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I was getting bored so i thought of writing my fantasy sequence on Virika.
I donoo how i write whether you like it or not..Evry type of response is welcomed.Tell me wetheri should continue or not



Viren is One of the most handsome and dashing boy of Mumbai.His father is one of the biggest Businessman of the city.He is very funny and naughty and keeps on dating many girls of Mumbai.Although his father is one of the biggest Businessman but He find journalism more interesting . Age 25.After completing his studies he has been working as a journalist since 2 months.

Jeevika on the other hand is a very responsible and fun loving girl.Age 22.She has a mother who has taken divorce from her father.She has a sister Manvi who loves and supports her always..Jeevika loves party and fashion.She has just completed studies and want to join journalism to become the voice of her mother and many other women where ladies are surpressed and blamed .

Index:-
Update 1:-Page 2
Update 2:-Page 4
Update 3:-Page 7
Update 4:-Page 9
Update 5 (part1):-Page 12
Update 5 (part 2):-Page 16
Update 6:-Page 20
Update 7(part 1):-page 27
Update 7 (part 2):-page 33
Update 8:-PAGE 39
Update 9:-PAGE 45
Update 10:-Page 55
Update 11:- Page 63
Update 12 :-Page 69
Update 13:-Page 74
Update 14:-
Update 15:-Page 83
Update 16:-Page 92
Update 17:-Page 100
Update 18:-Page 106
Update 19:_
Update 20:-page 120
Update 21:-Page 125
Update 22:- Page 133
Update 23:- Page 139.
Update 24:- Page 145
Update 25:- Page 155
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Posted: 12 years ago
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#UNRES#

Heyy! That's really interesting. Journalism.. Quite different! :D

Can't wait for the first update. :D
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-Aaliya.KryAn- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazinggg 👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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defo continue babe...
nd plz pm me
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Natasha its really amazing and intresting...
Continue dear...😉
Natasha137 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankx evry 1...I will update part 1 soon
Virika_EHMMBH thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaa nice please contine it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resume:-
Epi starts with the sunrays reflecting on Jeeviks's pretty face.
Jeevika:-hummum..ye subah itni jldi hogyi..Sapne bi pure ni dekh ski.
Jeevika opened her eyes and manages to sit..She sees Manvi in front of her.
Jeevika:- Manvi..Tu itni subah mre kamre aur ye tre chehre pe 12 kyun bje hain
Manvi:-Wo di ...
Jeevika :-Han kya bol Manvi.
Manvi:-Mujhe apko kuch btana hai
Jeevika :-Han bol Manvi..
Manvi:-Pehle ap promise kro ap emotional ni hogi.
Jeevika:-Esa kya hai..Acha tkh hai nai hoti tu bta.
Manvi:-Di apka Jooobbb Letter😛😛 and gave a big smile congrats Di.
Jeevika:-Manvi tu bi na..dara diya tha..
Manvi:-Mujhe pta tha ap zaror select hojao gi..chalo ab party do isi khushi me
Jeevika:-Acha baba ..pehle maa ko tu bta dun wo boht khush hongi..
Manvi :-Acha suno di..Maa hai na wo Mrs.Shukla ke ghar ja ri hain un ke ghar puja hai na..
Jeevika:-Mrs.Shukla k hain..Humein tu sath ni leke jayeingi??
Manvi:-Aur nai tu kya..Me tu kehti hun jldi nikal lete hain
Jeevika :-Han tekh hai bahir chlte hain kahein.
Manvi:-Ok boss😃

