...I would do that step for you.." He said making a puppy face.
"Fine,here are the ten boxes.." Nisha exclaimed giving him a packet.."Baki ka kaam hone ke baad"...
"Done..!!!" Shinchan spoke taking the packet..
"Not done yet kid..Show me your dance move first.." Nisha ordered.
"No probs Nisha.." Shinchan spoke as he willingly brought his trunks down and showed her "his precious" dance move...


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Nisha waited with bated breath for the moment when shinchan would show his dance move.She was least interested in shinchan's dance.Actually she was waiting for the moment when Maan would mimic shinchan's dance move.He too had to show his precious assets to win the competition..
Her wait got over as Shinchan was asked to perform his dance move.Nisha's eager eyes were glued to the stage however all the "eagerness" went down the drain when shinchan did not perform the dance the way he was supposed to do..His pants were still on his waist covering his bummies securely..
That dance move was a "piece of cake" for maan to copy. He easily did the step and won the final round..
Nisha was very happy with maan's victory but her eyes were shedding the tears of disappointment. Shinchan had cheated her and she would never forgive him,.

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"How could you do this to me shinchan.." Nisha yelled at top of her lungs as she entered the practice room.
Her anger touched its peak as she saw shinchan busy enjoying his choco chips..
"You can't eat them.."She said with immense anger,snatching the choco chips box from him.
"I can eat them nisha because these are not your chocochips...Someone else has given me these..He made a "better offer" to me.."Shinchan informed her.
"What offer???" Nisha asked with confusion.
"He said,he would give me Thirty packets of chocochips along with a "Action Karmen toy set",if I would not put my pants down..."
"and you accepted his offer???"
"Ofcourse i did..He was offering ten more packets of chocochips after all..." Shinchan exclaimed in nonchalance moving forward towards the door to leave..
"Wait..Who made this offer to you???" Nisha asked..
"I don't know his name but he said he was some palin's Anna{Brother}..."Shinchan answered before he left the room..
Nisha's hand covered her lips in shock as she regretted the moment when she had shared her "master plan" with palindrome.She told everything to Nisha's husband who was smart enough to fail her plan...
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Some wonderful pics of shinchan for you..
picture credit-Lakshmi..Thank you so much dear for providing these pics...




shinchan in shimla




Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
There are not enough ROFL smileys and emoticons in the world right now to express the hilarity I am experiencing right now.
Palin you crazy, crazy girl. I love, love, love you 🤗🤗🤗
And I hate you and that Anna of yours😡
Right now your lunatic Anna is hee- hawing on the sofa like a looney toon and he said that he wants to thank you from the bottom of his heart, for letting him win the competiton. Supposedly, he feels like he won the competiton not Maan.😔
Whatever floats your boat, you crazy brother and sister.
Oh BTW, you Anna is definitely a starched dancer. Rather I 'd say he never dances to the music playing. When you watch him dancing, you feel like he has his own music playing inside his head. And he has a special dance called the "Towel Dance." Uncoordianted Hilarity.🤣
And sharing this is my little revenge on him right now.
Nachaniya- Really?🤣
Gabbar ka dialogue yaad aaya.
Ab dekho Chamiya agar apne aashique ki zindagi chahiye to zara kuch nach gana dikha dyo humko bhi.
Hmm, I could hold Geet at gunpoint and use this dialogue on Maan to get him to do whatt I want.
😈😈
I am crying over the wasted 20 choco chip boxes. Chasing after Shin Chan with my guns blazing to get them back. When I catch him, his "do chand" that he loves flashing are going to be red.
Sab kiye karaye pe paani pher diya, Mr. Bummies ne.
Ok new resolutions.😆
I shall never look at a innocent snow man the same way again.
I shall never look at carrots innocently again.
From now on I will always relate starch to your Ma(a)n, your anna and their superior dancing capabilites.
I adore you Pilli.
Thank you for that wonderful, hilairty inducing crazy story which you made me a part of.
❤️🤗
XOXO
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Bavagaru you rock!🤣
Oh my god, Palin you made my day. Aww so my naughty Di wanted to see Maan's bummies ehm? Sorry Di, Bavagaru is a step ahead of you. Oh now I am waiting for the moment when you let Bavagaru read this story. ROFL.
So Shinchan Saheb had made a snow woman eh? Aaj kal ke bache huh.😆
I so want to add two slaps on his oh so great bummies for his carrot fiasco. Idiot!
Starch bath!!🤣🤣🤣
This had me in splits!! AWESOME Palin.
By the way frankly speaking, through out reading the story I never thought this was a story being told. Rather, i felt it is a real scenario. That explains my confusion when I saw Palin's name being mentioned at the end...you know it was like reading Nisha Di's journal, where she must have written her failed plan. Lmao. Amazing Palin! You rock!
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...Sabse bade nachaniya🤣 🤣 🤣...
i thought jab title itna dhamakedaar hai toh content kaisa hoga ...😆
n omg 😲 "A" certified actions n talk of Shinchan Nohara.. kiieeelll meee🤣 🤣 🤣.
n dat shimla mirch reminds me of our frst talk on shinchu...where u said some dialogue of him...something lyk ...hey hey beautiful kya tumhe shimla mirch pasand hai n kya tum mere saath meri cycle par date par chalogi😆😆
tune toh laga dee nishu di ki.. no actually nisha aunty 🤣 🤣...nisha aunty bohot smart samjh rahi thi apne aap ko...ole ole ole, bum bum bole dole🤣
pallu aaj tune proof kar hi diya ki tu apne Anna ki behan hai ...parjai ki nanad nahi🤣
n bath wid starch water.🤣...it cud nt b better ...ye khayal aaya kaise tere khurafati dimag mein...meri khurafati tufan😆
now we all know d wild fantasies of my pyari di😆...i wish jiju yeh zarur pade😆
n thank you sooo much fr d dedication my sweetest sister🤗
...it was fantastic ...aah my tummy is hurting n my jaws r paining 😆
jst luvd it❤️😛...luv you sooo much re 🤗
oh i luv gangster aunty 🤣🤗

Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago

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