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writing os after so much time so if mistake please forgive me. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nidhi and Anji were sitting in Anji's parlour.Anji is running a beauty parlour.She is well known designer and handling her parlour too. Nidhi : kya Anji? ek toh dress designing se fursat nahi milti thi fir yeh parlour.Ab dr Rangnath ke liye kahaa waqt de payegi? Anji : kya karoo Nidhi? dono mere shauk hai toh handle kar leti hoo.Tu bata tera aur jijaji ka kya chal raha hai aajkal?baba theek ho gaye hai.Valentine day ke celebration ke bareme kuchh socha hai ya nahi. Nidhi: Anji,tu toh janati hai na dr Ashutosh ko.unhe is vday me koi interest nahi hai.Pichhle saal to kaise taise mana liya is saal ka pata nahi. Itne me ek ladki aayi. " may i come in Anji ji?" kya main andar aa sakti hoo? Us ladki ko dekhkar Anji aur Nidhi hairaan ho gaye.Itni khubsurat thi woh ladki.Aankhe badi badi,sundar si naak aur gora hanso jaisa rang.Bilkul apsara lag rahi thi woh ladki. Nidhi ne Anji ke kaan me fusfusaya ki ise beauty parlour ki kya jaroorat hai?kisi bhi heroin ko takkar de aisee khubsurat to hai yeh ladki.Anji ne kahaa,"shhh,is se hi puchh lete hai na?' Anji : Aaapka naam kya hai? Ladki : ji,Kavya. Anji : kitna khubsurat naam hai.Bataiye kya treatment lene aayi hai aap?Waise aap to itni khubsurat hai ki aapko beauty treatment ki koi jaroorat hi nahi hai. Kavya : ji main yahaa khubsurat dikhne nahi badsurat dikhne aayi hoo. Nidhi and Anji both shocked. Anji : what?kavya yeh beauty parlour hai.Ugly parlour nahi hai. Kavya : aapko pata hai Anji ji,mere jaise middle class ladki ke liye aur woh bhi naukari dhundnewali ladki ke liye yeh chehera kitna abhishap hai? naukari dhoondne jati hoo toh sabki najar mere degree pe kum chehere pe aur badan pe jyada jati hai.Delhi ke us hadse ne toh mere andar darr ka aisaa sailaab layi ki main aaj bhi kapti hoo.Aajkal muze mere is khubsurati pe naaj nahi dar lagta hai.Pata nahi kahaa se koi Acid ki bottle aaye aur mera chehera jala de.Kahaa se koi bladedhari aaye aur mera gala kaat de.Isiliye aapke pas main badsurati kee treatment ke liye aayi hoo.Please muse thoda badsurat banayiye taaki main bina dare ghar se bahar nikal sakoo. Nidhi aur Anji ne thodi der disscussion kiya aur fir Nidhi ke kehene par Anji ne kahaa," Main aapko treatment doongi.Lekin aap do din baad aayiye please. Updating second part.Please say did you like it or not?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nidhi bahoot hi tense lag rahi thi.Ashutosh ne dekha aur woh uske kareebn aaya.He put his hand on her shoulder."Hye doc! kya baat hai?why are you looing so tensed?" Nidhi told everything to Dr Ashutosh that she was too scared of this and shocked too. Ashutosh listened each and every word carefully and said her to calm down. Ashutosh: Nidhi,iska ilaaj yeh badsurati treatment nahi hai.Main ek rasta suzata hoo.Tum anji ko keh dena ki use kal bulaye aur mere bataye address pe chali jaye.I am sure uske liye kaafi sahi rahega. Nidhi : yeh aap kya keh rahe hai?muze bhi bataiye. Ashutosh : sweet heart ! kisi cheej ka solution bhagnese nahi hota.Problem ka datkar muqabala karoge toh problem ka solution nikalega.Main toh har ladki ko yehi kehena chahta hoo ki jaagne ki baari tumhari hai.Bahoot seh liye Tezaab ab tezaab fekneki baari tumhari hai.Bahoot saha waar.,ab waar karneki baari tumhari hai. Ashutosh ki baten sunkar nidhi me himmat aayi aur usne Anji ko phone kiya aur sab kuchh use samazaya. second day : agle din kavya aayi parlour me.Nidhi aur Anji use apne saath Ashu ne diye address pe le gaye. That was a school of Marshal Art.It was big institute which was running by Weight lifter Foolan. Nidhi: main dr Nidhi aap? Foolan : Mera naam foolan hai.Muze dr ashutosh ne phone karke kisi kavya ke bareme bataya tha. Kavya: ji main kavya hoo. Foolan : kavya,aajse main tumhari guru aur tum meri shishya ho.Duniya mahilao ke aasoo par nahi roti.Ab woh din gaye jab hum aasoo bahate the aur marde hanste the.Ab hume apne aapko chattan banana hai.Main sikhaoongi tume self defense karna.Apne aapko majboot banao taki koi hum par humare jajbaat par aur humare dil par haavi na ho sake.Haathome takaat lao ki woh is duniya ka muqabala kar sake.Jab har ek ladki Zaansi jaisee jabaaz banegi tabhi humare desh me women empowerment aayega.Apni aawaaz ke saath haath bhi buland karo.Ek naye jamaneki shuruat karo.Daro nahi darao.Apne aatmwishwas ko apni taaqat banao. Hope you like it.Please do comment.welcome for negetive comments too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Not bad alkaben.. Continue plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one please continue liked the concept and very realistic in today's real world.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice Alkaben... This is the need of the hour... Self Defence... U've done a good job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Too good Alkaben!! Loved it absolutely!!

You are right in everything. Many times I have read/heard that any beautiful woman when steps out of house for job hunting, mostly the "men" are interested more in her "qualifications" other than those mentioned in her resume... 😡 Could understand Kavya's helplessness & anguish. But, the idea that Ashuji suggested is the only solution to these problems for women and crimes against women. A woman needs be proficient in marshal arts to protect herself from lecherous wolves these days.

Glad that you remembered phoolan from KTLK... She is perfect for marshal art teacher here!! 👍🏼 And, agreed with each and every word of Ashu and phoolan... Really gone are the days when woman were subjected to ll sorts of harassment and they kept weeping in a corner... now it's the time to advance and teach a proper lesson to those who misbehave with woman. Thank you for this OS!! Your wonderful thoughts are bang on!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rrdsu

Not bad alkaben.. Continue plz

thanks heena,but this is os.i alreadily completed it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Good one please continue liked the concept and very realistic in today's real world.👏

thanks deepa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Very nice Alkaben... This is the need of the hour... Self Defence... U've done a good job...

thanks a lot Aazeen
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Wow... 👏 Too good Alkaben!! Loved it absolutely!!

You are right in everything. Many times I have read/heard that any beautiful woman when steps out of house for job hunting, mostly the "men" are interested more in her "qualifications" other than those mentioned in her resume... 😡 Could understand Kavya's helplessness & anguish. But, the idea that Ashuji suggested is the only solution to these problems for women and crimes against women. A woman needs be proficient in marshal arts to protect herself from lecherous wolves these days.

Glad that you remembered phoolan from KTLK... She is perfect for marshal art teacher here!! 👍🏼 And, agreed with each and every word of Ashu and phoolan... Really gone are the days when woman were subjected to ll sorts of harassment and they kept weeping in a corner... now it's the time to advance and teach a proper lesson to those who misbehave with woman. Thank you for this OS!! Your wonderful thoughts are bang on!! ❤️

thanks tupu for beautiful reply dear.

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