ArHi FF:4:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

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Posted: 12 years ago

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

🥳YIPPPEEE! i m surprised myself...but i got the first place! 🤪

must be one of my luckiest days!!!😃😃😃

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thank u thank u thank u! thank u so much Lin...! IF not for u, this constant tugging at my heart (tht kept demanding to hear more about the ball night) wouldn't have let me sit in peace. PHEW! i can finally relax!

hey..i this is for the first time i actually noticed...but i liked the way u wrote...lines on lively conversation tht might have taken place in the carraige. It gave me a complete feel...as if i m actally sittting by ur soud..while u narrate the story. These few lines...just didn't let my imaginary senses be in action today..for all felt to be real..as if true!

perfect description of all entering the Ball room...especially Lady Anjali. I was bewildered with her description specifically-

Her divine smile that could not be masked, the deepest joy sparkling within those sad-looking eyes through the mask as well as the merry ring of her laughter.

Flabbergasted!!!🤢

Then, loved the rituals...tht represents the commencement of ceremony. Unique it was! 😊 Quite extraordinary!!

about the mill,,it saddened me too to learn tht it would b replaced by a wool factory. however, my Rabba Vey hungry mind believes tht Lord Arnav..as of now he had learned...might end up saving the mill...indirectly...maybe because of Khushi! 😉😉

and then i know..mask looking job was trusted to Aura..bt stilli couldn't stop myself from looking one for General Shyam...

does this fit ur imagination?

hope it does! atleasst to some extent!😆😆

Love

Meg 😊

P.S. Ur collection of dresses and masks was awesome!

P.P.S. LOL...Master Happy..is exactly the same man who i imagined him to be! 😆😆

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KayZee

@KayZee

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#953

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Yeah not bad for second place!!! Well Done!!!!!!!!!!!! Waiting for the next as i had been stalking this thread every hour today!!!😉

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s_mg

@s_mg

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#954

thank you so much aquiline for making an update .. i was checking this thread like a maniac .. refreshed it again and again .. and at-last got it...love your FF... please come back soon .. we will be waiting for you ...

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neevankrish

@neevankrish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#955

its gonna b 2 o clock..im readin Ur ff..i know im mad..this chap was more like preparation,dresses,masks,etc...but tat pic of generals mask made me think like eww WAT a taste...!!!k let me sleep.. Waitin for d ball to start!!!!tc!!!!

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

"A certain occurrence at the Festival marred the faith of my employees and with no hands to aid me in the work, I had to sell off my mill," offered Master Gupta unwillingly, and then he smiled, "It is well now, sire. I help my sister in her swordsmith work."I see that Lord Arnav really doesn't know the repurcussion of his actions on that marred day. He thinks his decisions only affect the person he intends to destory yet he forgets that person has a family too. Also, I see that Master Shashi Gupta already has his eyes on the storm that is about to unleash on Lady Anjali. If Khushi cant muster the strength to reveal the truth (if she ever finds out) then I pray that Shashi Gupta along with Madhumati are the strong fort to weather the storm.BTW, SINCERE THANKS ON THE SHOUTOUT :) I am so happy that I am all up to date with your story.