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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...this is amazing story...dippy...pata nahi tha tum otni achhi writer ho...hatts off...dorry for late comment...u know na me kitna busy rehta hu...hardly get time to come here...

now your updates...fabulus...loved it...rey cant help but think about taani hearing her voice only...and love shani yugani bonding...sharey convo is very good...

taarey first meet...awesome...

yug and rey first meet so sweet...rey found his future son sweet...

ms.angry bird and mr.akdu ...lol...

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another brilliant chapater, tani and Rey met for 1st time, first meeting mein jagraha aur thoda sa close wala scen, i like da name angry bird nd mr akdu nd luv 2 read bondin of tani nd yug , for sec I thought he might not talk to her for while . Awosome update nd will eagerly wait for nxt 1, tc
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha05

Jst read all the updates nw its fantadtic dearrr
Livd evrythng

Pm once again me tooo

thanks dear...ya i will pm u.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ish123

Another brilliant chapater, tani and Rey met for 1st time, first meeting mein jagraha aur thoda sa close wala scen, i like da name angry bird nd mr akdu nd luv 2 read bondin of tani nd yug , for sec I thought he might not talk to her for while . Awosome update nd will eagerly wait for nxt 1, tc

thanks dear...i m updating it now...

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Enjoy the update guys...and plz like and comment...aaj pura din mene bahot soch soch kar ye update likha hai...hope sabko pasand aaye.pm will be send after my dinner.

Taarey:we r come in sir???

All student look at them...

Sharon and swayam are sitting beside eachother...

Swayam look at rey and gesture him:aaj phir late...

Sharon see taani and gesture taani:kya hua???why late???

Taani gesture her baad me batati hu...

Pro:u both r late...any ways come in...

Taarey:thank u sir...

There is only two seats are left...

And that too beside each other...and last one...

Both sit beside each other...

Pro:one minute...mene aap logo ko bethne k liye nahi bola...

Taarey stand up ...

Pro:so mr.reyaansh singhania...u r the GS...and late on first day???

Rey:sorry sir...it will never happen again...

Ta(in her mind):to ye mr.akdu GS hai...

Pro:reyaansh u can sit...(to taani)miss...seems u r new in the college right???

Ta:yes sir...

Pro:give your intro...

Ta:sir i m taani kapoor...from jodhpur...

Rey (hearing her talking with himself):abhi to bahar kitne gusse me thi...angry bird ki tarah and ab itni sweet...iski aawaz...are ye to wahi hai...jo love pe lectures deti hai...jiske bare me din bhar sochta rehta hu...wait rey...tum din bhar uske bare me sochte ho??

Just then the professor saw him and said:mr.reyaansh...stand up...what r u doing??

Rey stand up and said:nothing sir...

Pro:miss taani u can sit...

Ta:thank u sir...

Rey:sir can i...

Pro:ok ok...sit down...

Rey:thank u sir...

Rey sit and look at taani...

She is looking at sharon...

Rey look at sharon who is smilling at taani...

Then all concentrate on the words of the professor...

But rey who was busy in thought of taani...and her words about love...

Rey(talking to himself):love is magic...sach me???according to her love is magic but according to me it gives only pain...aur ye ms.angry bird...kabhi gussa to kabhi itni sweet...(he look at her .she is looking at the professor and at the same time playing with her hairs)wow...kitni cute lag rahi hai...jab angry hoti hai na tab achhi lagti hai but jab ese shant hoti hai to aur bhi cute...wait rey what r u talking???u saying her cute??

Taani see him talking with himself...

Ta:hey mr.akdu...apneaap se kyu baate kar rahe ho???

Rey:u angry bird...me kuch bhi karu tumhe kya???

Ta:fine...(again look at professor)

Rey also look at the professor...

Pro:ok guys...its enough for today...we still have 10 minutes...lets discuss something new...so tell me different love relationships ...

Sh:husband wife...

Pro:right miss sharon...next one..???

Ne:girlfried boyfriend...

Pro:ok...

Hearing gf and bf...taani become sad and only one person came in her mind...vihan...jiski vajah se vo love ko hate karti hai...jise vo itna pyar karti thi...aur...a tear drop fall down from her eyes...rey saw it and think:ye itni aggressive itni sweet and ab senti bhi hai???iski kitni sides hai??

