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A WALK TO REMEMBER...

unforgettable moments...



They say's that love is pure, it's divine, a unique feeling. There are very less people in whole world who met with their soul mates on the day of love that god himself witness the togetherness of the angels of love.



Kyun hawa aaj yun gaa rahi hai

Aa haa ho ho aa haa ho ho hmm hmm

Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Kyun fiza, rang chhalka rahi hai
Mere dil bata aaj hona hai kya
Chaandni, din mein kyun, chhaa rahi hai
Zindagi, kis taraf jaa rahi hai
Mere dil bata kya hai ye silsila
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai

Ha ha ha ha aa aa, hmm.., aa ha ha ha

Jahaan tak bhi jaayein nigaahein, baraste hain jaise ujaale
Saji aaj kyun hain ye raahein, khile phool kyun hain niraale
Khushbuwein, kaisi ye beh rahi hain
Dhadkanein jaane kya keh rahi hai
Mere dil bata ye kahaani hai kya
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai

Aa... aa...

Ye kiska hai chehra jisse main, har ek phool mein dekhta hoon
Ye kiski hai awaaz jisko, na sun ke bhi main sun raha hoon
Kaisi ye aahatein aa rahi hain, kaise ye khwaab dikhla rahi hain
Mere dil bata kaun hai aa raha
Kyun hawa, aaj yun gaa rahi hai
Gaa rahi hai, gaa rahi hai

Aa aa aa aa aa... aa...


In the still silence of the dark night on valentines, he parked his bike outside the church with an screeching voice. He was just taking out the keys from the bike when his attention got diverted by an image which made him curiously look in the direction only to find a petite figure clad in white long gown with open hairs wearing an white fur over coat was running towards the church. Though he couldn't saw her face properly as she was a little far from him but her face was completely glowing in the dim moon light. He kept on stairing in the direction, for a moment he couldn't saw anything except her as if a fairy had came down on earth from heaven, the moment seems so magical but soon he came to his senses with a jolt realizing that she has been disappear.


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He slowly entered in the church and found the same girl struggling with the match box to lit up the candles, she was continuously rubbing the match stick on the match box but it was not litting up and she was throwing and taking out the match sticks one by one continuously trying the same process.


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She was busy with her tasks when a hand came infront of her taking the match box from her hands. Completely alarmed she looked up only to find a smiling boy. She was just blankly looking at him when he too sat down beside her and lit up the candle with same match box in one go. She saw him and her mouth got half hung open and eyes widen in disbelief, she too was trying the same from so long but she didn't succeed and he did it in just a second. She looked at him in disbelief and he was slowly chuckling on her expression and after a moment they both brust out into piles of giggles.


They both turn their head towards sir jeasus, closed their eyes and joined their palms in prayer. After a moment he opened his eyes and made a cross with his hands (like Christians do after their prayer) and turned to saw her. She was silently praying closing her eyes completely oblivious of her surrounding's, he smiled at her and moved out with silent steps without making any noise.


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She slightly opened her eyes, bowed down while making a cross and then turn to her side only to find herself sitting alone. When she didn't found him beside her, her eyes searched for him and she turned only to find him getting out from the church. She shyly lowered her eyes and again turned toward sir jeasus with a cute shy smile and winked at him.


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She was sitting at the bus stop which was just a little far from the church waiting for the bus, there was no one except her and the pure, clear voice of the cool breez. She was just roaming her eyes from one area to another hoping to see someone so that she can seek help for herself but there was not a single individual of human species unknown that an image was nearing towards her as a ray of hope in the complete darkness.


''hi'':-alarmed by the sudden voice she looked up dumbfounded to see him standing beside her with his dimply smile, she was too lost in herself that she didn't realized when did he came and stood beside her.


''hi'':-she smilingly replied after a moment realizing that he was the same boy whom she met in church some moments ago and he was still waiting for her response.


''here??????'':-he asked her keeping his hands in the pocket of his jeans and leaning on the iron pillar made to support the shelter of the bus stop.


''waiting for the bus'':-she casually replied giving him a light smile.


''BUS?????...are you new here???????'':-he asked getting a little surprised by her answer to which she slightly nodded in confusion seeing his surprised expression.


''oh that's why...'':-while looking at his watch he said:-''it's 10:20 and the last bus arrives at 10 that means you have missed it, it's of no use to wait, the last bus has been left'':-he informed her:-''what!!!!!!!!!!!!'':-she almost shouted in shock.


''yup and you will not get any help also because all shops and stores got close till 10, you have to walk till your destination'':-he informed her to which she panicked, how she will reach at home, she has too walk and that too alone. She saw the road, it was getting complete dark by every passing moment even the street lights were unable to beat that darkness.


He keenly observed her face and then followed her gaze and after giving a thought he offered:-''if you want I can accompany you till your destination, only if you didn't have any problem????????''.


She hesitated for a moment that how can she seek help from him, after all he was still a complete stranger for her but what she can do??????????...she doesn't have any option, neither she stay back nor she walk alone in the night. Thinking that she didn't have any other option, hesitatingly she nodded in yes.


