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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mai PM milne se pehle hie aa gayi cmnt karne😆 haven't got ur PM yet of the upd😛

Superb upds!!
The upd - 'Oh God!' is really interesting...waiting to noe wht'll happen next...nd whts tht colourful water/?🤓
nd the upd on the pre page ' have to go...' one is really nice...😳

upd soon!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kadamvari

i read it first when u updated .. god i am loving this short yet compact updates..
well i think the best concept till now and best presentation of your..i am visualizing everything in front of my eyes
i think this baby is very moody..i am imagining my proud princess here
two contrary scenes ..surely has some connection
ud soon


Well after receiving accolades from Queen of Chandrapir...I am now on cloud 7...I want to jump from the mountain top.
Thanks and finally my thoughts make you visualize...I am touched.
Well for Proud Princess you have to wait.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand1234


Mai PM milne se pehle hie aa gayi cmnt karne😆 haven't got ur PM yet of the upd😛

Superb upds!!
The upd - 'Oh God!' is really interesting...waiting to noe wht'll happen next...nd whts tht colourful water/?🤓
nd the upd on the pre page ' have to go...' one is really nice...😳

upd soon!😃


Ria tu comment kar rahi hai...tujhe iska matlab achcha laga??😃Finally meri Princess ko achchi lagi...Di see...kya yaar maine aisa kya likha pata nahin??
ANd colorful water means dekh ...this is valentine week...chado aur Prem ka Rang hai. And our Princess was painting then...and she washed off her paint brushes in that water which our Doctor sprinkled on her face...ab soch kya kya ho sakta hai...😉😆
Have to go and Have to do is ...significant ...you will find it in my next updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr


Ria tu comment kar rahi hai...tujhe iska matlab achcha laga??😃Finally meri Princess ko achchi lagi...Di see...kya yaar maine aisa kya likha pata nahin??
ANd colorful water means dekh ...this is valentine week...chado aur Prem ka Rang hai. And our Princess was painting then...and she washed off her paint brushes in that water which our Doctor sprinkled on her face...ab soch kya kya ho sakta hai...😉😆
Have to go and Have to do is ...significant ...you will find it in my next updates.


Achcha, abhi smjhi wht u meant by colorful water 😳😆🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rimi tujhe to pata hai na, i just love your writings, aur ab tu naya stories bhi add karne waali hai, to i am in cloud nine, just keep on posting beautiful stories, i am a great fan of Romantic stories, each story is so different from each other, just loved it. par ek request hai, jab teri tabiyat theek rahegi to pls Mitin wala story ko update karke post kar na re.😳. and thumbs up to your future projects. Main to abhi se teri fan hoon. you are very talented Rimi.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Doctor and Princess

"Who are you?" She asks angrily pointing the sediments of paints ( unfortunately there were some impression of blue and green on her face) "How dare you to sprinkle this dirty water on me?" She asks again seeing that he has handful of that colorful water and he is ready to sprinkle that on her face again while he grabs her left wrist in his left hand to feel her pulse.

" I am a Doctor. And I am pretty good in my profession . Your pulse is very weak which indicates that you are starving and dehydrating. It will lead a serious cardio problem in future. You should take care of yourself because you seem old enough to do so." He replies back her smilingly while he touches under her eyes and pulls them to see into the optical nerves.

Jaya chirps "Yes ji. Princess is little careless and she has come here today without have her meal. And her head is aching ."

"And she skipped her dinner in previous night" Vijaya adds.

She stares at them silently but her eyes has so much anger and fire that two middle age ladies cannot bear that staring. They feel little nervous in front of this young woman who is eventually their boss. They start coughing and mumbling……

"You have true Princess attitude and persona. The name of Princess is completely suitable for you. Anyways Princess weakness and disease don't see the class and status. They only see the person's immunity and stamina. And you seem very weak. Listen Princess I don't know what is the cause behind your self –torture and I don't want to know that. But I am a Cardio-Thorasic Surgeon. I have so many cases where people make their tissues and muscle weak and fragile due to their meaningless starvation and wrongful diet and physical training. And later they have various heart problems……and"

"Okay" He is stopped by Princess as she is damn irritated and enraged by his constant lecture on health.

"Listen You……Mr. Doctor Cardio Expert…May be you are great or you are God in your field but I am not your student or intern or patient either. So stop giving your lecture to me. I know myself well and I know what is right and good for……..uhhh….again….." She can't complete her sentence as her head starts aching again. She pushes hard her forehead to relieve herself but can't succeed . She falls on the sands bed again. He surprises little because this sudden attack of headache is little unexpected. But he controls himself and takes her in his arm and asks her companions to follow him.

Edited by DeewaniRimi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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as usual nok jhok...proud princess is full on..bechara bholenath😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kadamvari

as usual nok jhok...proud princess is full on..bechara bholenath😆


Babba update dite na ditei...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update.
Yar ye princes aur doc mujhe bade pyare lag rahe hai. Faling in love wid them already. Are cs to de
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kadamvari

as usual nok jhok...proud princess is full on..bechara bholenath😆

haha sahi kaha

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