Rey take her tear on his fingure...and said:ms.angry bird suddenly change in to senti bird???u know what ye sad face na tum pe suit nahi karta...aur ye aansu...isse na life me jagah hi nahi deni chahiye...always keep smiling...just like me...and give her a sweet smile...(gosh m dead...his smile is killer...)

Taani smile and said:me to senti bird ban gai but aap mr.akdu se mr.sweet kaise ban gaye???

Rey:well...me hu hi itna sweet...

Both smile...and rey lost in her smile...

Pro:reyaansh and taani...u tell any relation of love...

Both look at professor...

Rey:vo...relation...

Ta:sir...mother and a child...its the best relation of love...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye a mother cant hate her child...(remember yug and herself)

Pro:right miss taani...

Rey(thinks):wow...aggressive,sweet senti and itni mature bhi...he kept looking at taani...

Rey come to his sense when the ring bell...thinks:rey...what r u doing??

All go out of the class...just our gang is there...

Taani go to sharon and hug her...

All(except rey):sharon u know her??

Sh:yes...she is my best friend...just like my sister...right taani???

Ta:right...shar...

Sh:ok meet my friends...this is simmi...she is rinni...neha...aashi...

Ta:hi girls...

Girls:hi taani...

Sh:ye hai nil...amar...vicky...bharat...swayam and...

Ta:and i know...inse me mil chuki hu...hai na mr.sweet???

Rey:ya senti bird...

Sh:mr.sweet and sentu bird...ye kya hai??

Ta:baad me batati hu ...

Rey:ok guys...lets go to canteen...senti bird tum bhi chalo...as u r new member of our group...

Ta:ok...

All go in the canteen...

No one is there...only gang is here...they order some food and sit on the table...and chit chatting...

Taani is finding some thing in her bag when she found a lizard made of rubber...with it yug always scared her...taani thought something...simmi is sitting beside her...she silently put the lizard on simmi's shoulder...

All are talking and suddenly vicky saw it...

Vicky ***scary face***

Taani is chuckling...

Rey saw both of them...

Rey:vicky kya hua??

Vi:simmi ...

Si:ya vicky...

Vi:there is a lizard on your shoulder...

Simmi slowly look at her shoulder and saw lizard(fake one)...

Simmi:aaawww...and quickly throw it ...and it fell on vicky...

Vi:aawww...aaawww...he thrw it and it fell on aashi...

Aashi screams...aawww...aawww...and throw it and she climb on the table...

Lizard fell on rey...

Rey:oh god...aawww...bachao...

He throw it...and lizard fell on the ground...

All see the lizard on the ground...

All(except taani):why isnt it moving...is it dead???

Now taani burst out laughing...she is laughing too much...

Ne:taani...laughing u r...why???

Ta:oh god...aap log bhi...she again laugh...

Rey:oye senti bird...why are u laughing too much???

Ta:aap log bhi na...ek fake lizard se dar gaye...oh god...my stomach is painning...

Si:how do u know its fake...this is your prank right???

Ta:no...no...mene nai...

Simmi stand up and go near taani...

Taani run and simmi run behind her...

Vicky rey and aashi also run after her...

Rey :simmi tu iske piche ja...me idhar se aage jake usse pakdta hu...

Si:ya...ok...

Now rey go in front of her running...

Taani is running looking behind...

Now taarey saw eachother running...but cant stop themselves and **clash**...

Hopefully rey balance himself but taani loose her balance and about to fall when rey hold her from waist...taani close her eyes in fear and clutch his shirt with both her hands...

Rey kept looking at her angelic face...as taani felt that she is safe...she slowly open her eyes and found rey staring at her...

Sharon come there and said:taani r u ok??

Both come in their sense...rey make her to stand properly...

Ta:ya i m fine...

Si:seriously taani...esa prank bhi koi karta hai kya???

Taani again start laughing and said:sorry ...sorry guys...vo kya hai na yu...

She stop here...she doesnt want that anyone come to know about her being a single mother...

Sh:are guys chalo ab hamara food bhi aa gaya...chalo...phir class me bhi jana hai...

All sat and eat...in between rey found himself staring at taani...

Rey(thinks):whts wrong with u dude????why are u staring at her??but man na padega iski bahot sari sides hai...kabhi angry bird kabhi sweet kabhi senti bird to kabhi mature to kabhi naughty bird...kitne sare name ho gaye uske...angry bird senti bird naughty bird...

Just then swayam said:ok guys time for class...are rey...kya soch raha hai???do din se dekh raha hu...tum khoye khoye se rehte ho...any problem???

