ArHi FF:5:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 35

wow...super romantic ...akash is a sweet heart ...bless him...loved the update...continue soon...

Love in the Air...I just loved both the parts...it was fantastic :)

Chapter 143: An Unrequited Proposal

Switch over from Angry birds (Lordy-Khushi) to Love birds (Aakash – Payal)…. Nice!
They are getting all their weightage.. one full update… Thumbs up linny!
I found it quite filmy.. I cannt connect myself in such situation – the rich n poor n all – So it your writing which I enjoyed the most…!!

"Do you really want to return?" asked Lord Akash, looking at her yearningly, his hand holding hers.

I really feel good by imagining aakash saying this… as he is reading all her actual wishes..!

She opened her eyes and stared at the night sky, that was devoid of stars, "It looks like a storm is coming, we must go in." And yet, somewhere she longed to remain here, alone with him.

Sometimes things are said just like that.. just a normal observation…
But, alas, we readers are now habituate to search all symbolism.. which make me think that, is now each char sensing something unusual is going to happen…?

"NO!" Payal yanked her hand out of his hold and hastily stepped back and frowned at his surprised face, one of his hands still held in midair from where her hand had been withdrawn.

I actually hear that big 'NO'!! and just turned my head to see expression of the other one out there… he was all shocked and heartbroken… all what n why's together on his face..

"My parents will understand why I decided to leave all fame and fortunes behind," said Lord Akash, "I have finally found what my life is worthy to find meaning in."

I just love when guys say something so…. So…. So.. hmm…. What we can say it ' a intense meaningful line'… whatever It is… I just love it…. Lin is this happen in reality too?? I will say yes.. I want to believe in that..!!

And he call her as 'My Love'… OOO how sweet!!

"Kushi has always been the uncertain, hasty one, and I the more controlled and convinced sister. And yet, here I stand in a moment of time when I am unsure as to the feelings of my heart."

Bec feeling of heart has nothing to related to what sort of person you are dear… heart has is own world and its own rule…

"It is love," he assured her warmly.

"Then I fear I am lost," her shoulders and legs felt weak all of a sudden.

Linny… this line.. uff it's echoing in my heart since when I read it… if it is love then I m lost… Wah wah wah!!!

A teardrop broke its fortitude and slid down her mask and down her pale cheek, "To have fallen in love with a man I can never dream of belonging to is not only a folly on my part but a possible scar on my father's name."

Your writing mashaallah..!!

"And I cannot let my love hurt my parents or yours in any way."… "Unless our parents whole-heartedly bless our desire to unite, I shall not answer to the proposal you made to me tonight."

Lord Akash's gaze was equally determined when he replied, "Then we shall wait no further and end this torment of your heart and mine this very night itself."

A lady who has sensed the non-acceptance somewhere and A firm Man who has all hope of acceptance somewhere… I like it!!

Now I am wondering that he will say it all loud in front of all or 1^st to his parents and then to her parents… I vote for the former one..!! ALL THE BEST SECOND LORD!! Go for it!

BG of the Episode.. [yes title changed 😉]

Dil Mera Pooch Raha Hai Tujhse
Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse Mujhse


Hasti Hai Aise Tu Hasti Hai
Jaise Baharon Mein Khilti Kali
Lagti Hai Tu Mujhko Lagti Hai
Thodi Thodi Manchali
Pehle Se Main Tujhpe Marta Tha
Kehne Se Darta Tha Yeh Daastan
Aankhon Mein Khwaabon Mein Neendon Mein
Tu Thi Basi O Jaanejaan

Dhadkan Pooch Rahi Hai Tujh Se
Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse Mujhse

Originally posted by: A_Soul

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Originally posted by: maverickmartin

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#336699">Errm.. What are you guys doing? *scratches head*</font>

don't scratch that pretty head of urs...read my edited comment...

My Lady Lin forgive me for my foolishness...

OMG!!! CANT BELIEVE THIS THAT I AM FIRST!!!

hi!!!

Apia?ok nw i'm gulping and shaking... So will be back after become normal. Ok nw i'm almost normal. Aqua honestly it was HAWT...too hot... But what with him and her neck not Lips..is this cz of the Beastly effect???i guess if that somebody didn't intrpt he may gone to his thirsty mode...cz he was slowly losing his control at that time... He put necklace himself on her neck...like mangalsutra...significance... He may nt aroused when he danced with him cz they were not alone...bt here in his own dark room alone with her only with candle light and with a slow breeze...he definitly feel more aroused... no wonder in it...what a romantic yet passionate moment... Was there something different in those mark?or its just Khushi is so naive thats why she is scared??? Godd please don't tell that the Lady is Lav...hw much a person get hurt????waiting for more