❤️ TAAREY FF ❤️ Valentine special in GOA B-) 3 part updated pg 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys as i writing any story 4 1st time on my fav couple taarey as just a thought process was running in my mind so just wanted 2 make this as story as i m postin it 4m mob so pls maaf kar dena agar koi mistake hui tho n all r welcumed wit yr opinion but no BASHING plsB-) so mein apni ram katha yahi bhand karti hu n posting my 1st part...
Guys in this story nobody know taarey r couple. As whole team is in goa as all events had already completed of indiafest n everything dance preformance had done smoothly n nicely all r hapy n njoyed 2 much as rey is too trying 2 be normal but his heartbeat is only callin one name taani now next day their is valentine n pool party is organised 4 all the participate in the indiafest at hotel lumba n the resort is too connected 2 it... Now in this party only couple entry is allowed now couple wil be swaron, viha, rimar, nimmi , barshi n only al alone remain rey:-C all r worried how rey wil enter as you know taani is not there
Vicky:Guys hum sabka tho thik hai but rey ka kya hoga?
Aashi: Humein rey ke liye kuch jugaad types karna hoga...
Rinni: jugaad types matlab hum rey ko kaha chod ke jayege o god rey yahi rehe jayega :-C Simmi:dumbo !!! She means humein rey ke liye koi date dhundni hogi taki wo bhi party mein aa sake
Ri : o like that B-) Bharat : haan par bhai log hum ladki kaha se layege
Aashi : abhi tho bahut raat ho gayi hai but party tho raat ko haina tho kal subhe kuch plan sochte hai Simmi: ya guys she is right kal subhe milte sharp 8 pm at same place 4 mission rey date khojB-)
All: ya mission rey date khoj done (all wishes gn 2 eachother n went 2 their respected room) Now scene shift 2 one room where a boy is sittin near window n njoyin the view of most vibratin cool air breeze touchin his fellow cheeck n he is starin up above sky n tryin 2 make an image of the beautiful in his life it is none other then our rey who is lost in his deep thought of his lady luv Rey: i know taani tum jitana bhi chupane ki kohish karlo par tumhare har words mein kitana dard tha i know i had hurted u but belive me taani ye mein intentionaly nahi kiya i was froce 2 do that( then he remove his phone 4m pocket n n 4m gallery opt he just click on most angelic photo ) taani i realy miss u my cutie kash tum kal ke din mere saath hoti kal kitana scpl din tha mein kitana plan kiya tha hum dono akhele time spend karege whole day interwining each other finger n hav a most beautiful moment bcoz of our unity n it is our 1 st valentine too but lagta hai destiny doesn't want me n u be 2gether in this beautiful day ( a drop of tear rolled 4m his eyes but he know he hav 2 accept the reality)
now scene shifted 2 taayam home as taani was in her room as she was just sittin in her window n rememberin the moment how rey cum 4m window ?how he cum close 2 her as their heartbeat were entercorssin wit each other n how said that how he confessed his feelin n the 3 magical words which made her the world most lucky girl as her eyes become watery than she took sum steps n open her cupboard n their she sees her dreamland n his prince charming corner then she took a photo of her dream boy n says
Taani: pata nai rey ki mein apke dil mein hu ki nahi aur hu bhi tho mere liye use jada imp apki khushi hai agar app mujhe as gs ki nazar se dekhe ya as taani mere liye apki feelin kabhi bhi change nahi hogi haan mujhe taklif hui jab apne mujhe indiafest baat chupae but mujhe jada bura iss baat ka laga ki app mujhe par trust nahi karte kher aap khush hai tho mein bhi khush kal valentine day hai hum saath nahi hai magar aap mere pass hai mere dil mein0B-) then bg tune ...
Nahi samne ye alag baat hai , nahi samne ye alag baat hai , mere pass hai tuuu , mere pass hai ,mere pass hai...
as song completed suddenly doorbell ring n taani cum out 4m her trance n 4 sum moment she pause again bell rang n then see run n open the door n she was surpise 2 see the person!!!:O


thats it guys pls reply me whether i continue the story or not n pls give yr opinion too n in upcumin part their wil be more twist n trun n if u want 2 know this mysterious person so pls reply n sory if i had done any mistake aakhir insaan se hi galat hoti hai:-P!
PART 1- ABOVE
PART 2 - PG 1
PART 3 - PG 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... it was so sad... =(
but im guessing mystery man will take taani to goa...hai na?
i dnt knw, 6th sense ne kaha...
anyways, loved it... it was so emotional... and the song is perfect for that scene (awesome choice)

so basically i LOVED IT... so please jaldi se update karna and PM karna mat bhulna, akhir taarey se related hai =P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is the 2nd part as 2morow i m busy so 2day i m posting next part here it is so njoy