Rey:nothing swayam...just ese hi bas...

Sh:ok guys...chalo class ka time ho gaya...

Then all attend the lectures and at last ...all go...only taarey and sharon are there...

Rey is in vp sir's office...

Sh:taani chalo hum bhi chalte hai...

Ta:sharon...mujhe library me kuch kam hai tum jao ...aur ha...ja ke yug ko dekh lena...vo thik hai ya nahi???

Sh:yes mom ...i will...

Both laugh and sharon leave .

Taani go in the library to issue a book.

Here rey come out and remember that usse bhi library se book leni hai...

He also go there...taani and rey...and in between there book shelf...

Taani and rey both want the same book...from this side taani held the book and from that side rey held the book and both pull it at the same time...

Taarey together:why cant i pull the book???

Again they try to pull...again cant...

Taarey:what the hell...

Again they pull but this time rey pull it more forcefully and he succsede...

Now taarey see each other...

Rey:tum??

Ta:aap???

Rey:tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???

Ta:kyu???ye library kya aap ki hai ki me yaha nahi aa sakti...

Rey:are nahi nahi senti bird...esa nahi hai...

Ta:senti bird...angry bird...ye sab kya hai???

Rey:aur ek name hai...naughty bird...

Ta:naughty bird???

Rey:ha...jab tum angry hoti ho to me tumhe angry bird bulaunga...jab senti ho jaogi to senti bird aur jab tum masti karogi to me tumhe naughty bird bulaunga...

Ta:what???u r crazy mr.akdu...

Rey:akdu???dekho mujhe...me akdu lagta hu???see...i m so sweet...

Ta:oh god...aap jake kisi aur ka dimag khaiye na...mujhe kyu pareshan kar rahe hai???

Rey:baki sab me tum jesi baat nahi...naughty angry sweet mature senti...u r perfect friend for me...

Ta:friend???

Rey:ya friend...arent we???

Ta:ye kab hua???

Rey:nahi hua to ab ho jayega...friends???

Ta:(smile)friends...

Rey:but plz dont call me akdu...

Ta:ok mr.akdu...

Rey:dekho naughty bird...

Ta:akdu akdu akdu...

Just then sharon call taani...

Taani pick up and said:ya shar...

But its yug...

Yug:mummaaa...kaha ho aap???ghar aao na jaldi...

Ta:ha shona...bas aa hi rahi hu...10 min me aati hu...ok???

Yug:ok...mummaa...come soon...

Taani hung up and said:ok mr.akdu i have to go...bye...

Rey:are suno ye book...

But he is late...taani already gone...

Rey:ye lo...naughty bird chali bhi gayi...shona...ye sharon ko shona bulati hai???interesting...

Rey also go from there...

Taani reach home...as taani enter...yug come running and hug her...he wrap his tiny hands around her legs ...

Yug:mummaaa...aa gai aap...kitni der laga di...pata hai yug ne aap ko kitna miss kiya ..???

Taani take him in her hands and kiss him on his forehead and said...miss u too shona...

Just then sharon come from taani's room...

Ta:shar tum yaha???

Sh:ha...ye tumhara yug...nai hamara yug...usne mujhe rok liya...mujhe kaha ki yug ko ye clothes pehn ne hai so mene usse pehna diye aur pata hai...usne aaj kya kaha???

Ta:kya kaha yug ne??

Both sit on the sofa...

Sh:yug ne bola ki vo mujhe maasi nahi bulayega...

Ta:kyu???maasi nahi to kya bulaoge yug???

Yug:mumma ...

Ta:mumma???

Yug and sha:ha mumma...

Yug:aap ko pata hai mumma sharon maasi bhi yug se utna hi pyar karti hai jitna aap aur dadu...isiliye yug ne socha ki inko bhi me mumma hi bulau...

Ta:aww...shona...u r so sweet...

Yug:ok dono mumma ab yug ko kissi degi...taani mumma aap left cheek pe and sharon mumma aap right cheek pe...phir yug ko apne new friend ke sath park me jana hai...

Shani:new friend???

Yug:ha new friend...hamare pados me rehta hai...uska name jimmy hai...

Both sharon and taani kiss yug...yug also kiss them and run outside...

Shani:yug...apna dhyan rakhna...

Yug:ok mummas...

Yug met jimmy and both go in the park with jimmy's dad...this park is near rey's apartment...

Here rey is going to buy juice for himself...when he pass near the park...he saw yug sitting on a bench...

