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my second os i hope u all like it if not plz forgive me actually it is a dream i saw last nightand could not resist but share it with you all
IT WAS A REALLY COLD NIGHT IN MUMBAI AND THE 16 YEAR OLD MANYATA WAS SITIING IN HER RADIO STATION AND STARTED
"hey you are listening to 94.5 fm and its me manyata with your favourite midnight show love with vjmanyata ok the clock in the studio says 12.00 which means HAPPY VALENTIMES DAY to all the lovey dubey couples and let me remind you if you need to send any message to you can call 1888565 and tell the message to her ok here we have one
"hello who is this" SHE ASKED
"hi its me" the caller stammered but his voice was mesmerising
"my name is udayveer"
"ok udayveer so what message you have and for whom?"
"well umm its for you"
"me?" she was taken aback
"yes i just want to thank you for being such a sweet cupid that you to relax our mood and giving us a break from our heavy routine by your jokes and by your sweet voice which makes my heart at ease , to take so amuingly and make me fell the way no on ever did if i wills ay that i love you it won't be a fake one i assure and above all for being what you are a girl with a golden heart"
"well thats so sweet of you udayveer" but she was cut by him
"manyata i have been listening to your show since last five months and i have written a song for you i want to share it with you"
"ok you can" she said almost bursting with excitement as he started
Mujh mein tu, tu hi tu basa...
Naino mein, jaise khwaab saa...
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa...
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu... tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa...
Ishq aashiqui mein
Kuch log chhant.ta hai
Zakhm bant.ta hai
Unhe dard bant.ta hai
Tod deta hai khwaab saare dekhte dekhte
Kar de barbaad saa
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu... tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa
Safar do kadam hai, jise ishq log kehte
Magar ishq wale, sab safar me hi rehte
Khatm hota na umr bhar hi, Ishq ka raasta
Hai ye behisaab sa
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu
Tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa..."
"it was lovely udayveer thank you so much'
"and yeah a very happy birth day to you"
"thankss so this songs for you uday"
as the phone got dissconnected and she pushed the button .the song yuhi re from david started to play . Manyata was on the 7thh heaven no one had ever mad her fell so special ever .As for uday he could not help but jump on his bed out of excitement as finally after so much of waiting he was talking to the girl for whom he had waited so much ' he was love with her voiced and recorded her show on his mobile and whenever something troubled him he listened to it ,he knew he loved her but had no idea about her by her physical appearence ,his isc exams were knocking at his door and he sat to study again but his mind raced back to manyata and as for her poor she just could not control her excitement she asap finished her program raced to the manager and got his number. she returned back her home as her family celebrated her birthday but her mind was hooked on uday at last nearly at 3 when she reached her room she called uday and said
"good morning uday i hope i am not disturbing you"
"not at all manyata"
"woa how did you know it is me i mean just how"
"kya karei apkeh diwangi mei hum etnei madhosh hai ki apki shaaash sei bhi hum wakiif hai"
"well bohoot achi baat hai..listen' she said cutely
"woahi toh kar rahei hai pichlei 3 mahino sei"
she blushed at this and she said
"thanks mujhei tumnei joh bhi bolo thata wonderful and the song was awesome"
"toh yes or no" he asked firmly
"i did 'nt get you"
"bachi nahi hoi tum bash bol doi yes"
"kisliye" she was confused
"humnei propose kia tha so what is it"
"kall batayei "
"are you going to meet me?"
"yes if you want"
"where and when i mean how?"