As the doorbell ring taani rush 2wards door n open the door suddenly she was surpise a person is standing in fornt of her wit a big, colourful n pretty flowers of bouquet 1st of all taani was confused :-/
Taani: aap kon ho n kisise milna hai aapko?
Person: mam this bouquet is 4 u (then he forwarded his another hand ) n mam this card is also 4 u kisne bheja hai app jaise scpl ladki ke liyeB-)
Taani was totaly confused then she take the card 4m the unknow person as person face was covered by bouquet thats y she can't she the person face :-/ then she open the card as she was doubtin kahi rey ka tho koi plan nahi hai then see read
Taani: this beautiful flower is 4 most beautiful person if she accept this flower then this wil be a g8t hnour 2 this poor fellow from dearest one...who has send this card n this pretty flower aur aap kon ho?
Then the person remove the bouquet 4m his face then taani screamed loudly
Taani: shivam tum yaha ? Tumne tho mujhe dara diya tha wht a pleasant surpise...but tum the kaha itane din ? Nahi kabhi mile no calls nothing n aaj sudden aise? Kya hua kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho?
Shivam: agar tum mujhe bolne ka mauka dogi tabhi bolugana aise rajdhani xpress ki tarah bhagogi tho kaise boluga:-P
Taani : ok ok f9 tum yaha kaise ?
Shivam : aaj kya yahi par pura din nikalna hai andar nahi bulaogiB-)
Taani: o i m realy sory wo mein abhi bhi shock mein hu pls andar aao na B-)
Then shivam sit at the drawin room sofa then suddenly he was lookin all around this house as he is searchin sumthing when taani notice this so she became confused then she ask
Taani: kya dhund rahe ho shivam?
Shi: wo aaj ghar bahut khali khali lag raha hai swayum nahi hai kya?
Ta: nahi bhai ghar par nahi hai infact pura gang mumbai mein nahi hai
Shi: kyun sab kaha chalege tumhe chodke tumhari bak bak sun kar bhag gaye kya ( then he laugh loudly)
by hearin this taani mood become low n then her eyes bcome watery but she does not want 2 show any1 thats y she make head 2wards down lookin at floor
Ta: haan aisa hi kuch samjho:'(
At first did not notice but then he realise sumthing is wrong then he ask
Shi: kya hua taani is everything f9?
Ta: tum wo sab chodo aur batao tum yaha achanak kaise n waise kaha the itane din?
Shi: wo actualy mein delhi mein tha last 2 months n ab mein mount collage mein pad raha hu B-)
Ta: wow shivam ye bahut achi baat hai ab tho tumhare bahut sare ache frnds bhi hogaye hoge
Shi: haan wo tho hai aur kuch scpl frnd bhi (makin a blushy face)
Ta: hmmm scpl frnd hohoho kn hai ye scpl frnd jara uska naam bhi batana ;-D
Shi : what taani tum bhi na ok f9 uska naam ela haiB-)
Ta: naam tho bada sweet hai dikne mein bhi cute hogi
Shi: haan cute tho wo hai ( shivam is blushy blushy then re remove 1 photo 4m his mob n show the pics 2 taani)
Ta:wow she is realy beautiful so baat kaha tak pouchi?
Shi: abhi tak mein kuch bola nahi hai as now we a r nly good frnd but i realy like her like wat i love her
Ta : so prob kya hai boldo apni dil ki baat
Shi: bolna tho chahata hu par darta hu kahi use bura lag tho jo hamari frndship hai wo bhi tut jayegi , thats y use bolnese phele mein uski feelin ke bare mein jana chata hu wo mere bhare mein kya sochti hai:-/
Ta:haan uske saath jada time spend karo phir tumhe pata chal jayega wat she think about u B-)
Shi: but kaise spend karu abhi tho wo goa mein hai wo indiafest mein gai hui hai use designin ka bahut shock hai so usne indiafest mein participate kiya hai ( make a sad face:-C)
Ta: don't wory sab thik ho jayega waise bhi hamare gang wale bhi goa gaye 4 indiafest participate karne
Shi: wat ? But coll mein tho dance allowed nahi hai na
Ta: Bahut lambhi story baad mein bataugi
suddenly shivam face light up sumthing click on his mind:-D
Shi: idea kyun na hum log bhi goa chale mein bhi ela ke saath time spend kar sakta hu n tum bhi gang ko join kar lena what say
Taani is in confused mode wat 2 say yes ya no?
So guys thats it wat u think taani wil go 2 goa or not kya shivam use mana payega ? Ye saare ques ke ans apko next part mein milega tab tak plr reply hows is it ?if it is borin so i wil stop writin pls replyB-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice strt
thnks 4 pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I found the link for ur ff, anyways first 2 parts are awesome, do not even think about stopping, can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good work suman.. Lovd it waise ela bff k ela hai na(charlie lol!! Anyways i imagined her )n its nice ki shivam is positive everything is set shivam n ela n taani n rey .. Now waiting for shivaani to reach goa and meet their partners, waiting for next part n u should definitely continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really like the story...do continue soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u guys 4 yr reply i m very much hapy n satisfied with yr comment n thank u very much 4 encouraging me so yr request i m movin head with my next part wit all respect ... So here is the next part B-)
Part-3
Shivam: so taani wht u say chalogi na mere liye plsB-) (making face like same kid)
Here taani is in confused mode as listenin shivam idea she was realy xcited as 2 meet her prince charmin 2 share the scpl moment wit him as it has been 2 days that neither she has looked his face nor did she listen his magical voice which make her the most beautiful n musical sound in her life she never imagine this kind of condition wil also occur in her life as she is just dying 2 meet him 2 feel him just his voice is ringin on her mind each moment of her life in this 2 days which is not only days 4 her but equal 2 century during this intense feelin again a thought process strike 2 her mind how can se go there as everybudy had ditch her even her bf has ditch her if she wil go there than there wil be no value infornt of herself as she know or think that there is no value or imp of her in any1 life not in frnds nor in her bro life n this incident pushin her 2 think that now in rey life she too don't hav any value so how can she go ? If she wil go so she may loose her self -respect. As such a long thought process was goin in her mind she was totaly confused whether she shuld justify her luv n frndship by scarifising her self-respect or she shld stay back n save her self - respect?

