saanse kho diya tumhare khayalon mei.KRss

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so guys im here back with a new ss as u say it may contain mostly two to three parts

hope u ppl will like it'..

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The story starts from rey crying''.

Hope u ppl like it

"aapko kya laga aap mere peeche peeche ghoomenge toh mai aapki pyaar mei pagal hojaungi???

Just look at urself Mr.Reyaansh Singhania''aaj aap Kria Ghai ki haaton

Mei haar gaye'.*small laugh*

He was rooted to the place'..he never expected this'.his heart cried this

Is just a joke''..he already warned scolded, and begged her not

To joke'.but no she was stubborn'..a small part in his heart started believing

Kria plzz..dont do this to us tum aisa kar kyun rahi ho

Come out of ur dreamland Reyaansh'.mai aur aap hum kab bane ki aap "us"

Kehrahe ho'I cant believe aap itna bewakoof ho'.aap mere enemy ban ne keliye

bhi layak nahi''. Ab mujhe aapse koi kaam nahi'.

He felt as if someone was continuously beating with a big iron hammer on his head continuously

His head started getting heavy'..

no I cant take this pain more'kria'.*sniff*

maine socha tumhe prevalentines day pe surprise doonga'.but thanks'.sabse bada

surprise toh tumne dediya''ye batake ki mai tumhari zindagi mei kya mayine rakhta hun

thanks a lot'..ye baat mai'kabhi nahi bhoolunga

she felt her breathing get heavy..he was leaving..she saw many dreams of a beautiful life with him'

she was day by day maturing just for him..and now she should go away from him

at that point of life where all sides she can see a happy life with him and her friends dying of embrassment

and a path where she laid died and he was numb loosing his charm and her friends finally reaching heights

and fulfilling their dreams'.she stressed lot to picturise a beautiful life for him ahead with someone

who loves him more than her'..a tear rolled at the thought of someone in his life'

she never thought about this''.she saw his back'.he walked helplessly and she noticed a tear escaping his

eye'.she never saw him cry'..she breathed hard'.she fell on her knees as soon as he banged the door back

of him'she covered her mouth with hands and cried hard'.she ran to the window to see him may be for the last tym'..

there he banged the door close back of him'''..his head was paining badly''he words played in his ears all at a tym making it more difficult for him''he bit hs lower lip closing his eyes tight and closed his ears''..as tight as he closed his eyes the more he heard her''.he held his head hard and cried silently tears making their way continuously'''.he fell on knees ''.sniffed silently taking hard breaths lyk a kid'..

never ever in life he loved anyone to this extent'but the one and only loved person pushed him far from them'.he was silently crying when he heard the door open '..he wiped his tears and stoodup'still his head was spinning he made himself strong and looked up '..she walked in and as soon as he lifted his head she saw him'''his face was swelled up badly '.he was crying to the worst'..but ri8 now she was angry '

mere naa hote waqt wo bhi itni raat ko ye yaha mere ghar me kya kar raha hai???kahi kriya se milne'..

kriya ''.tumne fir se apna promise thoda???par ye ro kyun raha hai???

Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???? *fuming*

Silence'.he stood looking down.he had no energy to even nod..he was shaken to the root'..he stood there thinking how smoothly she broke his heart'..

Mai tumse kuch pooch rahi hun''

He once looked at her helplessly and a tear rolled down his cheek as soon as it made it was he rushed out'.he wanted to hug her and complaing that her daughter broke his heart which still was beating for her and beg her to give his life and love back'.but he cant'.he knew she hates him to core that she will never ever in dreams will think abt making kria his love'..

She stood confused +angry as he left but his look had really touched her heart..for once she felt like her baby was crying'.she followed him out '.she came out of the door and saw him sitiing in a corner of the stairs knees pulled closed and crying hard but never a whisper escaped his mouth..she can sense his helplessness'his pain'the invisible blood which is flowing out of his torn soul'

He was crying hard when he heard foot steps'.someone was coming up so he stood quickly and ran to his car'

She saw him but shrugged the soft corner which was forming for him and went in to really give good scolding to her daughter'she opened the door and saw her daughter smiling through tears and looking out of the window looking down and her hand forwarded as if caressing some picture'..her smile vanished slowly '..and saw her daughter in the same state in which she saw him few minutes back''her daughter turned looking down and slid onto the bed hugging her knees and crying hard '''

Mai buri hun rey'bohut buri'aapki dil itni buri tarah se thoda'..I LOVE U REY'.par kabhi nahi keh paungi'.aap mujh jaise looser ko deserve nahi karte'.im nothing rey..plzz move on'.mujhe bhool jao'aapne mujhse hi pyaar kyun kiya??? I deserve nothing rey'..nothing'.

Her daughter broke down and slowly drifted to sleep'.she now almost could imagine what have happened..

But she felt it was ri8 and went to her room to sleep but she doesn't know why she was restless and thus ended in a sleepless night''.

hope u guys liked it!!!!

love u all

deetha

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NishKP thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing ss
loved it
plz update next part soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful start di...

i so wanted it 2 b dis way...

i wanted smriti to meet rey atleast once on dat day...

never mind...

jus loved d title too...

please update soon...

n me second 2 cmmnt...

yipee...!!!!
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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alley vahan...

smriti thodi naaram huyi...

am waiting...

jaldi-2 KR ko saath lao... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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huh
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kya sey kya ho gya
nahiii
deetha
ek to maths upar sey
ek or new work main to khushi k marey pagal ho gyi
pgal to maths karkey pehley hi ho gyi
but superb
baki baad main ha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome ss..!
Loved it ..!
Update d next part soon ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmmm... One more story !
Haye.. I cried while readin it..
Pre valens vala episode yaad aa gya:'(
Bt ab toh kriyansh tmhare hath mei h... M sure u l mk evrything go right..!
Waitin fr d nxt part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lagta hai tu khushi ke idea se inspire huyi 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ss really touching
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ek cheez dee...

rey was going from main door and bumped into smriti na????
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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