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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 14

Swayam's flat, Mumbai

Swayam: here is the surprise for you daisy, hope you like it.

And slowly removes his hand from her eyes. After seeing the view in front of her she had tears in her eyes. They were standing in the semi dark room. The only light which was lightening the room was the flames of the scented candles. The whole room was decorated with scented candles and orchid flowers. The floor was covered with heart shaped red, white and pink balloons. On the bed there was a big teddy bear with "I love you" written on it, one bouquet of orchids, one red coloured heart shaped pillow, one black coloured dress, one jewellery box which had a pair of black stone studded ear ring, neck piece, bracelet and one ring, with silver plating over them. It was looking like as if the jewellery set was made for only that dress which was kept beside that box. Besides all these she saw a box of chocolates, one box of jelly candy's kept on the bed.

In front of the dresser she saw he has set a table for two. In the middle of the table there was a flower vase and in it were white lilies. She freed herself from swayam's arm and moved towards the table to see what food he has made. She saw there were two bowls of soup, two plates of noodles, one bowl of chicken popcorn, one basket full of sandwiches and one bottle of coke. There was a note on the table. It was written "A special date for my love with lots of love.

Sharon was looking at all the foods and decorations with amusement and tears of happiness were constantly flowing from her eyes. Suddenly she felt swayam's arms around her waist. He hugged her from behind and kept his chin on her shoulder.

Swayam: why are you crying? Maine yaha romantic date ki setting kiya tha Halloween date ki nahi. Kuch darawna dikha tumhe?

Sharon: [grimacing] oh god Donald tum bakwaas mat karo. Its incredibly beautiful. I loved it. You did all these things for me? Thank you so much Donald.

Swayam: nahi nahi mujhe thank you mat bolo. Maine ye sab tumhare liye nahi kiya hai balki kaka k liye kiya hai.

Sharon at first glared at him then laughed. Swayam too joined her.

Sharon: waise ye food kaise bana liya?

Swayam: iske liye malls ko salute karna chahiye.

Sharon: woh kyun?

Swayam: ab waha almost har dish ka ready to made solution milta hai isiliye its easy. Mujhe jo kuch easy laga maine le liya. But kisike saath kuch bhi connected nahi hai. Ye nato full Chinese hai aur na..

She places her finger on his lips.

Sharon: par yaha ka har dish love se bana huya hai. Toh huya na ye love cuisine.

Swayam smiles and kisses on her finger. She shyly removes her finger from his lips.

Swayam: tum ready ho jao main bahar wait karta hoon.

She nods. He with a grin on his face leaves the room closing the door behind him. When he was waiting for her in the living room her driver brought her luggage for her. He took them and kept them on simran's room and came back and waited for her in the living room. After about 15 minutes when she opened the door she was showered with rose petals. He has adjusted the bucket of rose petals in that way that when the door of his room will be opened the bucket will turn and the petals will fall on that person who will open the door. She was enjoying the shower of those feather soft petals. She stretched her hands horizontically and closed her eyes to feel the soft petals on her skin. When the shower stopped she opened her eyes and saw swayam leaning over the fridge looking at her intently and lovingly. She rushed in his arms and hugged him tightly. He hugged her too in the same manner.

Sharon: thanks Donald mujhe itna special feel karwane k liye.

Swayam: ab tum mere liye special ho toh tumhe special toh feel karwayunga na. Aur tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Sharon: kyunki maine socha nahi tha main kabhi yeh happiness feel kar payungi.

Swayam: daisy I understand that. But ab main yaha hoon na. So from now onwards you will feel happiness and you will try and break that shell around you.

Sharon: haan Donald I will break that shell around me.

Swayam: I am sure you will. Now lets have lunch.

Sharon: yeah lets go.

He scoops her up in his arms and takes her to his room.

He makes himself sit on a chair and places Sharon on his lap. He wraps her waist with his left hand and held her tightly. Then they started feeding each other while talking with each other.

Swayam: [smirking] toh tumhe hamara promise yaad hai?

Sharon: [glared at him] as if you don't know. Meri sari baatein jann liya, sab kuch and now you are asking if I remember it or not.

Swayam: [chuckles] haan aur tumne mujhe punishment bhi de diya uske liye.

Sharon: [narrows her eyes] kyun tumhe kuch problem huya punishment se?

He tightened his grip on her waist and said

Swayam: [grinning] nahi problem kyun hoga? Mujhe toh faida hi huya.

Sharon: [confused] faida? Kaisa faida?

Swayam: [smirking] because of your running behind me we fell on the bed and after that what happened between us I could see you blush for the first time. So..

Sharon: [blushing remembering that moment] shut up Donald.

Swayam: but its true you look incredible when you blush and I love to see you blush because of me.

Sharon: [fake anger] whatever. Lets get the table cleaned.

They cleaned the table and their hands and came back to the room. Sharon took the bouquet and went back to the kitchen and brought the flowers back in a vase and placed it on the bed side table. When she was back in the room she heard a beautiful music playing on the stereo and swayam leaning over his cupboard. She sat on the bed opening the box of jelly candy and pops one in her mouth and again looked at him for offering him the candies. She saw swayam coming towards her with an intense look on his face. He came near her and took the box from her hand and kept it on the bed. She raised her one brow at him.

Sharon: what? Nahi khana?

Swayam sat on the floor covered with the balloons on one of his knees and forwarded his left hand towards Sharon and said

Swayam: dance?

Sharon smiles and nods her head. Then she places her right hand on swayam's hand and gets up from the bed.

Swayam wraps her waist with his hands and Sharon places her hands on his shoulder.

