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promo is a shock... update chapter... continue soon...
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hehe jhatka laga?? shock laga laga...🤣

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SONG : Kahin toh hogi woh ...----- jaane tu ya jaane na😃

"sorry kria.. we cant be together"he said and pulled his hand and dissapeared into dark...

"REY!!!!"she sat quickly gasping his name... last day was a hell to her... this morning was different she never felt this way...empty

"mom kya banaya aapne breakfast keliye"kria asked cheerfully trying her level best to be herself...*sigh* she knew jo hona tha wo sab hogaya... and now bursting or being angry with her mother is of no use...now she needs someone's love... who can give it more than a mother...she grinned wide...

"wo beta doodh garam ho raha hai.."smriti said ...somewhere she got hurt...her daughter went too far from her!!!

"mom hum dehradun kab jaa rahe hai???"kriya asked hoping it will be soon

smriti: kriya mujhe permission nahi mila...ye year complete karni hi padegi waise bhi tab tak teri ye year bhi khatam hojayega

kriya: kya?????

smriti looked helplessly at kriya who in return just turned her face away and walked to her room...

smriti: kriya aaj clg nahi hai kya??

kriya: mom ...jaa rahi hun..

she said trying not to cry and rushed in...

how is she gonna face rey... what is she gonna say him... her friends ???

and the important thing how is she gonna avoid dance when she clearly knew that from the very day practise for finals will be started ... what will she say??? she has no more strength to lie to her mom coz for the one lie she lost her love !!!!! again any other valuable thing...she cant loose her life now

she heard her mom call and thus she quickly got ready and ran out snatching a sandwich coz she dnt wanna show her teary face to her mother...she is not that one girl who cries before anyone...she never wanna break down before anyone specially before those close to her heart...

she caught an auto and reached the college but froze in front of it... what is she gonna do now??? she thought to not attend the college today so she turned around and was abt to go somewhere but not home when she saw vishaka shouting and running towards her/...

"kriya!!!!!!!!!! thanks a lot man!! agar tum nahi hoti toh aaj ye khushi...woah i m too happy u know...waise kaha chaligayi thi kal achanak??"vishaka asked...

"wo...wo..."she was speaking when the students started wishing them and thus some lifted her and took her into the clg along with swayam and all who just entered...

she was continuously pleading to let her down but none heard her and finally she saw him in the atrium...he froze as he heard her name...closed his eyes tight controlled himself from breaking down and finally looked at her...kriya to maintain the lie gave a smirk to him and looked away...

affter a lot of tym finally weaklings were in the RH when all the 5 are thanking her and talking how happy they are and swayam qsnd...

"kriya iss baar finals mei aur hatke karenge watsay??? ye kaisa rahega... boys classical karenge girls hip hop waise kuch fusion and then full on dancing???"swayam asked very much excited...

"awesome idea dude"vicky said entering with all the other dazzlers ...they came to wish them ...as finally they are free...

" tumare jaise hi cheap"said a voice...it shook almost everyone...they never expected ..

"what??"all said and looked towards kriya ...

"haan tumhare jaise hi cheap...finals mei itni ghatiya idea..hey universe ji kaha fasa diya mujhe" kriya said rolling her eyes...rey frowned and looked at her confused but somewhere he already realised where and what is she gonna do...

"dude tum aise ajeeb kyun behave kar rahi ho?? kahi swayam ki taang toh nahi keech rahi??"vishaka giggled...

"oh toh ye madam ka prank tha??"swayam said and kept his hand around her neck but she pushed him away...rey glared at her coz he knew what is on way...he is hurt enough not swayam and ret too...

"stay away..."kriya said sternly...

"what happening kriya"neha asked coing front...

"woah...stop there... god knows mai itne din kaise jhela tum logon ko...waise mai tum logon ko ye batadun ki mai finals mei participate nahi kar rahi "kriya said breaking her own her into many pieces but not even a pinch seen on her face...

"kriya bohut mazak hogaya"swayam got serious this tym...(ps: sharon inke saath nahi hai)

"tumhare saath mazak...on please utna tym nahi hai mere paas"kriya rolled her eyes...

"kriya..."bharat was cut...

"i said ..."she was cut now...

"shut up kriya...bohut hogaya...now not a word more."rey seemed very serious...suddenly there was a change in the surroundings...tension filling to its peak...

"who the hell are u to say ...reyaansh"kriya spat venom...
swayam frowned ...this shouldnt be hapenning...this was the most cutest and lovely couple he had seen so he bugged in...

