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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

PROMO FOR CHAPPY TWO
"WHO IS HE?" THE TERRORIST ASKED
MANYATA STOOD INFRONT OF HIMTRYING TO PROTECT HIM AND SAID
"MY HUSBAND"
"AN ARMY MAN?" ASKED THE TERRORIST

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

whn will u update dear[/QUOTE
TOMMOROW THIS AND BEGUNNAH

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: annesha18

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pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

waitng for the chaptr,loved the promo!!!😊😊

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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

o terizzz
kya promo hain
ab ye terrorist kahase tapak pada??
jaldi deo

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.HookandHybrid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

mind blowing pls update soon

four ff ur great

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

o terizzz
kya promo hain
ab ye terrorist kahase tapak pada??
jaldi deo[/QUOTE]
ABH KYA BATAO MERE STORIES MEI AISA HI HOTA HAI AIVII EI HALKAT LOG TPAK JATEI HAI😆😆😆😆

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

mind blowing pls update soon

four ff ur great

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THANKS BUT IT IS ONLY BECAUSE OF YOUR ENCOURAGE MENT SO THANK YOU SOO MUCH😊😊😊😊

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

CHARACTER SKETCH
MANYATA SINGH 21
After that incident she was totally broken ,the only relative she had was her dadi who stayed in ladakh .So she shifted to ladakh and completed her graduation from there then she joined a government school as a history teacher .her dadi gave her endless love and always cared for her,they lived a happy and humble life she always put up a smile on her face but she was loner she missed her family and uday maybe that was her reason for staying alone without any friends or love .she still loves uday and often spend endless night crying and reading the song he had written for her .on every valentimes day she writes him a letter.
MAJOR UDAYVEER SINGH 23
a very cold hearted person for him the only reason to live is because he wants to find out those people responsible for his lover 's death.inspite of being the son of such a rich buisnessman he choose this life just for his manyata .but somewhere he still feels she is alive .
ARYAAN CHOPRA 22
A teacher in manyata 's school and he has a crush on her .a very humble ,polite and sweet boy an orphan by birth and manyata 's best buddy
AKASH RAY CHOUDARY 35
the person responsible for the two bomb blast.a very cruel ,stone hearted guy who thinks only about himself ,the leader of the terrorist gang and is very clever .he stays in ladakh and work as a postman
other characters are in a positive role

done with character sketch the chappy is going to come

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

CHAPTER 2
AFTER ONE WEEK
Manyata got down from aryaan 'bike "see you tomorrow then...on time" he murmured softly ,waving a good bye and before she could reply he was gone .she entered the small cottage covered with hilly snow covered mountain ,it was unlocked and she entered her room and got herself into her night dress and threw herself on the bed .emptying her bag she pulled out an old rugged paper it was nothing but the lyrics of the song written by udayveer .she read it again and her face fell again hot tears started to blind hee eyes as she heard some noise from her dadi 's room .she rushed and saw her dadi had made the water jug wall ,she went and picked it up ,her dadi was not well since many days and was under bed rest as all her nerve shook whenever she tried to get up
manyata: dadi why did you get up you could tell me i would do it
her dadi caught her arms and made manyata sit beside her ,she caressed her check
manyata; beta you was again missing udayveer see trust in god you will get him one day
manyata rested her shoulder on the pillow and tears escaped her eyes
manyata: dadi he is death
dadi: beta always what you see or hear is not what it actually is nature has its own way to trick us trust on your love
manyata;dadi please can we drop this topic
dadi: ok so beta can you fulfill my one wish when i die please take my ashes to haridwar
manyata:dadi you are not going to die
saying this they both exchanged a sweet smile and went off to sleep
IN ARMY CAMP
uday sat in his tent peaceful smoking his biri. as a soilder came and informed him
soilder:major we found two locals in the camp what shall we do?
uday: shoot them
soilder:but major they are innocent
uday got up and encircled the soilder
uday:whether they are innocent or not let god for you do as directed shoot them ok don't think too much
soilder;yes major
he smirked as the soilder marched away ,he no more cared about anyone 's life not even his own .just then he got a call from haridwar
uday:yes dad
giriraaj:beta can you go to haridwar and visit our guruji ,he actually will give you the khundali do not worry you need not come to mumbai i myself will come from ladakh and get it
uday:if you can come to ladakh why don't you ownself go to haridwar
giriraaj; please beta and moreover i asked for an leave and they allowed you a one month leave
uday:dad but i am not coming to mumbai
giriraaj: but its unnati 's marriage
uday:i know wish her a happy married life and i will leave for haridwar tomorrow
THE NEXT DAY
early in the morning manyata went to wake her dadi up ,but her dadi did not wake as her dadi had slept forever .she cried by her dadi 's side but life have to move on so after the funeral she locked the house told aryaan to inform the principle about her leave to which the principle agreed. she took a bus to haridwar as she was set on a journey to fulfill her dadi 's last wish. she sat in her seat which was in the last row ,she saw the sky turning slightly dark just as a huge figure stood in front of her it was uday in a black shirt and jeans .manyata recalled there first encounter but she was in no mood to fight so she just picked her bag and took it in lap making place for him to sit while he adjusted himself he could not help his eyes admiring the beauty of manyata but she been unaware of the world just sat there her eyes were closed and it rested on the glass window .the journey finally started the bus jerked with every move and it was pitch dark not.after five hour they reached the plains and now the drive was peacefull , manyata kept looking outside the window and tears rolled down uday was aware of this but he just turned his face away he was least bothered in her problem but still his heart ached by seeing her cry .it was almost 1 when the bus stopped many armed mens in black got on the bus and started to wake all the passengers up .by five minutes everyone was awakeas they were aware that there bus had been hijacked by terrorrist the leader stepped in front
leader:all the boys travelling alone step out
,uday too was about to get up but manyata grabbed his arm and pulled him back to the seat. her grip was cold and he raised his eye brows for an explanation she kept quite. all the boys were taken out of the bus as the mens started each of passenger to step forward and introduce themselves .the mans passed valgure comments which angered uday but at that time he was helpless ,finally it was manveer 's turn they stood
leader:your name
manyata: my name is manyata?
the terrorist pointed towards uday
leader:who is he?
manyata stood infront of him protecting him
manyata: my husband
leader;an army man?
manyata:no
the leader asked them to sit back and they sat the terrorist futhur asked all the passenger after that they stepped out and tied all the boys[who had stepped out] into a pole and threw kerosine ,then burned them alive it was a terrific scene and manyata tried to look away ,uday took her head and placed it on his shoulder ,soon after everything was quite and even the terrorist left the bus started to drive again ,there was a pin drop silence and uday looked down to see manyata had slept on his chest without disturbing her he just let he rest there and rested his head on the seat and tried to sleep but the scene of burning all those boys came infront of him ,he had seen many death but this was the worst his eyes feel on manyata who slept so peacefully in his chest like a sleeping angle .but his sleep he kept admiring her she was so beautifull ,such perfect pink lips ,such sparkling eyes ,such anglelic beauty .soon something fell from her bag without disturbing her sleep he picked it up it was some letters he opened it and read all the letters .after completing all he just said to himself :"so manyata you are still alive and you have no idea how near i am to you dear i love you my angle"precap: morning mrs veer singh you jerk where are my clothes and what am i doing in this bed with you and wait where are your clothes

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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