"in shopping complex near juhu beach and at 7 in the evening and i guess in your clothes" she teased
"fine i will be waiting for you please do not lay a joke on me coz i really love you and this meeting means a lot to me even if it your answer is no"
"how? how ? can you love someone so deeply even without seeing "
"kyuiki pyaar dil sei hota hai face sei nahi
thek hai birthday girl i won't keep you hanging good night
sweet dreams i will be waiting for you
love you"
he kept the phone while they both found it almost impossible to sleep .the next few hour passed by a twinkle of an eye .finally the time had come today she took off from the studio as her little sister whom she loved more than anything in her life Jainandini and her parents wanted to stay the studio as the manager had invited them and manyata rejected the offer telling she had to study and she was getting dressed she texted him
WHERE ARE YOU
after a few seconds came the reply
I AM IN THE SHOPPING COMPLEX BUT WHERE ARE YOU IT IS ALREADY 9 . I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO MEET YOU JAAN
a smile spread across her face but she did not want him to think that she was late so she lied
I AM STUCK HERE IN THE STUDIO I WILL BE THERE SOON
as UV got the message even he smiled he was glad that she did pt reach as he himself was still at home trying to pick himself a perfect shirt .finally after an hour he was ready but as he was about to make his way out his stopped the news reported said
'TODAY IN THE RADIO COMPLEX THERE WAS A BOMB BLAST MANY PEOPLE DIED AND THESE SIMILAR BOMB BLAST TOOK'
He could not wait to take the news anymore he was shocked and he just sat down as his father and sister tried to shook him ...he said nothing but tears told the condition of his broken heart he said to himself
"i will take the revenge from those people who tried to kill you i swear i will my love"
Manyata was in a shop when she heard that the news the reporter said
"A BOMB BLAST TOOK PLACE IN THE RADIO STATION AND IN THE SHOPPING COMPLEX NEAR THE JUHU BEACH"
she could not believe her own ears it just seemed like a bad dreams ,her dad ,her mom ,her sister ,her uday everything was gone
AFTER 5 YEARS
it was a chill morning in ladakh as she was crossing her road and army car almost hit her she screamed
"you idiot you can't even look"
a tall well build army officer marched towards her and caught her by her arms and pulled her close and gritted his teet
"you must watch as you are walking on the streets and don't you dare to talk to me in that pitch you do not know foolish women you are talking to no commoner but major udayveer singh"
promo for chapter 2 page 3
character sketch page 3
chapter 2 page 4
CHAPTER 3 PAGE 6 UPDATING
chapter 3 page 7 completed
chapter 4 page 9
chapter 5 page 10
chapter 6 page 12
chapter 7 page 16
chapter 8 page 17
chapter 9 page 17
chapter 10page 17
the end
IT WAS A REALLY COLD NIGHT IN MUMBAI AND THE 16 YEAR OLD MANYATA WAS SITIING IN HER RADIO STATION AND STARTED
"hey you are listening to 94.5 fm and its me manyata with your favourite midnight show love with vjmanyata ok the clock in the studio says 12.00 which means HAPPY VALENTIMES DAY to all the lovey dubey couples and let me remind you if you need to send any message to you can call 1888565 and tell the message to her ok here we have one
"hello who is this" SHE ASKED
"hi its me" the caller stammered but his voice was mesmerising
"my name is udayveer"
"ok udayveer so what message you have and for whom?"
"well umm its for you"
"me?" she was taken aback
"yes i just want to thank you for being such a sweet cupid that you to relax our mood and giving us a break from our heavy routine by your jokes and by your sweet voice which makes my heart at ease , to take so amuingly and make me fell the way no on ever did if i wills ay that i love you it won't be a fake one i assure and above all for being what you are a girl with a golden heart"
"well thats so sweet of you udayveer" but she was cut by him
"manyata i have been listening to your show since last five months and i have written a song for you i want to share it with you"
"ok you can" she said almost bursting with excitement as he started
Mujh mein tu, tu hi tu basa...
Naino mein, jaise khwaab saa...
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa...
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu... tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa...
Ishq aashiqui mein
Kuch log chhant.ta hai
Zakhm bant.ta hai
Unhe dard bant.ta hai
Tod deta hai khwaab saare dekhte dekhte
Kar de barbaad saa
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu... tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa
Safar do kadam hai, jise ishq log kehte
Magar ishq wale, sab safar me hi rehte
Khatm hota na umr bhar hi, Ishq ka raasta
Hai ye behisaab sa
Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina
Jo tu na ho toh main bhi hunga main naa
Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa
Mujh mein tu
Tu hi tu basa
Naino mein jaise khwaab saa..."