On seeing her hesitated expression he knew that she was scared to come along with him as he was still a stranger, so thinking a bit, he tried to calm her:-''see as I am helping you don't take it in a wrong way, don't try to take advantage of mine finding me alone, no touching, no flirting only pure walking'':-while saying so he moved ahead leaving behind a dumbfounded girl.


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They both were silently walking on the empty road without uttering a single word to each other but just in last 30 minutes they have unnecessarily smiled at each other for more than seven times.


''hey ice cream'':-he suddenly asked her halting in his track.


She got surprised at his sudden question and curiously asked:-''ice cream????'':-to which he simply pointed towards an ice cream parlour.


''you had said that almost all shops and stores got closed till 10o'clock???????'':-she asked seeing that the parlour was still open.


''ya that's right, only coffee shops and ice cream parlour have permission to open till 12 at night'':-he said and moved to the ice-cream parlour before she could ask anything or make any excuses.


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After 2 minutes he came back with two chocolate flavored cornetto and handed one to her:-''but ice cream at night, it's too cold'':-she said while taking it from him:-''the real fun of eating ice-cream you got only in cold, so forget about anything just enjoy it'':-he said while unwrapping his ice-cream.


She smilingly took it and started to unwrap it revealing its chocolaty cream:-''if you don't mind can I ask you one thing????????'':-she asked while enjoying her ice-cream.


''sure'':-he casually said concentrating on his flavor:-''you had came with your bike than why are you on foot'':-her question made him tilt his head towards her with questioning expression to which she just clarified:-''ah actually I had saw you outside the church when I came out''.


He lightly smiled at her making dimples on his cheeks before answering:-''I don't know, some moments ago it was absolutely fine but then when I came back it was not starting, I think it's engine got jammed because of cold''.


''oh'':-a word escaped from her mouth and after that again there was a long silence between them.


It's was very unusual for her but now she was not feeling scared enough though she was walking with an stranger but even then she was too comfortable to be with him, she was feeling a tint of protectiveness and safety. She lightly tilted her head to see his dimply face, there was something in him that she couldn't help herself from looking at him. After living so many years in abroad she has met a lot of boys with attractive personality, intelligence, beauty everything but she didn't came across with a personality like him. He was different, simple yet enacting, innocent yet a dude, not a single sign of arrogance yet with an unknown attitude:-''is he is a demigod????????'':-she asked to herself and lowered her eyes shyly smiling at her thought.


Realizing that may be she was smiling he turned to face her. It's not like that he was seeing a beautiful girl for the first time in his life, he had met a lot of beautiful girls in his life before even more than her but there was something in her that he couldn't resist himself from gazing at her. Her hair lock were silently playing with her cheeks and temple, the cool breez was making her nose tip and cheeks pinkish red, ''is she is a human or a fairy'':-he thought gazing at her.


May be it was the day which was making them feel something different or the environment but something was there because of which they were feeling something new, something which they never felt before.


Tedi medi raahein yaara thame yun bahein yaara

Yun hi guzar jayengi

Choti choti baatein yaara, lambi kahaniyon main

yun hi badal jayengi

hum bhi wahi h, tum bhi wahi ho

kiu lage kuch naya

hmmm ho ho hooo

After sometime breaking the awkward silence between them he asked:-''what were you doing at the church, that too this late night???????''.


''ummm nothing, actually one of my friend was getting engaged today so I was just returning from her party when my car gave up, my driver told me that there is a bus stop, I should take it as he has to take it to the garage, he was unable to make it up'':-she paused to threw the wrapper of her ice cream as she had finished her ice cream:-''I was just searching for the stop when I came across to the church, so just thought to go but what were you doing there????????'':-she asked him instantly answering his question.


''there was a valentines party at one of friends house, my head was spinning around because of the loud music and noise so I just escaped from there to find a place where I could find some peace and which place must be better than the church for the peace of mind'':-he answered and both passed their cute smiles to each other:-''you know what...'':-he spoke up and they continued to chat with each other while walking without any hesitation or discomfort, it seems like that they are not stranger, they knew each other from long.


Jalte bujhate ye arma, karte hain humko hairaan

Yun hi sawar jayenge

Chalet rahen jo hum tum, payenge manzil ek din

Phir hum theher jayenge

hum bhi wahi h, tum bhi wahi ho

kiu lage kuch naya

hmmm ho ho hooo


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Finally they reached at their destination:-''my house'':-she said stopping in her track and turning to face him:-''can I ask you one thing, only if you will answer it truly????'':-she asked him to which he curiously nodded in confussion:-''were your bike was really jammed or...??????'':-she teasingly smiled while questioning him.


He embarrassingly smiled on her query, she has caught him:-''ya it was completely alright, I had seen you going by foot and it was not safe for you so just thought to accompany you'':-he answered while taking out his bike keys from his jacket and showing it to her:-''actually I wanted to...'':-he stopped and She shyly smiled lowering her eyes knowing that instead of having his bike with himself he came by foot just for her, it's really feel special.