Then they started to sway back and forth with the rhythm of the music. With them the balloons were also dancing, those of the balloons which were near their feets. Both were looking deep into each other's eyes, lost in each other. Suddenly swayam started to sing looking intensely in her eyes.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhKSVJOSrW4[/YOUTUBE]

[If you have time then you can listen to this song]


Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai


While singing this swayam placed sharon's hand over his heart. She could feel his heart pounding on his chest, each beat chanting her name.


Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi


He sang those lines looking deep into her green eyes. Both his hands were wrapped around her waist. Her one hand was over his heart and another around his neck. She was also looking intensely in his eyes where she could see pure love for her. His eyes were sparkling with love for her. She could feel he was singing each of the lines of this song for her meaning them from the core of his heart.

Aankhon Mein Ankhne Teri
Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri
Mera Na Mujhe Mein Kuch Raha Hua Kya
Baaton Mein Baatein Teri
Raatein Saugatein Teri
Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya
Hua Kya
Mein Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi


He turned her and now her back was against his chest. He rested his head on her shoulder and she could feel his warm breath on her neck.

She closed her eyes to feel him. He also closed his eyes. Her scent filled his lungs and with every breath he took more and more of it.


Shoor Mein Khamoshi Hai
Thodi Se Behoshi Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi
Aadhe Se Jayada Kabhi
Jee Chahe Karlu Is Trah Wafa Ka
Chode Na Chote Kabhi
Tode Na Tute Kabhi
Jo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa Ka


He again turned her to make her face him and slowly slowly pulled her towards him. Now they hugging each other and still swaying. Their bodies have molded into one. Sharon could hear his heart beat. Her head was on his chest and his head on the top of her head. They were hugging each other tightly and their eyes were still closed.


Mein Tera Sharmaya Hoon
Jo Mein Ban Paya Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Raste Miljate Hai
Manzile Miljati Hai

Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Swayam sang these lines huskily. By now they have stopped swaying. Both of them could feel each other's warm breath on their face as their faces were just inches apart.

Swayam moved a little bit now touching sharon's shaky lips. He was looking into sharon's eyes and waiting for any disapproval from her. She slowly closes her eyes and moved her hands in his hair from his neck. He started to move his lips on hers slowly and softly tasting her soft rosy lips. She started to respond to his kiss with the same passion tasting his honey sweet lips. After like eternity swayam pulled away from the kiss out of breath. Sharon looked at him and then shyly looked away blushing.

He hugged her with a sweet smile playing on his face. She hugged him back. The kiss was soft yet passionate, it was their first kiss.

I am really very bad in describing stuffs, especially romantic stuffs. Hope I could do justice to this part. Please forgive me for my mistakes. Do hit the like button and leave your precious comments. Thank you.

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Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res..:p
Unres
Yay I m first 🥳
Coming to update.
Who said that u r bad at writing romantic stuffs.It was really an amazing update.
Loved swayam's surprise.He decorated sharon's room of her choices.Swayam's dialogues were hilarious.Loved the way he teases sharon about their romance sessiom n her blush
The song n pics made this dance n their first kiss more beautifull.
Loved the update
Waiting for next part
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey My Cutie Pie
🤗🤗🤗
I really dont know how u manage to write so so cute yet romantic updates...this is one of the cutest date ever...this makes this FF unique ..its super cute and have an unique charm to it...the blushing sharon..teasing and cheesily romantic swayam...u cant ask for more..reallyy😳


Loved the set up..the food..the dress..the jewelry.. decoration..the song..the description for each line..ahaa...so so lovely...i really loved the way they spend time..alone without any interruption from outer world.. ..finally we got the dreamy moment...awww..cant stop smiling whiling reading this...out of the world...

Swayam moved a little bit now touching sharon's shaky lips. He was looking into sharon's eyes and waiting for any disapproval from her. She slowly closes her eyes and moved her hands in his hair from his neck. He started to move his lips on hers slowly and softly tasting her soft rosy lips. She started to respond to his kiss with the same passion tasting his honey sweet lips. After like eternity swayam pulled away from the kiss out of breath. Sharon looked at him and then shyly looked away blushing.

I love u so so much baby...my cutest writer ever...😳❤️

Luv
Ur Di

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Beautifully penned
Loved the way Swayam planned surprise n also caring for small things also
Idea of rose bucket was amazing
Edited by sanstina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awieee I loved Swayam's Suprise
Sharon was all set to make romantic date to a holloween date 😆 Thats a perfect date ...
Sharon: what? Nahi khana? 🤣here swayam is giving all romantic look and all sharon bothered about is jelly candy 🤣
Their dance ... and Kiss ☺️ Brought back all the momories ... short but very cute update..
when I get a PM about this FF, along with story , i will be looking forward for the pictures too 😳
Thanks for the photos ..No one can blush like SK ⭐️
Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum part sooo romantic awww I just luv their chemistry thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
JUST READ LAST FEW PARTS AND LOVED THEM ALL
REALLY SUPER AWSM SWARON ROMANCE WAS INTENSE AND BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFFULY WRITTEN
REALLY LOVING THIS FF...MY FIRST AND ONLY SWARON FF❤️❤️❤️😃😃😃
AUR KYA...HA...RAMU KAKA TEASING SESSIONS WERE FAB😆😆😆
AND A VERY REMONTIC DATE...😳😳😳
THANX 4 THE PM AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m Loveing it ani
n Fast update
love this update
n kiss too
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Posted: 12 years ago
once again an awesome chapter beautifully penned down
swayam planned everything very beautifully and the whole date was very fantastically written
you are such a deep writer as you always uses beautiful pics to describe each scene and expression of swaron is just awesome. i loved it and enjoyed the update completely
update soon
Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesumly penned down..
My fvourite song..!! Woww...suited the situation the best...
Loved this one...as alswayss...
Thnks 4 the pm..update next ssooon !! :)
Luv,
Sakshi...

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