During the mean time shivam is w8tin 4 her ans but she is so much involved in her thought process she just 4get everything
Shi: taani itana kya soch rahi ho? ( stil no response by her side now he become irritated n shaken her by holdin shoulder n scream loudly) taani kuch bolo wat u hav decided tum mera saath dogina ? Tum meri help karogi na pls taani pls taani 4 sake of our frndship pls taani u know ye luv kaisa nasha hai ek bhaar lagti hai utar ne ka naam hi nahi leti tumse acha kon samjhega ( as shivam indirectly connectin his word 4 taani 2 rey as he know that she like rey ;-D ) pls taani :-C !!! (actingly make a sad face)

As first of all she was so confused n fightin wit her thoughts n upar se this shivam words were irritatin her so in irritation she say loudly
Ta: ok f9 i wil cum wit u (in lower voice) shirritatin kahika:-P
Shi:(then a big smile cum on his n he jumped upon sofa) Thank u taani u r the world best person i wish tumein bhi apna luv jaldi wapas mil jaye haan but mein tumhara last line sun liya tha:-P
Ta:(in her mind i wish so mujhe mera luv wapas mile) o sory shivam wo mein thodi confused this so irritation mein bola diya:-[ (feelin guilty)
Shi: aare taani i was just kiddin kya tumbhi serious ho gayi ko f9 kal tum ready rehena n kal subhe ke pheli flight mein hum goa ke liye nikalege so be ready ok (in his mind so here i cum ela 2 make mine 4ever) ok chalo mein chalta hu (then he leave)
Taani close the door n went 2wards her room taking her pillow near belly n thinkin mein jo kiya kya wo sahi kiya still she was doubtin on her decision n she was feelin sum unwanted problem or sum uncertain thing may goin 2 happen how this make her more cnfused n irritatin there4 she decided 2 go 4 a walk so can mend herself in a peace place n make herself n her mind relax n easy goin then she move outside

Now scene shift 2 a blank dark n very shoothing place where blinkin streetlight wit sum shinin particle type star is only a hope of light 2 give guidance 2 lost person 2 there actual way as a beautiful curved body free 4m all thoughts walkin all alone in the rough but plain street her long shiny hair is tremblin wit short vibrate of cool breeze as she was so much lost in the nature beauty just wishin her life 2 get that natural beauty n peace 4m here beloved n nearer people but as every1 is not fortunate by type of feelin as she has been alwazs aware about that type of feelin but every harass moment in life as learnt her to accept the reality and suddenly here unbearable emotin convert into tears n flown down 4m that angenlic eyes which makin a spark 2 get it n grap it watever u find it is 4 u...

Suddenly this moment changed into sum blurred image a sudden noise was increase n light flashin cntinously
Person: hey move aside can't u here it r u deaf ?move

This sudden change of situatin a peace already had broken as she turn around n wanted 2 see what is the actual noise was as she turn around an unknowin light flash in her rosy face which turn pale yellow in fear she put her hand on her face 2 avoid flashin light n do next moment

suddenly a thin shape body crash wit a hard metallic car n horror sheirk was made by the mouth which make the beautiful nature into horror place the girl body was lying on the road lifeless every where blood was smeared n the body was lying witout any soul in the alone road without any hope :-[

So that its guys further i wil continue in next part so pls reply if u want 2 know .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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of course do continue soon n thanks 4 pm😊

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