"guys shaant hojao ab kya hogaya?? kriya...kya hua any problem??"swayam asked kriya thinking she may have any problem in dancing for finals...

"U... u ppl...mujhe tum jaise chote dancers se nahi nachna hai...i realised my level and wo jaan ne ke baad bhi tum logon ke saath naachke cheap nahi ban na mujhe..."she said ...

"kriya tum ye/..."swyam asked stopping her by catching her wrist as she was walking out...

"how dare u... abhi mere haath chodo warna"rey pulled swayam's hand and said...

"u may leave"which shook swayam to core...

"rey kya hua??"swayam asked as soon as she left...

"swayam/... kal auditions rakhlenge and we will select a best dancer for your team okay...dnt worry "rey assured and walked away leaving many confused souls...

"rey wait..."swayam followed him but lost his way...but he was sure where rey would be so he directly dashed to fireexit and he opened he saw something which he never wanted to

"tumne hi bola ki u will choose swayam over me ...then use kyun hurt kar rahe ho??? mujhe hurt kiya wo kaafi nahi tha kya??"rey gritted pinning her hands to wall...

she pushed him and shouted...

"stay away reyaansh ...i feel disgusted when ur near... and jaha tak swayam ki baat i said i will choose him but i didnt say i have choosed him aap jaise loosers ko maine kahi nahi dekha...i wish mom mujhe jaldi kahi aur leke jaye...tum jaise logon se peecha chootega..."she shouted and left ...leaving a broken reyam...

swayam slowly walked in and placed a hand on rey's shoulder when he quickly wiped hi tears and turned around...

"swayam tu...tu yaha...ku.kuch kaam tha kya?"he said ..

"rey sach bata ...kya hua??"swayam asked giving a i heard everything look ...rey finall broke into his arms letting himself out leaving a frozen swayam...

days passed ... news spread like fire... kria was named as the arrogant girl and after lot f trails sharon agreed to be a part of the team...

a month completed ...it was most toughest tym of life for kriya ...to see them cry and sometyms shout on her but she being she kept a stern face as if she cared or even cared abt their existence...


smriti not able to see her daughters pain more said her to get back what she left ...her dance , dosti and even dil...she said all she wanted is her to be happy and dnt wanna loose her coz she lost her husband as he was hit by the opponents before the biggest competition of india but unfortunately instead of loosing his legs as per planned her husband died on the spot... so she never wanted to get any such situation for her daughter but kriya refused saying she cant go back to that phase and if by mistake she have to go through the same again she can't

that day kria was in canteen alone on a table directly opposite to the gang's although they were sad they sat quite as she no more treated them as her friend

rey was just lost in his world thinking how she changed him totally ...

"rey tume kounsi chahiye"nil asked rey...that very sentence reminded him of that day

"chocolate ya fir pineapple"he smiled slightly and replied chocolate ...

"tumhe toh chocolate pasand nahi ...sharon said slowly...still she blamed herself for it even after the dazzlers said her that she is not the one responsible...

rey came out of his trance and looked at kriya as tearms brimmed but the sight he saw boiled his blood...some students were teasing her and this made him boil... as they moved more closer to her he burst out venting his pain anger everything on them beating them almost to death...and no wonder he was on detention ones it reached the authorities...

kriya as usual ran to her home locked herself in her room and let herself out but never ever making a sound

here rey was continuously missing the focus...he was trying from last 30 mins but never did the ball hit the net...

"rey dude come to senses ...i mean tu use jaan se maarne wala tha"vicky said for dnt know how many times...

"rey ab chup kyun ho kuch toh bolo"sharon shouted irritated not able to take her bestie's silence...

"kya kahun sharon?? ki mai use kyun maar raha tha?? ri8??? toh sunlo... mai ab bhi kriya se utna hi pyaar karta hun...dnt know y wo kam kyun nahi ho raha"rey banged the ball on the floor hard...

"ex.excuse me"they heard someone and turned around

"aunty aap???"swayam asked as rey frowned...

"mu...mujhe tumse baat karni hai"smriti said looking directly at rey...rey looked at his friends as they left...

"boliye?? "rey asked...

"wo...actually mujhe kriya ki baare mei bat karni hai"smriti said

"sorry sunty... mai aap pe chillana nahi chahta...jitna hurt hua hun wo kaafi hai please...chale jayiye..."rey said looking away stopping his tears...