"it was lovely udayveer thank you so much'
"and yeah a very happy birth day to you"
"thankss so this songs for you uday"
as the phone got dissconnected and she pushed the button .the song yuhi re from david started to play . Manyata was on the 7thh heaven no one had ever mad her fell so special ever .As for uday he could not help but jump on his bed out of excitement as finally after so much of waiting he was talking to the girl for whom he had waited so much ' he was love with her voiced and recorded her show on his mobile and whenever something troubled him he listened to it ,he knew he loved her but had no idea about her by her physical appearence ,his isc exams were knocking at his door and he sat to study again but his mind raced back to manyata and as for her poor she just could not control her excitement she asap finished her program raced to the manager and got his number. she returned back her home as her family celebrated her birthday but her mind was hooked on uday at last nearly at 3 when she reached her room she called uday and said
"good morning uday i hope i am not disturbing you"
"not at all manyata"
"woa how did you know it is me i mean just how"
"kya karei apkeh diwangi mei hum etnei madhosh hai ki apki shaaash sei bhi hum wakiif hai"
"well bohoot achi baat hai..listen' she said cutely
"woahi toh kar rahei hai pichlei 3 mahino sei"
she blushed at this and she said
"thanks mujhei tumnei joh bhi bolo thata wonderful and the song was awesome"
"toh yes or no" he asked firmly
"i did 'nt get you"
"bachi nahi hoi tum bash bol doi yes"
"kisliye" she was confused
"humnei propose kia tha so what is it"
"kall batayei "
"are you going to meet me?"
"yes if you want"
"where and when i mean how?"
"in shopping complex near juhu beach and at 7 in the evening and i guess in your clothes" she teased
"fine i will be waiting for you please do not lay a joke on me coz i really love you and this meeting means a lot to me even if it your answer is no"
"how? how ? can you love someone so deeply even without seeing "
"kyuiki pyaar dil sei hota hai face sei nahi
thek hai birthday girl i won't keep you hanging good night
sweet dreams i will be waiting for you
love you"
he kept the phone while they both found it almost impossible to sleep .the next few hour passed by a twinkle of an eye .finally the time had come today she took off from the studio as her little sister whom she loved more than anything in her life Jainandini and her parents wanted to stay the studio as the manager had invited them and manyata rejected the offer telling she had to study and she was getting dressed she texted him
WHERE ARE YOU
after a few seconds came the reply
I AM IN THE SHOPPING COMPLEX BUT WHERE ARE YOU IT IS ALREADY 9 . I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO MEET YOU JAAN
a smile spread across her face but she did not want him to think that she was late so she lied
I AM STUCK HERE IN THE STUDIO I WILL BE THERE SOON
as UV got the message even he smiled he was glad that she did pt reach as he himself was still at home trying to pick himself a perfect shirt .finally after an hour he was ready but as he was about to make his way out his stopped the news reported said
'TODAY IN THE RADIO COMPLEX THERE WAS A BOMB BLAST MANY PEOPLE DIED AND THESE SIMILAR BOMB BLAST TOOK'
He could not wait to take the news anymore he was shocked and he just sat down as his father and sister tried to shook him ...he said nothing but tears told the condition of his broken heart he said to himself
"i will take the revenge from those people who tried to kill you i swear i will my love"
Manyata was in a shop when she heard that the news the reporter said
"A BOMB BLAST TOOK PLACE IN THE RADIO STATION AND IN THE SHOPPING COMPLEX NEAR THE JUHU BEACH"
she could not believe her own ears it just seemed like a bad dreams ,her dad ,her mom ,her sister ,her uday everything was gone
AFTER 5 YEARS
it was a chill morning in ladakh as she was crossing her road and army car almost hit her she screamed
"you idiot you can't even look"
a tall well build army officer marched towards her and caught her by her arms and pulled her close and gritted his teet
"you must watch as you are walking on the streets and don't you dare to talk to me in that pitch you do not know foolish women you are talking to no commoner but major udayveer singh"
promo for chapter 2 page 3
character sketch page 3
chapter 2 page 4
CHAPTER 3 PAGE 6 UPDATING
chapter 3 page 7 completed
chapter 4 page 9
chapter 5 page 10
chapter 6 page 12
chapter 7 page 16
chapter 8 page 17
chapter 9 page 17
chapter 10page 17
the end
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