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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

a total new concept Alka...i really liked it...pl continue...

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: turags
a total new concept Alka...i really liked it...pl continue...

thanks turgs.This is just my thoughts.But maine os complete kar diya hai

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Very well written Alkaji ...Bohoti badiya 😃

Please continue ...

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: alkaparmart
thanks turgs.This is just my thoughts.But maine os complete kar diya hai

no alka...i think you can take it a bit further...think about it...😳

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deepali.rock

@deepali.rock

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

A very novel concept alkaji...dis was exactly my state of mind after dat delhi incident.

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Thanks Alka you made my day sorry for the delay dear trip is enjoyable but legs feel so much paining 😔

really thanks for the update Alka as i was awaiting to see a OS from you 😛
this one really applicable with the present society 😳
I like the way you made the difference of age gap between ASHNI 👏
The incident you choose might be a good plot for the OS 👍🏼
awaiting to see the next chap as i feel it will be really interesting

Once a again a big big thanks for you for this lovely OS 🤗

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lee_Ashni

@lee_Ashni

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Good OS Alkaji. new topic for KTLK and a much needed one.

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wonderful! Grt suggestion by Ashu! 😳

parents esp fathers shud instil this courage and faith in thr daughters!

mothers teach daughters tolerance, patience, self-respect, and to live with dignitiy..

bt fathers can teach daughters how to recognize such evil and how to act strongly against thm!😳 a self-defence and self-preservation..

free and safe world for girls is a rite and one can only get it if one stands for it!

u r wat ur.. if God chose to make wat u r, thn whoever has rite to question his creations?😳

incidentally my SS had slight hint of this story ..😆.. now wondering wether i shud keep it and take it forward as i had done or change the whole story backdrop..🤔

Edited by achiever - 12 years ago

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Very nice OS Alka. The concept is very relevant to what is happening in our society today. Somewhere in this superfast computer, internet and information age people are forgetting their values and morals. Attacks on women in the name of power or even just for 'some fun' is becoming too common and too frequent to ignore anymore.

And time has come for women to learn to depend on their own strength and courage. The approach suggested by Ashu is probably what is needed for the woman of today so they can achieve true independence. Loved it, but it was very short, maybe you should add a little more. 👏

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karajekar

@karajekar

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

nice os alkaji

yu always come with some unique topic 😊

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