"sorry beta...*rey 's head shot up at her* wo actually ... *smrit explained him what happened and why* maine use bola bhi tha...tumhe sach bolne keliye par wo dar rahi hai isiliye mai khud aayi..."smrit said in tears...

"k...kya???"these were the only words rey could utter..

"haan beta...ye sach hai...frankly speaking mai tumhe abhi bhi poori tarah se accept nahi kar payi par i can't see my daughter like that...mai kitna bhi ignore karun its true that wo tumlogon ke saath infact tumhare saath bohut khush hai...i just wish ki u will bring my kria back to herself...meri beti kho si gayi... i can now just wish ki koi*looked at him* meri beti ko wapas dhoodh ke laaye"smriti said wiping her tears and turned around...this was all she could do... if she stays a sec more she will break down...as she turned around rey appeared in front of her...she frowned at him...slowly he grinned through tears fell on his knees and hugged her by waist tight...

"thank you so much"rey pulled back and trying to make his grin big...none could say how happy he was...thank you thank you thank you sooo much!!!!!!!!!"rey shouted and was jumping all around the court when the gang entered running to see what happened...they saw a smiling smriti leave the court hitting her head for his craziness..

"rey kya hua??"all asked totally feared...*ahin paagal toh nahi hogaya*


"wohooo!!!!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!"rey shouted and was continuously making baskets...

"thank u soo much universe ji!!!!!!!!!!"he said jumping and giving flying kisses to her universeji...

"aapke pyaar mei hum...aaahhh!!!!* rey danced motioning his hands and then at last bet on his heart and acted as if loosing his heart...a constant grin on his face...

"rey stop it"sharon shouted as swayam pulled rey to the ground ...rey sat pulling his legs together and went into his dreamland...kriya's land...

"awww!!!!!! kitti cute hai "rey said totally forgetting abt the rest...the way she blowed air out in process of relaxing him...he only knows how he controlled himself from kissing her badly...

"REYAANSH SINGHANIA... abhi tumne theek se kuch nahi bola toh...toh...* sharon looked around* isi ball se tere sar fatne tak maroongi and i m serious"sharon shouted with anger...

"milgayi!!!!! wo wapas milgayi mujhe sharon ...kriya wapas mil gayi"rey said hugging her to worst not even letting her to breath and the rest were just shocked and still holding their breath...

"rey ...chodo"sharon said finally not able to be in his arms anymore...

"kyun??""kaise??""kab"par.."there was a continuous qsns from everyone...

"guys guys... calm down i will tell everything from start"rey said calming them...

he explained every word smriti said him...

"she is that much pain aur mai... mai use dhaant raha tha"swayam said angry on himself...

"swayam... u were ri8 on ur place...situations aise the...now stop and forget abt it...bas mujhe ab kal ki intezaar hai..."rey said grinnig..

"yeah uske aate hi mai sorry bolunga"swayam said with guilt...

"no...i have something in store for her" rey gave his most cunning smile...

"rey!!!!!"all said knowing he would be the worst one when he plays a prank...

"mujhe nahi batayegi??? dekhta hun ab kaise chup rahegi"rey smirked...

"rey no!!!!!"even sharon joined the rest...kriya had faced enough not anymore...

but rey just got up and went away with a wink ...

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kriya again made herself to face the present day and entered the college... as she went into canteen and took her place she saw rey with a girl...she never saw her...

rey took her *the girl?* to the gang...

"rey ye ??"swayam asked confused as dazzlers got his plan...

"ye??? my sweatheart"rey said looking at the girl with all the love he has for her...

kriya maintained herself with much difficulty she prayed she is not his girlfriend...

"i love you"rey spoke to the girl never breaking the eyelock...

"love you too"the girl replied with her most sweetest smile...kriya gulped hard seeing it but next what happened broke her shell...he bent slightly and kissed her cheeks...

this was it...the pain and the newly born jealousy+anger came out in the most dangerous... way...she walked to him pulled him by collar and slapped him as hard as she can...

"u know what rey...*sob* i...i hate u to core...kabhi mere saamne mat aana"she pushed him back and ran away...

"dude..."swayam was cut/...rey stopped him by showing his hand...

"aap theek hona bhai??"the girl asked...

"i m fine sweety... mai abhi aaya"rey gave a side hug to her and ran to their place... FIRE-EXIT

as he opened he saw her crying to the worst...he slowly closed the door and sat beside her as she saw him she grabbed him by collar...