''ok then bye'':-he said while turning around before her voice stuck to his ears:-


''can we meet again???????''.


sardi ki dhoop sa kabhi, rimjhim si boond sa kabhi

chupke se aye, dil chu ke jaye

kab kaun sa ye chehra dikha ke jaye

ye ishq haye, ye ishq haye

dhundho jahan ise hota nahi wahan

dastak ye de gaya lo socha nahi jahan

hairan zindagi hai, iski ada se

par zindagi hasi h, iski wajah se

kisko hasaye, kisko sataye

kab kaun sa na jaane rang de jaye

ye ishq haye, ye ishq haye

ye ishq haye, ye ishq haye


THE END**********



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Some says that it's fake, some says it's impossible but I say that it happens, love can happen at first sight though it takes some moments to realize but even then those feelings never evaporate but it remains in your heart and kept on blossoming until you realize it.


HAPPY VALENTINES DAY

HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT...

DO GIVE YOUR REVIEWS...

LUV...

RADHIKA...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kinna shona shona stories likhte ho aap di...
cho chco chweett...sare k sare...
raat ko icecream- sahi kaha, best times...and uss raat ko agr barish ho rhi ho tho pakka super duper hit ice cream time hota h...

and dat-meer javan gud khaake moment ws- when he left his alright bike just to have walk wid her...

ye tho sachi mei rab ne bana di jodi h- church mei mile h...
kya pure story h-

that no touching n no flirting line- supa hit line...
muje bhot psnd aaya.!!!...

sari shop 10 pm per bandd...jarur koi hill station h...

lovely dovely story di...

asie doses dete raha karo plz...sachi mei bhot sunder likhte ho aap...

''can we meet agn- di, iss stoya ka sequel likhho na plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww



awww



bohot thanda thanda lag raha



i mean vicks ki goli khane baad jaisa lagta waisa



ppl will think i have gone nuts



but my kya karu i just can't stop smiling . saare daat full display pe hai😃



mere saath aisa kab hoga . huh! kab RT mujhe aise milega.😆

ekdum feel good wala os tha , post valentine







banner cute

aap toh already awesome ho ab kya kahu aur ; hum toh ghayal ho gaye


Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was a chumeshwari ud
loved it a lot

their first meeting or wo bhi itni romantic

demigod...yes he is
n mugs to fairy h hi

church wala scene i truly loved it

another awesome story by u ridz

or wo bhi valentines day ko

thank u

match box wala scene bhot hi cute tha n then they smiled
un dono ko dekhkar mere face par smile aa gyi

and last tk me smile kar rhi thi

n another cute scene was that when he walked with her till her destination

juthaaa

bike kharab bhi nhi thi tbhi just 4 her sake
uske saath by walk gya

so sweet

n last me wo line

can we meet again

it just awesome

loved it

according to tittle this is the right end
bt i wish ki unki ek meeting or ho paati to kitna maza aata na
shayad ek dusre ko purpose hi kar dete wo dono

kya kare ridz hum readers ko jitna bhi mile kum hi lagta h

bt i really loved it
thank u

n do write more
pls

luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
worderful, lovly, superb di. Story is realy fantastic i must say di u rock. Thank u very much for giving this gift but sorry for late comment. Di i like the way u discribe hole story. He is realy sweet vo mugdha ke liye uske sath walk kar ke vo use drop karne gya or vo last seen mujhe bahut acha laga. Di main hamesha ek dream hi ki rajat mugdha ko propose kare na jane yeh kab sach hoga kab apki story ki tarha real memorable walk par jayege. Yeh sab to upar wale ke hath me hi. Or aise sweet sweet shorts dena to sirf or sirf kiske hath me hi? Are di apke hath me hi. Uhi aap hame storys bhejte rahiyega. Thank u di for pm also. And LOVE U SO MUCH. Muahhaa...
Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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thank you shaffy...😊
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Originally posted by: PariK

Simple yet so beautiful... 😊

U know Ridzz u actually named this story on one of my favorite book called "A Walk to Remember"

It's awesome book having beautiful story ⭐️

Ur story is just so nice, I loved it

Waiting for some more... 😊



thank u pari...glad u liked it...😊
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

kinna shona shona stories likhte ho aap di.....

cho chco chweett...sare k sare...
raat ko icecream- sahi kaha, best times...and uss raat ko agr barish ho rhi ho tho pakka super duper hit ice cream time hota h...

and dat-meer javan gud khaake moment ws- when he left his alright bike just to have walk wid her...

ye tho sachi mei rab ne bana di jodi h- church mei mile h...
kya pure story h-

that no touching n no flirting line- supa hit line...
muje bhot psnd aaya.!!!...

sari shop 10 pm per bandd...jarur koi hill station h...

lovely dovely story di...

asie doses dete raha karo plz...sachi mei bhot sunder likhte ho aap...

''can we meet agn- di, iss stoya ka sequel likhho na plz...


thank you rashimi...glad you liked it...and sequel???????/...well sure but after my exams...ok...
luv u...😊

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