A TAAREY POEM -FOR ALL TR FANS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys first of all a very happy valentines day to u all there 😊
so friends i am here with a beautiful poem on taarey well this is my fourth one as u guys appreciated my last one so i am posting another... while writing this i imagined rey saying this poem to taani!😊

It's that look in your eye,
It's the smile on your face;
That makes time slip by
And I know I'm in a better place.

It's the memories of you
That make any grey sky turn blue,
And let me know these feelings I have
Are true.

Getting lost in my dreams
With the mere image of you.
It's hard to imagine it seems
A future lost, one without you.

So I leave my arms open,
And I'll wish and may pray,
Eyes focused and hopen
For your embrace just one more day


guys hows it pls comment

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Lachu. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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totally loved it...👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so beautiful. Really explains the incomplete feeling Rey has for Taani. So pure and true feelings. I especially loved the one more hug wali line. I loved it and I surely would love to read more of your poems. If possible, send me a buddy request.
P.S. Maybe palki maam should read it and get idea how the love is to be portrayed. And how do you write poems?
...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey happy Valentine day to u too, your poem was amazing. I love it
adi.cutiepie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome dear! i loved it! being a poet i can say your writing skills are very good but take an advise please use words which sounds good at the place of simple words. just an advise but seriously it was very good!😊

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