"kyun kiya aapne aisa?? how dare u?? aise kaise kar sakte ho aap?? uss ladki ko pyaar karte ho?? mujhse arte the na ek mahine pehle tak...haa??? waise mai * left his collar* aapse kyun bol rahi hun paagal toh mai hun ki ye socha ki jhoot bolo toh move karlenge...tab ye nahi pata tha ki aap itni jaldi move on karenge...aapkeliye mai itna ro rahi thi aur aap?? pata hai aapko mai kitni royi thi uss din aapki dil thodne ki wajah se...maa ne koi choise nahi choda isiliye mujhe meri friends aur aapme se unhe chun na pada...aur aap mujhe itni jaldi bhool gayi...aur mai har din aapki saamne ghoomti hun fir bhi...kaise kar sakte hoo aap??? i ...i hate u to core"she kept ranting the same line...

"pehle nahi bata sakti??"rey asked totally hurt...she looked at him confused...

"ohh u don't me in actual r8??? tumhe itna trust nahi ki mai hamesha tereliye rahung and will solve ur problems...ri8?? isiliye socha...isse toh kuch nahi hota... he is not trust worthy so i wont share my pains...yahi socha na tune??"rey asked as tears finally made its way...kriya nodded a no...

"aap mazak se hi sahi kisi aur ko i love you kaise bol sakte ho??"she asked him as she got the whole act...

"wo meri sister thi!"rey shouted and pulled her by shoulders to him

"kyun kriya...hum aise kyun hai??* cupped her face* hum ek doosre se itna pyaar karte hue bhi itna kam trust kyun kria?? ek doosre ki baaton ko aise kaise maanlete bina uski dil ko samjhe?? hum apne dil ki kyun nahi sunte kriya?? hamesha dimaag ki hi kyun?? tum mujhse problem share karne keliye trust nahi karpaayi... tum mujhse nafrat kar hi nahi sakti ye trust mujhme nahi tha...aur ab ye ki mai ki aur ko... hum donon aise kyun hai kria?? y dnt we simply blindly trust each other???"rey asked sobbing hard...

"kyun ki hum ek jaise nahi ek haina??"kria said as he looked into her eyes and soon burst out laughing remembering that day...

"ek jaise hai ...abhi tak ek nahi hai"rey said pulling her close to him by waist...suddenly that feeling they experienced a long back and dying to experience was back...she started breathing hard as he leaned in to mark her as his...but to his surprise she pressed her lips on his hard for once and ran out shouting...

"itna hi trust kar sakti hun isse jyaada nahi"and ran away giggling...but at the same tym breathing hard of their closeness...

rey came out of trance and ran behind her... now he cant be away...it would have been better is she would have plainly said NO for it but now...its impossible...it seemed as he cannot breathe if he dont...

he ran back of her till he finally trapped her near the RH mirror...

"uss din tum hi thi na??"rey asked moving closer as kriya tried mocing back more eyes never leaving each other...

but someone is also present there... the whole gang were sitting and waiting for them but they seemed ablivious abt the world...they looked shocked at them as rey moved closer...all wanna shout but no voice came out of shock...

"bolo"rey moved still close finally making their bodies in contact...

kriya nodded nervously...

"u really dnt trust me??"rey asked looking at her lips and bending for ward...

the gang's jaws dropped almost to ground

"wo...wo..."kriya stammered not able to speak coz of the proximity...

"bolo"he said huskily..."hmm"she said finally surrendering herself to him and closing her eyes...

the gang blinked hard of what is gonna take place but all seemed more than shocked to react...

few mins before they were fighting to worst and now...

"kriya...yaad hai uss din ...uss din lift mai mai tumhe kuch poochna chahta tha"rey said looking longingly at her...taking her picture in totally...

"hmm"kriya nodded still eyes closed/...

"mai ye poochna chahta tha ki...*took a deep breathe* will u be my date ...till my death??"he said looking at her nervously...she snap opened her eyes...did he propose indirectly?? but before her gonfusion of mind could get clear her heart agreed and thus a deep blush creeped on her cheeks showing her approval...

that's it...he just crushed his mouth over hers making her breath uneven and the gang...por them closed their eyes tight still shocked...

he went out all his pain and happiness through that kiss and kissing her passionately cupping her face as if never letting her go...

"bhai bas!!!!!" riya ...shouted still closing her eyes with hands...this made kriyaansh jump meters apart...