On the other hand Viren is sleeping on his bed and alarm starts ringing.
Viren:-Uff ye alarm thoda ahesta nai bj skta ..Abi Katrina mujhe kiss krne wali hi thi..Uff
Viren has not stopped the alarm that phone also start ringing.
Viren stopping his alarm:-Tera bjne ka tym khtm ab phone ko sune ki bari hai .
Viren picks up the phone and says:-Hello
A girl'svoice comes :-Hi Viren ..I've returned back aur me tum se milna chahti hun at 10:oo near Laurance mall
Viren:-Oh..Riya tum wapis agyi.
Riya:-Yea i missed u so much baby.
Viren;-me 2..Acha abhi kitne bj re hain.
Riya :-9:15 Hore hain..plz jldi ajana Viren.
Viren;-Ok phr me niklta hun adhe ghnte ka rasta hai
Riya :-Ok baby meine tumhra favourite colour purple pehna hai .see you soon ..Byee
Viren:-Bye sweetheart.
Viren changes his clothes quickly and gets out of his rooms says Good morning ..Takes a slice of bread and drinks a little juice.
Virat(His beloved brother):-Kya bat hai bhai ap itni jldi me hun
Viren:-Han Virat thoda kam hai. Jldi ajaon ga.
Virat :-Ok bhai bye tc.
Viren :-U 2

Maaa...Manvi shouted.
Maa :-Kya hua beta is trhan kyun chila ri ho.
Manvi-Di ka job letter...dekho..
Maa hugged Jeevika :-Beta mujhe boht khushi hoi.Baghwan tumhe sadha sukhi rkhe.
Jeevika:-Maa ye sub apki duaon ki wjah se hai.
Manvi:-Maa..ap kahin ja ri ho..
Maa:-Han me Mrs.Shukla k han pooja pe ja ri hun.Tum dono bi tayar hojao.
Manvi:-Wo hamein jana hai.
Maa :-Arey jahan jana ho chle jana pooja k bad.
Jeevika:-Maa wo urgent hai..Wo actually Manvi k ddd..dant me dart hai.
Manvi..Aaa..han boht dard hora hai maa.
Maa:-Zyada dard tu ni.
Jeevika:-Maa nai me manange krlungi..Ok bye
Maa :-Dehan se han..Sambhal k jana aur mujhe phone krdena..
Manvi and jeevika say together:-Han maaa tekh hai.
Jeevika and Manvi rushed towards the car and pushed teh song button and played them very loud.
Manvi:-Di aj Shopping krne ka bda man hai.
Jeevika:-Han Laurance mall me bdi achi offers ayi hain wahin chlte hain.
Both sisters keep on talking and enjoyingthe music and the mall came.
Manvi:-Chlo di agya mall tu
Jeevika:-Ahan kitni thand hai aur hwa bi thndi thndi..
Manvi;-Wo dekho ice-cream..thand me ice-creamka maza hi aur hota hai ...ap idhr ruko me ice-cream lati hun.
Jeevika(who Is also dressed in a purple dress);-Stands and waits for Manvi.
Viren who was driving fast finally reaches ,parked his car and start searching for Riya
Viren :-Kahan gyi Riya?Idhr hi tu ane ko kahan.Oh ye tu rhi.
He hugged her from back side..Baby tu idhr ho tum..You are looking very pretty..I love you..😉
Jeevika turns and says:- excuse me..Are you crazy??
himat kese hoi..Tum ldke bi na..
Viren:-Dekhhe me wo...
Jeevika :-Mujhe kuch nahi sunana
Viren:-Me wo kisi aur ko dhond rha tha
Jeevika:-Mujhe tum ldko ka ache se pta hai..Koi ldki mili nai aur shru hojate hain
Viren:-Oh hello miss whatever...Me istype ka ldka nai hun k kesi ko bi dekho aur line marna shru hojaon..Meri gf ne kahan tha mujhe yahan ane ko
Jeevika;-Whatever..mujhe interest ni bat krne ka tum se
Viren :-Me tu mare ja ra hun na.
Manvi comes and says:-Kya hua di ..
Jeevika:-Manvi kuch nai bs kuch log moqe ki talash me hote hain..
chalo yahan se.

End:_____
Precap:-Jeevika and manvi goes to a party and jeevika sees Viren again and was drinking shampion and drops it on her clothes.




surbhi1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nce n interesting
continue soon
pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wohooo! Amazing update. :D

Loved the ending though! :D

Viren ne sahi chance maara hai! 🤣

Loved it! 👍🏼 Continue soon..

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