Seeing yug a wide smile come on rey's face ...he go there and sit beside him...

Yug is looking at jimmy and his dad...his dad is swinging jimmy...

Rey:hi champ...

Yug:are...aap yaha???

Rey:yes...me yaha ...par ek baat batao aap akele kyu bethe ho???

Yug:yug ka friend uske papa k sath hai...and no one is there for swinging yug...

Rey saw his sad face...and become sad...

Rey:are ese kaise...me hu na yug ke liye...chalo...he take yug in his arms and put him on the swing...and start swinging...

Yug:yeey...wow...bahot maza aa raha hai...yeee...thank u friend...yeee...wow...

After some time

Yug:ok friend...ab yug thak gaya...

Rey:ok...chalo...aap ko ice cream khani hai???

Yug:ice creammm ...yee...yes yes...yug want icecream...

Rey:lets go...

Both go and rey:aap ko kosa flavour chahiye???

Yug:yug ko butter scotch...no...venila...no...chocolate...yes chocolate flavour chahiye...

Rey:to shopkeeper:bhaiya do chocolate flavoure...

Yug:aap ko bhi chocolate flavour pasand hai??

Rey:ha...

Yug:wow...yug aur mumma ko bhi chocolate fla our pasand hai...

Rey:aur papa ko???

Yug(sad):yug ke papa nahi hai...

Rey feeling ach in his heart...ye kya puch liya mene???oh god...

Rey hug him and said:koi baat nahi...aap ka friend hai na...aap mujhe ek promise karoge???

Yug:ha...boliye...

Rey:kya aap roz mere sath khelna chahoge???jese aaj aap ne khela???

Yug(smiling):broke the hug:yee...aap roz mere sath kheloge???

Rey:ha...everyday...

They took icecream con and go back to garden ...they saw jimmy and his father searching for yug...

Yug:ok bye friend ...

Rey:bye yug...

Yug ran to jimmy and then go home ...

Here rey thinking:wow...kitna sweet hai...pata nahi kyu but i love him...

And he go to buy juice...


So guys i stop here...plz like and comment and tell me hows it???



Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗 ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

I AM SPEECHLESS,
WOW, SUPER DUPER AWSUM AS ALWAYS
I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED IT ,GREAT WORK DEAR
👏
😆😆ANGRY BIRD , SENTI BIRD😆 , NAUGHTY BIRD 😆😆,SWEET , CUTE , MATURE ,-TAANI
AND REY MR AKDU AND MR SWEET
VAAH YAARITNE SAARE IDEAS AATE KAHAN SE HAIN 😕???
SO SWEET OF YUG - BOTH SHARON -TAANI - MUMMAS OF YUG 😃😊, SO CUTE ⭐️
👏👏👏 👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏
LONG UPDATE VERY SOON DEAR 😊
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!...it was amazin:))))
Loved it:)
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 🤣 Rey going to buy juice at the store omg I can't stop laughing sorry my sweet Dipu I just had to let that out uff lol.
Now the chapter was pure fun I love it sooo much. Miss angry bird, seni, naughty and mr sweety I love their name. Rey confusion about how many sides Taani has were hilarious lol. Aww he found his future gf/wife cute and he already can't stop staring at her sooo cutie, cutie. Yug is a sweetheart he love his two mom sooo much and Rey loving his future son already is just amazing aww adorable family already. Dipu u really outdone yourself with this chapter is was purely incredible and hilarious. Plz continue whenever u has time.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chinudolly

🤗 ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

I AM SPEECHLESS,
WOW, SUPER DUPER AWSUM AS ALWAYS
I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED IT ,GREAT WORK DEAR
👏
😆😆ANGRY BIRD , SENTI BIRD😆 , NAUGHTY BIRD 😆😆,SWEET , CUTE , MATURE ,-TAANI
AND REY MR AKDU AND MR SWEET
VAAH YAARITNE SAARE IDEAS AATE KAHAN SE HAIN 😕???
SO SWEET OF YUG - BOTH SHARON -TAANI - MUMMAS OF YUG 😃😊, SO CUTE ⭐️
👏👏👏 👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏
LONG UPDATE VERY SOON DEAR 😊

thank u so much dear...love ur sweet comment...ideas to aate rehte hai dear...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iamursforever

Omg!...it was amazin:))))
Loved it:)
Thnkz for the pm:)

Cont. Soon:)

thank u dear...i will try...

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