"tu...tum log??"rey asked shocked when rey kriya just ran away to LR blushing hard ...


okay now here comes the end!!!

[ps: sorry guys i wanted it to be a SS of min of 5-6 parts but bohut loaded ho raha hai mere liye so i ended with this part!!!]

hope u ppl atleast liked it...

like and comment

enjoy

love ya
-deetha😳


Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy... 1st one to comment...balle balle te shava shava😆
awesome awesome awesome part deetha...
d beginning was sad...i cried a little thinking about Kria😭...
but then i had a 32 inch smile throughout d update😃...
awww Rey was so happy after knowing d truth...he loves his Kria shooo much☺️
n den his prank,...naughty Rey😆...
F.E. scene ne toh maar dala, it was HAWA TIGHT(Terence wala😆) scene...
Kria pecked him on lips☺️ n ran away,...ab Rey kaise control kar sakta hai khud ko😳...
will u be my date till death...eeepppsss...killer confession...
Kria beta Rey ke saamne blush karna matlab kiss invite karna😆
Kriyaansh's kiss... m toh dead🤢
poor gang must be feeling so embarresed😆

oye inni jaldi end kar diya ek epilogue toh de do plssshhh
Edited by krasforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update di

Loved it

Finally kriyaansh together

For sure reyaansh singhina is mad

Poor gang

Finally smirit realized her mistake

Kriyaansh meters apart
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Amazing one dear..
Loved it..
Nahi laga ki you will end it so soon..
But seeing ur schedulre its alright..
You really did justice to the characters..
i knew ki tu Rey ko good books mai hi rakegii..
So yup this is awesome...
The final confession se bhi Rey getting mad coming to know the truth about Kria's behaviour was fablous..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wat a fab part di
Kriya was in so much pain
Shit !
Uparse seeing rey like dat was horrible
N d way u showed kriyam scene was just awww
It was so hurtful
But when rey ko sab pata chala
I was like yaaayyy !
Finally smriti madam kuch kaam aai
Hehehe
But jab rey uski behen ko laya I was like "beta tu pitega" !
N pit toh gaya woh for sure
Kya dhamaka tha
Lol
N d FE scene
Oye hoye
Kriya at her best
But the best part wer d questions dat rey asked
So simple yet so true
N den d wild kriya
Poor rey
Bechara pehle hi uske khayalon mein rehta hein n ab toh baat khatam
N d gang
Rofl
How embarrased dey might have felt
N kriyaansh kiss was like hayeee
*blush*


But khatam kar diya
**pout**
Galat baat
But I no u have SOOO many more pending works
But but but
Epilogue toh banta hein boss !
Edited by Born2Dance - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing..superb...
loved it to the core...
perfect ending...
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Deethu... OMG... tujhe isse update karna kha se yaad aa gaya..??? 😲

trust me.. when i saw the post.. i was like.. "OMG.. kya ye vahi hai jo mai soch rahi hu" ... 😲

and really... m happy ki u ended it jaldi se... like.. seriusly.. i mean it..

okay now coming to this part..

1stly... Smriti saying Kria dat dey r gonna stay here only.. i was like.. Shit.. ab ye kya karegi... 😲

then nxt day in clg.. she gave attitude to evry1.. even her team... wow... now that was somthing which i actually didnt expected...

aur that fire escape scene.. whr swayam heard evrything.. thn rey broke down...

all the above happening actually made a bit emotional... 😭

uske baad that basketball scene... dt too was wayy too emotional...

bt not for long...

when smriti came... told rey evrything... FINALLY... akal to aayi usse... huh...

and rey.. omg.. he was litrelly jumping dancing... poor swayam.. use aasmaan se neeche leke aana padha usse... 😆

aur phr once again.. The Reyaansh Singhania ka prank... woh bhi apni sis k saath... waah beta waah... 😆

poor Kria... 😆

uske baad that Fire Escape scene... whr Rey said all that ki "hum ek dusre se itna pyaar kyu karte hain... hum aise kyu hain...hum ek dusre pe blindly trust kyu ni kr skte..." ... i loved this part a lottt... this was my mosttt fav part in the story... 😳 👏

uske baad that kiss..

and then that RH wala scene... OMG... 😲 😳

i sooo pity the gang... they wud hav felt sooo embarrased... 🤣

n Riya ki vjah se they just ran away to Locker Room... 🤣


babe... Lovely story... seriusly... i just loved this story a lot...

ur best works till date... 😃 👏

Love you babe... 🤗






Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago

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